Guest JoshIcy Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 [align=center]Most of my Itachi cards boiled in hot gas, they stunk.... but i trust this one will be better. I plan to make 2 supporting cards to help this one along, in addition to the recent new info revealed in the manga. For now enjoy the first card, Itachi. [/align] this is also my first holo, done by myself...so bear with that please... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkhound Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 Ok well Im bad with grammer but there doesnt seem to be any mistakes. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 Ok well Im bad with grammer but there doesnt seem to be any mistakes. 8/10 we noticed your bad with Grammar,anyway nice card, needs pic credit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 Ok well Im bad with grammer but there doesnt seem to be any mistakes. 8/10 we noticed your bad with Grammar' date='anyway nice card, needs pic credit[/quote'] its got, its a photobucket grab... and sadly, i forgot the url owner.... so im gonna have to remember next time >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spindori Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 Ok well Im bad with grammer but there doesnt seem to be any mistakes. 8/10 we noticed your bad with Grammar' date='anyway nice card, needs pic credit[/quote'] its got, its a photobucket grab... and sadly, i forgot the url owner.... so im gonna have to remember next time >.>http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/?media=http%3A%2F%2Fi269.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fjj58%2Fzain_3k%2Fnaruto%2Fsasuke_itachi.jpg&searchTerm=itachi&pageOffset=1 There you go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 thanks >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 nice card icyblue ,love the holo effectbut i think its kinda overpowerd ,8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 nice card icyblue ' date='love the holo effectbut i think its kinda overpowerd ,8/10[/quote'] getting the effect right for this card and still be a naruto theme was a royal pain... so thats why its overpowered, i didnt wanna stress balance this time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 Great card. Great effort. ;)The holo ruins the image though. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 meh, it added the drizzle effect that i wanted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkpkm Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 I think this card great! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikaeo Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 wow and it kinda does follow what has recently happened in the manga i love the lifepoint gain part of it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spindori Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 I have a few suggestions for a revised effect text. The card's current print:When this card is selected as an attack target, you may tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. If you do, remove this card from play until the End Phase of this turn and Special Summon 1 "Genjutsu Clone- Itachi" Token, (Aqua-Type/WATER/Level 6/ATK 2100/DEF 2000). Whenever a "Genjutsu Clone- Itachi" Token is removed from the field, increase the Life Points of both players by 1000 times the number of turns it has been face-up on the field. My suggestion:When this card is selected as an attack target, you may tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. If you do, remove this card from play until the next End Phase, and Special Summon 1 "Genjutsu Clone- Itachi" Token (Aqua-Type/WATER/Level 6/ATK 2100/DEF 2000) on your side of the field. Whenever a "Genjutsu Clone- Itachi" Token is removed from the field, increase both players' Life Points by 1000 times the number of turns it has been face-up on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 that was a suggestion, not a correction.... if you dont specify a position, the assumption is that you get to choose.next time pm me something like that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 Slightly overpowered but wouldn't say it's the best Itachi, and I don't believe mine "stunk". >> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 lol i know... and for me, itachi is much less of an uchiha than the rest.... his focus is primarily genjutsu, despite using his sharingan for his attacks; i dont believe the sharingan should be part of his general effect..... so as a result, his card for me is always hard. and its likely i will keep repeating itachi until it get it right >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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