Burning Abyss

[Cool Girl]

So, I made a burning abyss for the league I'll be in and I'm looking for feedback 'cause I'm not very good at deck building at all. So, here goes

 

Monsters (20)

X1 Alich, Malebrance of the Burning Abyss

X1 Barbar, Malebrance of the Burning Abyss

x1 Calcab, Malebrance of the Burning Abyss

X2 Cir, Malebrance of the Burning Abyss

X3 Farfa, Malebrance of the Burning Abyss

X1 Graff, Malebrance of the Burning Abyss

x2 Libic, Malebrance of the Burning Abyss

X1 Maxx "C"

x1 Rubic, Malebrance of the Burning Abyss

X3 Scarm, Malebrance Of The Burning Abyss

X1 Tour Guide from the Underworld

X3 Malacoda, Netherlord of the Burning Abyss

 

Spells (9)

X1 Foolish Burial

X1 Raigeki

X3 Twin Twister

X2 The Terminus Of The Burning Abyss

X2 Good & Evil In The Burning Abyss

 

Traps (11)

X2 Anti-Spell Fragance

X1 Breakthrough Skill

X3 Solemn Notice

X1 Solemn Warning

X2 The Traveler and the Burning Abyss

X2 Fire Lake of the Burning Abyss

 

Extra Deck (9)

X2 Dante, Pilgrim of the Bruning Abyss

X1 Virgil Rock Star of the Burning Abyss

X3 Beatrice, Lady Of the Eternal

X3 Dante, Traveler of the Burning Abyss

 

Well, that's my deck. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

 

[jabber2033]

A few issues:

 

First, max out your Extra Deck. Having just BA monsters can be a hinderance at times, since some, like Nightmare Shark, can win games.

 

Secondly, Fiendish Rhino Warrior is a must at 3.

 

Additionally, more Veiler/Maxx "C" might not hurt either.  I'd drop probably a Malacoda or two for 1-2 more Maxx "C"s, since the extra draws off it are always good.  Or you could use Veiler or "C" depending on your matchups.  Rule of thumb: if you main either Maxx "C" or Effect Veiler, side the other.

 

And consider Cagna as a BA monster.  It mills BA Spell/Traps, so you can Foolish or Dante it, then get Good & Evil or Terminus in Grave as well.

 

Changes I'd make:

 

-1 Alich

-2 Malacoda

-1 Terminus

-1 Fire Lake

 

+3 Fiendish Rhino Warrior

+1 Maxx "C"

+1 Cagna (To mill those BA spells)

 

To max out the Extra Deck to 15 cards, I'd add:

 

+1 Nightmare Shark

+1 Acid Golem

+1 Fortune Tune

+1 Zenmaines

+1 Leviathan Dragon

+1 Utopic Future

 

That's a good start, but there might be better R3s than what I suggested.