I'll always be with u (Guilty Crown tag) XD

[Kuroda Kaito]

I was gonna submit this for the SOTW#19 but it was too late TT_TT so will just gonna post it here instead

 

 

[spoiler=The other ver.]

 

 

Please comment and give me as much criticism as possible :D

[Catman25]

Yo this blending looks pretty fire; you kinda got a double focal thing going on, but I'm really digging the atmosphere and colors

[Kuroda Kaito]

Yeah true the double focal from the render got me tho, so I thought I will just go with the double focal XD

Thanks for the comment XD

[LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow]

I think I like this more than the things in the SOTW, no offense to them. ^^;
Though it does bug me that first few looks the pink haired girl looks like a floating head.

[Kuroda Kaito]

I think I like this more than the things in the SOTW, no offense to them. ^^;

Though it does bug me that first few looks the pink haired girl looks like a floating head.

Haha thanks XD But imo, there are really awesome pieces in SOTW, which are much better than mine imo XD but yeah ppl have different opinions :P

Anw nah she's not a floating head but apparently making eveything dark in the background turned her into a floating head lol XD all for the atmo purpose !!!!

[mitchermitcher]

Can you post this without the orange/purple color filter? Or whichever one you used to give it that faded look. I like the composition but I feel too much detail's gone.

[Kuroda Kaito]

oh okay sure

I think it's because I set the background a bit to dark, mostly it's for the atmo lol

[Smear]

Nah like the desaturation you've got from the gmap you laid. Solid blending as catman said. Colours could use a bit of work but they look nice in general. Random sparkles could use some cleaning up. As catman said again, double focal is a bit annoying but you've done it nicely (at least they're very close and not on other ends of the tag. Your flow could use a bit of work.

 

 

So there's a few things I'd like to talk about the flow. The blue shows a way the render gives flow naturally (although you can alter the flow nicely with a little work) but generally top left-bottom right is how your piece should flow with this render. Flow can really help a piece out, basics help a lot bruh.

 

Secondly, there's the green and purple parts I've drawn. Green shows how your light source should be working, but as we can see the light is displaying on the opposite side. The purple is where your light source should be if you wanted to get the lighting correct. Alternatively, you could have flipped the render and kept the light source in a similar position but you get the general idea. Look at lighting on render, and work from there.

 

Next is depth. You could have done a slight blur on the foreground (grey circle) or background (red circle) and either one could have worked (trying out on both and deciding on the better one is usually a good idea. Depth is simple yet hard to pull off well so if you don't think it looks good no matter how you try, leaving it is fine. Could also just be the tag doesn't work well with flow.

 

Also colours, using a colour wheel find out what you want. Colour rules like Complimentary, Monochromatic (although mono tags are hard to pull off), Analogous, Triad and Intermediate all work well. You don't have to follow a colour rule but they are helpful.

 

Hope this helped man.

[Kuroda Kaito]

Nah like the desaturation you've got from the gmap you laid. Solid blending as catman said. Colours could use a bit of work but they look nice in general. Random sparkles could use some cleaning up. As catman said again, double focal is a bit annoying but you've done it nicely (at least they're very close and not on other ends of the tag. Your flow could use a bit of work.So there's a few things I'd like to talk about the flow. The blue shows a way the render gives flow naturally (although you can alter the flow nicely with a little work) but generally top left-bottom right is how your piece should flow with this render. Flow can really help a piece out, basics help a lot bruh.Secondly, there's the green and purple parts I've drawn. Green shows how your light source should be working, but as we can see the light is displaying on the opposite side. The purple is where your light source should be if you wanted to get the lighting correct. Alternatively, you could have flipped the render and kept the light source in a similar position but you get the general idea. Look at lighting on render, and work from there.Next is depth. You could have done a slight blur on the foreground (grey circle) or background (red circle) and either one could have worked (trying out on both and deciding on the better one is usually a good idea. Depth is simple yet hard to pull off well so if you don't think it looks good no matter how you try, leaving it is fine. Could also just be the tag doesn't work well with flow.Also colours, using a colour wheel find out what you want. Colour rules like Complimentary, Monochromatic (although mono tags are hard to pull off), Analogous, Triad and Intermediate all work well. You don't have to follow a colour rule but they are helpful.Hope this helped man.

Omg that helped A LOT man !! Thank you so much for ur advice !