Amazoness stuff (6 cards)

[Just Crouton]

Amazoness

 

Amazoness Ravager Aegea Maximo

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① Each face-up monster your opponent controls loses 200 ATK × its own Level/Rank.② If this card is leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

① Once per turn, during your Main Phase or opponent's Battle Phase, if the only face-up monsters you control are "Amazoness" monsters: You can destroy each face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK. ② Face-up "Amazoness" monsters in your Monster Card Zones are unaffected by your opponent's Effect Monster/Spell/Trap Card effects.

 

 

Amazoness Vanguard Helene Lampedo

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK are changed to face-up Defense Position, and their Battle Positions cannot be changed. ② If this card leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

① Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK are changed to face-up Defense Position, and their Battle Positions cannot be changed. ② If an "Amazoness" monster you control attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent.

 

 

Amazoness Destroyer Cynna Marpesia

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① "Amazoness" monsters you control gain 200 ATK/DEF for each face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK. ② If this card leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

① If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Amazoness" monster from your Deck, except "Amazoness Destroyer Cynna Marpesia".

 

 

Amazoness Sorceress Gryne Ephesos

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK cannot activate their effects. ② If this card leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

① If your opponent Summons a monster(s): You can target that monster(s); until the End Phase, it loses 500 ATK and cannot activate its effects.

 

 

Savage Assault

Can only be activated if there is a face-up "Amazoness" monster in either your Monster Card Zone or Pendulum Zone (min. 1.)
① Destroy each face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK, and if you do, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

 

Amazoness Parry

① Activate only when an opponent's monster declares a direct attack. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Amazoness" monster from your Deck, target 1 monster your opponent controls, and that monster loses 500 ATK until the end of this turn. ② During your opponent's turn, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this card from your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Amazoness" monster from your Graveyard.

 

[Arctic55]

Oh boy, Amazoness... I tried fixing them at one point... failed miserably... let's see what you got.

 

[spoiler=Amazoness Ravager Aegea Maximo]

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① Each face-up monster your opponent controls loses ATK equal to its Level/Rank times 200 200 ATK × its own Level/Rank. I think that's how it's worded

② If this card is leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

① Once per turn, during your Main Phase or opponent's Battle Phase, if the only face-up monsters you control are "Amazoness" monsters: You can destroy each face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK.

② Face-up "Amazoness" monsters in your Monster Card Zones are unaffected by your opponent's Effect Monster/Spell/Trap Card effects.

 

The Pendulum effects seem fine, not sure how I like lowering opponent's ATK, but it's fine.  I don't know about you, but that monster effect seems overpowered to me.  In the monster zone, it is a beast.  It can destroy any monster "whose ATK is lower than its original ATK" get another Maximo in the pendulum zone, and keep essentially nuking the opponents field for free.  On top of that, any of your monster are unaffected by card effects?  How is your opponent supposed to defend?  By scooping?  No.  This needs to destroy 1 monster,

 

 

 

[spoiler=Amazoness Vanguard Helene Lampedo]

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK are changed to face-up Defense Position, and their Battle Positions cannot be changed. ② If this card leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

① Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK are changed to face-up Defense Position, and their Battle Positions cannot be changed. ② If an "Amazoness" monster you control attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent.

 

Pendulum effects: On really?  With the previous card, just why bother fighting now?  "Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK are changed to face-up Defense Position" so, basically a insane field spell, no once during your turn, no restrictions... at least your opponent doesn't take damage.  It's cool.  "and their Battle Positions cannot be changed." SAY WHAT!  What the heck, how about this, throw both pendulums (Maximo and Lampedo) in the pendulum zone, so they lose attack already, and now they are force locked in defense, no switching to attack.  No, no, no no.  This card needs some restrictions.  Let me fix this.

[spoiler=My Fix]

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① Once during your turn, you can change all Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK are changed to face-up Defense Position, and their Battle Positions cannot be changed.

② If this card leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

 

Much better.

 

Now for the monster effect.  No.  Just no.  Gosh darn.  Now I gotta fix it.

[spoiler=My Fix]

Activate 1 Affect:

① Once during your turn, you can change all Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK are changed to face-up Defense Position, and their Battle Positions cannot be changed.

② If an "Amazoness" monster you control attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent until your End Phase.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Amazoness Destroyer Cynna Marpesia]

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① "Amazoness" monsters you control gain 200 ATK/DEF for each face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK. ② If this card leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

① If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Amazoness" monster from your Deck, except "Amazoness Destroyer Cynna Marpesia".

 

The Pendulum effect here is fine.  I think the Monster effect needs a cost.  You just murdered an opponents monster and now get your own for free?  Unless you show me a real card with a similar monster effect, you need to give this effect a cost.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Amazoness Sorceress Gryne Ephesos]

You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "Amazoness" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
① Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK cannot activate their effects. ② If this card leaves the field while in your Pendulum Zone: You can add 1 "Amazoness" card or a ard with "Amazoness" in its card text from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

① If your opponent Summons a monster(s): You can target that monster(s); until the End Phase, it loses 500 ATK and cannot activate its effects.

 

The first pendulum effect is slightly broken, here let me reword it:

[spoiler=My Fix]

① Once during your turn, place one "Amazoness Counter" on all Face-up monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK. Monsters your opponent controls that have an "Amazoness Counter" on them cannot activate their effects.

 

 

 

The monster effect needs a cost.  Or you need to word it like this:

[spoiler=My Fix]

Once per turn, during either players turn, if your opponent Summons a monster(s), You can target that monster and activate one effect:

① Until the your opponent's next End Phase, it loses 500 ATK and

② It cannot activate its effects until your opponent's next End Phase.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Savage Assult]

Can only be activated if there is a face-up "Amazoness" monster in either your Monster Card Zone or Pendulum Zone (min. 1.)
① Destroy each face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than its original ATK, and if you do, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

Combined with Maximo, this is a free nuke useable at any time with no cost.  This needs to target 1 monster, not the entire field.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Amazoness Parry]

① Activate only when an opponent's monster declares a direct attack. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Amazoness" monster from your Deck, target 1 monster your opponent controls, and that monster loses 500 ATK until the end of this turn. ② During your opponent's turn, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this card from your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Amazoness" monster from your Graveyard.

 

First effect is fine.  Second effect needs a better cost in my opinion, like maybe a 500 LP burn.  I mean, come on.  Banishing a trap is nothing.

 

 

 

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