Night Posted September 1, 2016 Report Share Posted September 1, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(GigaDrillBreaker) Posted September 1, 2016 Report Share Posted September 1, 2016 I feel this would be better with different dimensions. Just seems like a bit too much of empty space around the bottom. Plus the lighting around her chest draws away from the focal, making said dead space even more prominent. Of course, this goes with my typical disclaimer for tags. I have no idea what I am talking about, so take what I say with a grain of salt. EDIT: Looking at it again, I can see that a line is drawn from the bottom right leaf to the focal, with said light supporting it. That's actually pretty funking cool. Maybe just add a tiny bit more noise around the bottom left so it doesn't feel as empty? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted September 4, 2016 Report Share Posted September 4, 2016 I honestly really like the negative space at the bottom. I feel like the 97F and the white lines are too stark for the image. They look nice, but they distract from the focal a bit too much, IMO. All in all though, a beautiful piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ire Posted September 4, 2016 Report Share Posted September 4, 2016 I love the uneasy feeling, with "the 97°F and the white lines [...] because they distract from the focal", and that "empty space around the bottom. Plus the lighting around her chest draws away from the focal, making said dead space even more prominent."To add such a scale was truly THE good idea that would work with all these things... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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