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Cherry Heart [Quest-based RP] Always Accepting

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Cosmo. Newbie

Cosmo.

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Villain app sort of maybe?


 


[spoiler=The Witch | Highly WIP]


"I shall be the instrument of my own deliverance!"


Name: Alraune


Age: 22 (locked at this age)


Gender: Female


[spoiler=Appearance]


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Alraune stands at about 1.75 meters


[spoiler=Personality]


[spoiler=Biography]


[spoiler=Abilities]

  • Eldritch Arts:
    • Her main form of magic, it consists of a combination of black forbidden magic and enchanted geometries, simply by altering the geometry and slightly the pronunciation of the spell, she's able to change the effect of the spell. She mainly uses poison spells. Other types of spells involve simple black magic.
      • "-na" If the spell ends like this it means that it's casted like normal, which means it's casted as a ball of energy
      • "-da" If the spell ends like this, it means that it's in an AoE state, meaning that instead of being a projectile it will create a lasting area of effect on the ground
      • "-pa" This turns the spell into a solid state and it will behave like a solid object with the properties of the casted spell


  • Covenant with Life:
    • This ability of hers was casted before her actual death, she now is in fact bound to the doll she always carries around and she will always resurrect herself unless the doll is destroyed.

  • Cocoon of Hopelessness:
    • This ability is used by her as a last resource and allows her to pick a target in the area who doesn't possess magical powers and use them as a energy source for a shield that protects Alraune, this means that the only way to break the shield is to kill the person or to find a way to turn them unaffected by the spell.

 


 

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Kyng Newbie

Kyng

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Due to IRL complications, Aix will be hindered and consequentially I shall be reviewing applications and getting this RP in the air.

 

With this said, application reviews are currently under way. If your application is finished, please confirm this with a post following this, including a link to your application.

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Due to IRL complications, Aix will be hindered and consequentially I shall be reviewing applications and getting this RP in the air.

 

With this said, application reviews are currently under way. If your application is finished, please post here including a link to your application.

 

WAIT! Kyng? You're for hire? How much! I'LL DOUBLE AIX'S OFFER!

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Maeriberii Haan

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[spoiler=World’s End Shieldmaiden (WIP)]

 

“Even shadow needs its own light to exist.”

 

 

“Revolution will always come with a price.”

 

Name: Brynhildr Austerre

Age: 36

Gender: Female

Race: Human

[spoiler=Appearance]

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At 185 centimeters tall, Brynhildr is quite tall for a female human, but not too extraordinarily so. Her body is quite toned and refined due to her years of being one of the Kingdom of Fraxinus’ royal knights. Her armor usually did the job of hiding her actual figure from her allies and enemies alike, creating an image of androgyny that serves her better than showing her feminine side during such vital moments.

[spoiler=Personality]

A quiet, nurturing motherly figure. Brynhildr has a caring and attentive personality, and is quite soft-spoken, quite a contrast to her fellow knights. She is the type that will look out to her subordinates and allies, and will make sure that they’re always in a favorable condition. Doesn’t like unnecessary bloodshed or cruelty, both it and her caring tendencies is what made her choose to act more in the background.

 

Though, the above would usually make people question why she even chose to be in such a guild. In truth, despite not necessarily agreeing with the method used by the guild and the two leading figures, Bryn was very convinced about the guild’s capability to topple the corrupt regime and the organization behind it. Behind that silky kindness is the tempered resolve of a knight. She had made her choice on what kind of ideal will she support, and she is determined to make that ideal into reality. No matter what kind of sacrifices are necessary in order to achieve it.

 

Being mostly responsible on ensuring that the guild’s activities run smoothly, her approach is quite methodical. Mostly kind and considerate, but she run the activities like a business, tact and merciless. She’s above firing or outright murdering subordinates for repeated failures, but she will just find another usage for them, even if that usage is risky or undignified. Her subordinates are meaningful to her with the value each of them brings for her. And, even her close allies are mostly just seen as important as a means towards an end. As it has been mentioned, in a personal level she is not actually in much agreement with the guild and most of the other knights, but that doesn’t matter. She has realized that to achieve the wish she wanted, she needed to discard that personal feelings away.

[spoiler=Biography (WIP)]

Brynhildr was originally an esteemed, loyal knight of the Kingdom of Fraxinus, known for her stern beauty and might on the battlefield.

[spoiler=Abilities]

 

  • Sigil Gate: Her primary form of magic. Utilizes magic circles of varying sizes that can transport matter with thought as mainly a defensive and support tool. In battles, she usually has two magic circles with maximum of 1m radius to shield her and her allies from projectiles, though she can also use these to throw away her opponents, but due to the necessary magic to operate such a portable circle, she can only teleport them into random position in 100 m radius away from her. Alternatively, she can also connect the two circles so that one attack will come out of the other.
    • Crossroad Guardian: Basically the more sophisticated use of the above. Requires 30 minutes of setup, but this practically allows her to create a big portal that lasts for up to 15 minutes that can lead to any places that she or her fellow knights have visited. This can even transport small armies hundreds of kilometers away.
  • Sigrdrífa: Her gauntlets. Unique treasure of her family that can assume many different forms in combat, transforming according to the situation.
    • Slash Force: The gauntlet turns into a pair of longswords that can be wrist-mounted, or wielded normally.
    • Pierce Force: Turns into a pair of crossbows that fire off arrows. Can either fire magical arrows, or normal ones that can be loaded beforehand inside of the gauntlet.
    • Rabid Force: Turns into a pair of claws. The default form of the gauntlet as a weapon.
    • Blunt Force: The default form. Hid the blades in order for Brynhildr to perform powerful blunt strikes.
    • Restraint Force: Turns into chains that she can control physically or with her mind.
    • Cannon Force: Turns into a pair of magically-powered arm-cannons. More powerful than Pierce Force, but eats a lot more mana and has shorter range.
    • Siege Force: Turns into a pair of pile bunkers normally, but at this form, she can merge the pair into one and temporarily creates a weapon that’s designed to topple down fortifications with ease.
  • Multi-weapon mastery: A necessity to utilize Sigrdrífa to its fullest potential. She can pick up and use many kind of different weapons without issues. While she’s a master of none in regards to weapons, still coming short of being better at them than the other knights, the fact she can change her strategy mid-combat with utmost ease makes her a very dangerous opponent to face, earning her the position she had within the organization with ease.
  • Enhanced Speed and Strength: Of course. Further imbued with magic to reach a level above humans.
  • Riding and Beast-taming; A natural skill, this allows her to bond and fight alongside Garmr really well.

[spoiler=Miscellaneous]

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Kyng Newbie

Kyng

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These reviews ere looking for discrepancies for acceptability. If you want more in depth reviews with pros and cons let me know, I guess. With this said:

Nai, in a PvP context Angela's invisibility could be cause for concern, however I doubt that situation will arise often. Otherwise, your apps are acceptable.

Yui #2, your app is acceptable.

Yui Prime, your app, I feel, is actually unacceptable. Her reanimation is fine, but other than her feline capabilities they lack the power curve that exists in the current applications. Consider bumping up her offensive capabilities, as in a corpse-less scenario she might end up being useless.

Next Tuesday, your app is unacceptable. Your explanation of what magic he uses is of insufficient quality and detail. You may use the video link to supplement it, certainly, however you should describe your magic's capabilities in detail regardless. See this done and your application can be re-evaluated.

cardgameking, while your character's lack of specialization in magic is acceptable it might be problematic for him in the future. Something to consider.

Cow, your minotaur's flute magic would be fine, but for a lack of detail. Who it targets, what effects it has. Leaving it as generic as you've done so could give it far too much leeway and it thus needs to be detailed to be acceptable. Kasayee is acceptable.

Thar, remove the WIP tag. Otherwise, Drown is completely unacceptable. It is a signature ability that instantly kills anyone who breaths. In addition to this, evaporate and solidify would surely kill the slime as opposed to be an ability choice? In essence, you need to rethink your abilities, and better define her physiology, because she needs weaknesses and limitations.

Mako, your Ursine and Tracy are accepted, assuming neither are Cherry Heart members, correct? Tracy is somewhat weak, something to consider.

Chaos, I've combed through your app an ungoldly number of times. Mention the secret art as a future ability, then he's accepted.

Muddy, Momma is acceptable. Kirby, I'm unsure. Limit his ability to use this magic when he is using a form - as opposed to swallow fire, become fire, swallow earth, become fire+earth, etc - and it'll become acceptable. With abilities as strong as these you cannot be generic about its description. Detail is needed. This is also the case with Kenpachi - his lockdown's cost, is it a one-time charge of blood, is it continual? How much blood does he have? How much times does an amount of blood give him?
 

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Mako, your Ursine and Tracy are accepted, assuming neither are Cherry Heart members, correct? Tracy is somewhat weak, something to consider.

 

Correct; neither are Cherry Hearts. I won't rule out the possibility for the future, but we'll cross that bridge when we get to it. Also, Tracy is indeed weak. That is the point.

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Hyde, your applications are acceptable.

 

Cow, apologies, you are correct. The random nature of the effect removes its potential to cheese it, and thus is acceptable.

Oh I didn't expect that, thanks XD

 

 

By the way something I do feel like expanding upon just in case. For everyone, so they know where it stands.

Tegur's strength is immense compared to regular humans, but it's not as strong as full blooded minotaur so many physically focused characters would be stronger. And he doesn't really train in close quarters as much. Basically he's quite strong but it's not a focus.

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