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Naruto Set (not finished)


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Here are some Naruto cards. I am in a hurry so I'll post some comments later. Along with putting up some more cards. But in the mean time, tell me what you think.

 

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Open up the spoiler to see the effect of this card if you can't read it.

[spoiler=The Effect for Rookie Leaf Ninja, Naruto Uzumaki]Control of this card cannot switch. This monster is not effected by the effects of Counter Traps during the Battle Phase. As long as this monster remains face-up on the field, increase the Atk and Def of all face-up monsters on your side the field by 300 (except for this card). Whenever this monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, place a Training Counter on this monster (max. 2). For every Training Counter on this monster, increase this monsters Atk. by 300. During the End Phase, if this monster has 2 Training Counters on it, you may send this monster to the Graveyard to Special Summon one 'Leaf Ninja, Naruto Uzumaki.'

 

 

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[spoiler=The Effect for Leaf Ninja, Narto Uzumaki]Control of this card cannot switch. This monster is not effected by the effects of Counter Trap cards. As long as this monster remains face-up on the field, increase the Atk and Def of all face-up monsters on your side the field by 300 (except for this card). Whenever this monster destroys a monster who's Level is higher than this monster, place one Training Counter on this monster (max. 2). Increase this monster Atk. by 400 for every Training Counter on this card. During the End Phase, if this monster has 2 Training Counters on it, you may send this monster to the Graveyard to Special Summon one 'Hokage, Naruto Uzumaki.'

 

 

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My Review:

 

Rookie Leaf Ninja Naruto

 

-The name needs to be shortened to like "Rookie, Naruto Uzumaki" without the quotes

-Attribute is fine

-The pic is great since it isn't blurry

-The effect is where the problem is. It's just too long. Plain and simple. Shorten it please.

-The atk and def are fine

 

Leaf Ninja, Naruto Uzumaki

 

-The name should be shortened to "Ninja, Naruto Uzumaki"

-Attribute is fine

-The pic is okay, but I wish there was more color to it

-The effect is just like your first card. It's too long.

-The atk and def are fine

 

Hokage, Naruto Uzumaki

 

-The name is finally shortened

-The attribute is fine

-The pic is cool and probably the best one in the set

-The effect is just so frigin long

-The atk and def are perfect for it's level

 

 

Overall:

 

You just need to work on shortening the effects because they are just too long. Cut down the names a little on the first two cards. The pic on Leaf Ninja, Naruto Uzumaki could get more color. You can find more pics on Photobucket. Everything else looked pretty good.

 

My Score:

 

7.5/10

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