My 1st Archetype: Olympians

[cHo ViiRuuS]

Well I've created so Many Yu-Gi-Oh cards since 2012 and never bothered putting them in here (Over 450 cards so far), this is My first time posting an Archetype in here, Tell me what you think about it and can it actually be viable (Note them out of 10 if possible) and I hope you like it

 

1-Olympians: Obviously based on Ancient Greek Deities, the Artwork is from the God of War games  and Deviantart, Their effects are based on Self-milling for various effects.

There are: 4 Synchro monsters, 3 Xyz monsters, 10 Effect monsters, 8 Spells and 5 Traps so it is a pretty Big Archetype. Basically it can be divided into 3 Sub-Archetypes:

 

Royalty: Have Self Milling effects

Army: Have various Swarm effects

Relics: Have different effects and must control an "Olympian" monster to play them.

 

[spoiler=Olympian High King Zeus:]

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1 Tuner Synchro + 1 or more non-Tuner "Olympian" monsters

Other "Olympian" monsters cannot be Targeted by card effects other than their own as long as this card remains face-up on the field, This card can not declare an attack if you control no other "Olympian" monsters, Once per turn you can shuffle a number of cards (max: 4) from your Graveyard into your Deck up to the number of "Olympian" monsters you control other than this card to activate the following effects depending on the number of cards returned by this effect.

-1: All your opponent's monsters lose ATK equal to 100*their Level or Rank until the End turn.

-2: Your opponent can not activate Trap cards during this turn's Battle phase.

-3: Your opponent's monsters cannot declare an attack next turn.

-4: Target 1 "Olympian" monster you control other than this card, destroy all monsters on the field that have lower ATK than that monster except for "Olympian" monsters.

[spoiler=Olympian King Hades:]

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1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Olympian" monsters

Once per turn you can send the Top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on their types.

-Both monster cards: Destroy one monster your opponent controls.

-Both spell and/or trap cards: Destroy one Spell or Trap cards your opponent controls.

-Mixed cards: This card can not declare an attack next turn.

[spoiler=Olympian King Poseidon:]

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1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Olympian" monsters

Once per turn you can send the Top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on their types.

-Both monster cards: Special summon one monster from your Hand.

-Both spell and/or trap cards: Add 1 Spell or Trap card from your Deck to your Hand.

-Mixed cards: This card can not activate its Effect next turn.

[spoiler=Olympian Sentinel:]

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"Olympian Sentry" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is destroyed by Battle and sent to the Graveyard Special Summon one of the Synchro Material monsters used for its summon from your Graveyard (if any).

[spoiler=Olympian Queen Hera:]

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3 Level 3 monsters

As long as this card has any Xyz Material neither player can Special summon monsters from the Extra deck except for "Olympian" monsters. Once per turn you can send the Top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on their types:

-Both monster cards: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to Special Summon 1 monster from either Graveyard to your side of the field but its effects are negated.

-Both spell and/or trap cards: Target 1 monster in either Graveyard and attach it to an Xyz monster you control as Xyz Material.

-Mixed Types: Detach all Xyz Materials from this card.

[spoiler=Olympian Princess Athena:]

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2 Level 3 "Olympian" monsters

Once per turn you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on its type:

-Monster card: your monsters cannot be destroyed by Battle this turn.

-Spell or Trap card: your monsters cannot be destroyed or targeted by Spell and trap card effects this turn. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 monster your opponent controls and change its Battle position.

[spoiler=Number 75: Olympian Prince Ares:]

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3 Level 4 Warrior-Type monsters

Once per turn you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on its type:

-Monster card: Return 1 Banished monster to its Graveyard.

-Spell or Trap card: Banish 1 monster from either Graveyards.

Once per turn you can detach either 1 Xyz Material from this card to Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard that has been returned to the Graveyard by this card's effect or 2 Xyz Materials to Special Summon 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard to your side of the field that has been returned to the Graveyard by this card's effect.

[spoiler=Kratos, Ghost of Olympus:]

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When this card is on the field it's name is also treated as "Olympian", if an Xyz or Synchro "Olympian" monster has been destroyed, you can Special Summon this card from your Hand or Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=Olympian Prince Helios:]

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Once per turn you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on its type.

-Monster card: Special summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your Graveyard, its effect is negated and it is destroyed during the End phase of that turn.

-Spell or Trap card: Banish 1 monster from your Opponent's Graveyard, If your opponent has no monsters in their Graveyard they must send the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard.

[spoiler=Olympian Prince Hermes:]

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Once per turn you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on its type.

-Monster card: Gain Life Points equal to 200*the level of that monster.

-Spell or Trap card: Target one face-up monster on the field other than this card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to 200*the level of that monster.

[spoiler=Olympian Princess Artemis:]

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Once per turn you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on its type:

-Monster card: Target 1 Monster card in your Graveyard and shuffle it into the Deck.

-Spell or Trap card: Target 1 Spell or Trap card in your Graveyard and shuffle it into the Deck.

[spoiler=Olympian Princess Aphrodite:]

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Once per turn you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on its type:

-Monster card: Take control of 1 of your opponent's monsters that has the lowest ATK.

-Spell or Trap card: Target 1 of your opponent's face-down spell or trap cards and switch it to your side.

(This change remains as long as this card is face-up on the field. When this card leaves the field return control of those cards to your opponent). If your opponent controls no monsters and/or has no face-down spell or trap cards they must send the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard.

[spoiler=Olympian Blacksmith Hephaestus:]

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Once per turn you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard and activate the following effects depending on its type.

-Monster card: add one "Olympian" monster from you Deck to your Hand.

-Spell or Trap card: add one "Olympian Relic" from your Deck to your Hand.

[spoiler=Olympian Guardian:]

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During your Standby Phase if this card is in Your Hand and you control 2 or more level 3 or lower "Olympian" monsters you can Special Summon it Olympian" monsters can not be destroyed by Battle as long as this card remains face-up on the field.

[spoiler=Olympian Fiend:]

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If you control an Xyz or Synchro "Olympian" monster you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard, If it is Summoned this way, Banish it when it leaves the field.

 

[spoiler=Olympian Sentry:]

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When this card is Special Summoned you can Add one Level 3 or lower monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your Hand.

[spoiler=Olympian Archer:]

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When this card is Normal or Flip Summoned you can Special Summon one Tuner monster from your Hand.

 

[cHo ViiRuuS]

 Spells and Traps:

 

[spoiler=Mount Olympus:]

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Each time a card(s) is sent directly from your Deck to the Graveyard put 1 Olympus Counter on this card. Once per turn you can Remove a number of Olympus Counters (max: 4) from this card to activate the following effects:

-1 Counter: "Olympian" monsters you control gain 200 ATK and DEF until the End turn.

-2 Counters: Your opponent cannot activate Trap cards in this turn's Battle phase.

-3 Counters: "Olympian" monsters cannot be destroyed by Battle this turn.

-4 Counters: Choose 1 "Olympian" monster you control, it can attack your opponent directly this turn.

If this card would be destroyed by a card effect remove all Olympus Counters from it instead.

[spoiler=Blade of Olympus:]

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Equip only to a level 8 or Higher Synchro "Olympian" monster, The equipped monster loses 400 ATK and DEF, Once per turn you can send a number of cards (max, 3) from the Top of your Deck to the Graveyard to destroy an equal number of cards on the field, The equipped monster can't declare an attack the turn you activate this effect, When this card leaves the field, you can Banish it and both you and your opponent Draw 1 card.

[spoiler=Bell of the Underworld:]

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When an "Olympian" monster is destroyed by Battle destroy the monster that destroyed it.

Your opponent can negate this effect by Sending all cards in their Hand to the Graveyard.

[spoiler=Vortex of Destruction:]

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Discard 1 "Kratos, Ghost of Olympus", Destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field.

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Zeus's Eagle:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, Return a number of cards from your Graveyard to the Top of your Deck in a random order equal to the number of Olympus counters on the field. You can activate only 1 "Olympian Relic - Zeus's Eagle" per turn.

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Hermes's Coin:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, Once per turn Flip a coin and call it, If you called it right, Gain 500 Life Points, and if you called it wrong, your opponent gains 500 Life Points. There can only be 1 "Olympian Relic - Hermes's Coin" on your side of the field.

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Aphrodite's Garter:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, Send the Top 2 cards from your Deck and take control of any monster on your opponent's side of the field, If this card is destroyed destroy that monster too, and both players take damage equal to Half its original ATK. There can only be 1 "Olympian Relic - Aphrodite's Garter" on your side of the field.

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Hephaestus's Ring:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, When the equipped monster destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard you can target 1 Equip spell card in your deck or Graveyard except for "Olympian Relic - Hephaestus' Ring", and add it to your Hand, There can only be 1 "Olympian Relic - Hephaestus' Ring" on your side of the field.

 

[spoiler=Chain of Balance:]

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Once per turn, You can activate one of the following effects:

-Put 1 Olympus counter on this card.

-Remove 2 Olympus counters from anywhere on the field to Draw 1 card.

If this card is destroyed, move all Olympus counters that were on it on another card that you can put counters on.

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Hades's Helm:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, This card can be activated when an opponent's monster declares an attack, That attack is negated and then equip this card to that monster, Its ATK becomes 0 and it can not attack or change its Battle position. You can activate 1 "Olympian Relic - Hades's Helm" per turn.

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Poseidon's Conch Shell:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, When an opponent's monster declares an attack, choose an "Olympian" monster you control and switch the attack to it, Your opponent must continue the attack. You can activate only 1 "Olympian Relic - Poseidon's Conch Shell" per turn.

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Hera's Chalice:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, Target a number of monster cards in your Graveyard equal to the number of Xyz monsters you control, Attach 1 of those monsters in your Graveyard to each Xyz monster as Xyz Material. You can activate only 1 "Olympian Relic - Hera's Chalice" per turn.

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Helios's Shield:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, When an effect monster's effect is activated that targets a monster(s) you control, Negate it and destroy that card. You can activate only 1 "Olympian Relic - Helios's Shield" per turn.

[cHo ViiRuuS]

Bumping with more Support (Olympian Champions)

 

 

[spoiler=Olympian Champion Hercules:]

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If you control another "Olympian" monster this card gains 300 ATK, Once per turn when this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard while equipped with an Equip spell card you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard to attack once again.

 

[spoiler=Olympian Champion Achilles:]

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If you control another "Olympian" monster, no "Olympian" monster can be chosen as an attack target except for this card, Once per turn you can send the Top card from your deck to the Graveyard to return one face-up monster that has an ATK lower than this card's DEF to its owner's Hand.

 

[spoiler=Olympian Champion Theseus:]

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If you control another "Olympian" monster, up to twice per turn, if this card would be destroyed by Battle it's not, When this card destroys a monster while it's equipped with an Equip spell card, you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard to Banish that monster.

 

[spoiler=Olympian Champion Perseus:]

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If you control another "Olympian" monster this card cannot be chosen as an attack target. Once per turn you can send the Top card from your Deck to the Graveyard to activate the following effect:

-Until the End phase of that turn, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects.

 

[spoiler=Olympian Relic - Hercules' Shoulder Guard:]

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This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Olympian" monster, This card can not be equipped to an Xyz or Synchro monster, The equipped monster gains ATK and DEF equal to 100* its level and once per turn it can't be destroyed by battle. There can only be 1 "Olympian Relic - Hercules's Shoulder Guard" on your side of the field.

 

[spoiler=Champion's Wrath:]

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When your opponent's monster declares an attack, you can Special Summon an "Olympian Champion" monster from your hand and switch that attack to it.

 

 

I would really appreciate any feedback and rating from you guys and Thank you is advance !

[Number IV]

Overall, your OCG and PSCT need too much work for me to detail here.

 

Monsters:

-Hades & Posiedon have the same effects, level and summoning conditions, but a 1200 ATK difference? Nerf Hades or boot Poseidon, and change the effects.

-Hera: Change to 2 Level 3 Monsters if your going to keep that SS restriction

 

Spell:

-Vortex of Olympus: I would change to "Olympian" instead of "Kratos", otherwise, I can't see very many people run it.

 

This is all I have so far, in order to do more, the OCG/PSCT has to be re-written

[cHo ViiRuuS]

Overall, your OCG and PSCT need too much work for me to detail here.

 

Monsters:

-Hades & Posiedon have the same effects, level and summoning conditions, but a 1200 ATK difference? Nerf Hades or boot Poseidon, and change the effects.

-Hera: Change to 2 Level 3 Monsters if your going to keep that SS restriction

 

Spell:

-Vortex of Olympus: I would change to "Olympian" instead of "Kratos", otherwise, I can't see very many people run it.

 

This is all I have so far, in order to do more, the OCG/PSCT has to be re-written

Thank you for replying

-Poseidon is more defensive, ATK/DEF total they both have 5100

-if this Hera was 2 Lavel 3 monsters, I thought she would've been a little too OP

-I understand about Vortex but it's basically a gimmicky card.

 

-Mind explaining about the OCG/PSCT more ??

[Number IV]

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/322020-ocgpsct-thread-writing-your-card-properly/