Dark Souls Cards

[Purifiedsam]

I think it would be cool to incorporate darksouls into Yugioh. I played around with a few cards and read about RC. Tell me what you think and I'm open to ideas. 

[Htamret]

The card flavor text (A Demon that guards etc.) shouldn't be on here, unless it's a normal monster, in which case it can't have an effect or be a Ritual monster. You might also want to have a Ritual Spell card to Summon it and text along the lines of "This card can only be Ritual Summoned with [Ritual Card Name]". The Ritual Spell would have the "To summon this demon" text, but you don't HAVE to have a Ritual Spell if you don't want to. You might also want to change the card's type from "Demon" to "Fiend", which is an actual card type, but since this is in Experimental you don't really have to. As for the effect, it seems pretty good. There are also a few issues with the OCG (card grammar), but I don't trust myself enough to give you accurate corrections on that, sorry (:

 

For your first card it's not bad, most people make things that are horribly overpowered, and this seems pretty balanced. I haven't seen any Dark Souls cards in here, so you're in uncharted territory. It would be cool to see some more. Like I said, aside from some newbie mistakes this card has no problems.

 

Also, sorry if this seems like I'm tearing it apart, I'm only doing it because I really like the idea and I want to see it be the best it can possibly be. Good luck on card making by the way! Hope you have fun on YCM c:

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

(This card WAS in Advanced at time of posting, but got moved due to the Fake Type.)

 

For technical reasons, the Japanese name for Fiend does translate to "Demon" (but you know that TCG changes that due to religious/other reasons). But for design purposes, this should really be an Effect Monster with the conditions, but until you show us these Dark Souls cards, there isn't much I can really tell you besides the basics.

 

I'll do a rough OCG fix (barring the flavor text).

 

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be Special Summoned from your hand while you control 3 "Hollow Soldier" monsters in Attack Position, "Hollow Soldier" monsters gain 200 ATK and DEF.

 

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We are beyond the era of simple power boosting, and 200 ATK/DEF is really not a lot to work with; especially given the conditions for even summoning this in the first place.