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7 Soul Stones Adventure[sprite comic]


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As an ex-sprite comic maker, I feel the urge of pointing what you could improve on it (yes, I've done a bit of everything)

 

- Correct capitalization, punctuation and etc.

- Make the speech bubbles outside the panels, so you can have them with a border and without too much white space.

- Separate one character's speech bubbles from the other character's, instead of making one really big speech bubble.

- If the characters are saying different stuff, make them change their positions. And remember, the other characters should focus on whoever is talking.

- On your second comic, first 2 panels, there are many errors of positions. The background changed, but the characters showed no movement at all. Either you used the wrong background, or you didn't give them movement sprites or didn't specify when did they move.

 

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I'm better when reviewing TERRIBLE sprite comics. This doesn't meet the criteria. But a 5/10 should fit.

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