supershade Posted April 17, 2008 Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 well this is my comic 7SSA for short if you have any questions pm me[spoiler=issues][spoiler=#1]#1 The begining [spoiler=#2]#2 metal takeover [spoiler=#3]#3 pokemon battle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted April 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 come on i know you want to rate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted April 17, 2008 Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 Don't bump before 24 hours. It is prohibited...Anyway it's not that funny...6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted April 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 woops sorry i forgot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 meh............... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 Sonic, it's o.k.but not great, it could have better graphics, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 meh............... .................................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 update #2 #3 soon and - comments dont shake me i continueanyway if you dont like sonic ok i dont care its a just biging not funny yet #3 makes no sense but is funny i gessso plz tell me if i do better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 update #3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Egnio Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 As an ex-sprite comic maker, I feel the urge of pointing what you could improve on it (yes, I've done a bit of everything) - Correct capitalization, punctuation and etc.- Make the speech bubbles outside the panels, so you can have them with a border and without too much white space.- Separate one character's speech bubbles from the other character's, instead of making one really big speech bubble.- If the characters are saying different stuff, make them change their positions. And remember, the other characters should focus on whoever is talking.- On your second comic, first 2 panels, there are many errors of positions. The background changed, but the characters showed no movement at all. Either you used the wrong background, or you didn't give them movement sprites or didn't specify when did they move. ... I'm better when reviewing TERRIBLE sprite comics. This doesn't meet the criteria. But a 5/10 should fit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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