[MtG]Another Innstrad Set {WIP} (probably broken cards; advice appreciated)

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I'm not the greatest at judging card powers, so a few of these are probably more broken than I already think they are, but I'm not sure how to fix them while still keeping the general theme.

I have no clue how many cards I am actually going to make for this, but right now I have 11 planned (not counting flips) (room for 12).

 

[spoiler Eldrazi Stuff]

Sorin, Raised by Emrakul  
{3}{w}{b}
Plainswalker - Sorin [m]
[+1] Destroy target non- Eldrazi creature.
[-3] Target opponent loses 1 life for each Eldrazi Creature you control, and you gain 1 life for each Eldrazi Creature you control.
[-9] You get an emblem with "Eldrazi Creatures you control get +3/-2 and have indestructible and flying".
[4]
001/017 M
FIN

Corrupt Overseer
{5}{w}
Creature - Angel Horror [r]
Flying
As long as you control an Eldrazi Creature, Corrupt Overseer has hexproof and indestructible.
At the beginning of your upkeep, if you control 2 or more Eldrazi Creatures, transform Corrupt
Overseer.                                                                                 (5/5>)
<i>Even the most faithful can be twisted to Emrakul's will.</i>
4/4
002/017 R
FIN

Overseer of Emrakul
Creature - Eldrazi Angel [r]
Hexproof
Incurable <i>(This permanent can't be exiled, returned to its owner's hand, or put into a library from the battlefield.)</i>
Eldrazi creatures you control have hexproof and incurable; and cannot lose hexproof or incurable.
<i>From mortal fear, immortality springs.</i>
5/5
002/017 R
FIN

Shatter the Moon
{3}{b}
Sorcery
Destroy target enchantment.
003/017 U
FIN

Emrakul, Scourge of the Aeons
{20}
Legendary Creature - Eldrazi [m]
Split Second, flying, trample, incurable, protection from spells
When you cast Emrakul, take an extra turn after this one.
<i>A web more tangled than the strings of fate</i>
15/15
004/017 M
FIN

Herald of Ascension
{3}{w}{w}
Creature - Angel Horror
Flying
Whenever you cast an Eldrazi Creature, or transform a creature; put a +1/+1 counter
on Herald of Ascension.
At the beginning of the end step, if there are three or more +1/+1 counters on Herald
of Ascension, and you both own and control it and a creature named Horrid Chorus,
meld them into Herald of the Horrid Chorus.
4/4
005/017 U
FIN

Horrid Chorus
{2}{r}{g}
Creature - Wolf Horror [r]
Menace
Eldrazi Creatures you control get +2/+1.
Non- Eldrazi Werewolf creatures that other players' control cannot transform.
<i>(Melds with Herald of Ascension)</i>
3/2
006/017 R
FIN

Herald of the Horrid Chorus
Creature - Eldrazi Angel [r]
Flying, menace
Eldrazi Creatures you control get +3/+2.
Creatures your opponents' control cannot meld or transform.
At the begin of your upkeep, put a 3/2 Eldrazi Horror Creature token
onto the battlefield under your control.
7/6
006/017 R
FIN

Malignus Twisted
{4}{r}{r}
Creature - Elemental Horror [m]
Menace
Malignus Twisted's toughness is equal to half your life total, rounded
up.
Malignus Twisted's gets +1/+0 for each Eldrazi creature you control.
Damage that would be dealt by Malignus Twisted cannot be prevented.
0/*
007/017 R
FIN

Slayer of the Sinful
{4}{w}{w}
Creature - Human Horror
When Slayer of the Sinful enters the battlefield, you may destroy target non- Eldrazi
Creature; if you do, transform Slayer of the Sinful.
                                                                                   (5/3>)
<i>All that is not we'mrakul is sin; all that is sin shall be absolved through death</i>
3/2
008/017 U
FIN

Purifier of the Damned
Creature - Eldrazi Horror
When this creature transforms into Purifier of the Damned, exile all non- Eldrazi cards
in target player's graveyard. That player sacrifices a number of permanents he or she controls
equal to the number of permanents exiled this way.
5/3
008/017 U
FIN

Emrakul's Slaver
{4}{b}{b}
Creature - Eldrazi Zombie [r]
Whenever a creature dealt damage by Emrakul's Slaver this turn dies, return it to the battlefield
under your control. That creature is an Eldrazi in addition to its other types.
4/5
009/017 R
FIN

Twisted Visage
{2}{b}{r}
Sorcery
Put a token onto the battlefield that's a copy of target creature you don't control, except it is an Eldrazi Horror
in addition to it's other types.
010/017 U
FIN

Bloodline Purifier
{3}{b}{b}{b}
Creature - Vampire Horror [r]
During the beginning of each player's upkeep; if an opponent controls a creature that shares a name with another
creature on the battlefield, transform Bloodline Purifier.
                                                                                                  (8/9>)
6/5
011/017 R
FIN

Defiler of Lineages
Creature - Eldrazi Vampire [r]
Each of your opponents cannot cast creatures that share a creature type with other creatures that he or she
controls.
Each of your opponents cannot cast spells of the same card type as the top card of his or her graveyard.
At the beginning of each of your opponent's upkeep steps, the player whose turn it is sacrifices a permanent
he or she controls that shares a card type with any other cards he or she controls.
8/9
011/017 R
FIN

Maddening Presence
{3}{r}{g} [c]
Instant
Any combat damage dealt this turn is also dealt to target creature.
<i>He had to stop the whispers in his head, even at the cost of his own life.</i>
013/017 C
FIN

Breaker of Wills
{5}{u}{u} [m]
Creature - Human Horror
{t}: Gain control of target creature with power or toughness less than the number of Eldrazi and Horrors
you control. <i>(Count each creature you control only once)</i>

<i>(Melds with Unholy Justiciar)</i>
5/3
015/017 M
FIN

 

 

 

So any advice would be lovely. (also, yay references). A better name for Sorin would be nice too

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bump. + edits.

Some gaps exist on purpose.

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