Number 108: Dark Pulsar Dragon and Number C108: Abyss Magnetar Dragon

[TSLexi]

Hi guys, here's my very first two cards I created (still looking for appropriate artwork for them). My friends say I need to balance them, and they're far too powerful to ever be playing, but they won't help me change them.

 

Number 108: Dark Pulsar Dragon

[Dragon/Xyz/Effect] - DARK

 

Rank: 12

 

ATK/DEF: ?/?

 

Lore:

 

This card cannot be destroyed except by battle with, or by the effects of, a "Number" card with equal or higher Rank. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by using two or more Xyz monsters whose Ranks total this card's Rank as Xyz Materials, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (Xyz Materials attached to those monsters also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Cards and effects cannot be activated in response to this card's Xyz Summon. This card's original ATK and DEF is equal to the total of the Ranks and Levels of its Xyz Materials multiplied by 500. This card cannot have its effects negated by your opponent.

 

Your opponent's non-Xyz monsters cannot attack. When your opponent enters their Battle Phase: monsters your opponent controls must attack in order of their Ranks, starting with the lowest. When this card battles a monster with a lower Rank, that monster's effects are negated and it loses 1000 ATK and DEF multiplied by the difference in Ranks. If this card attacks a non-Xyz monster: At the start of the damage step; destroy that card, and then this card can attack again.

 

Once per turn: you can detach one Xyz Material; Target one Xyz or Synchro Monster in your Extra Deck: Special Summon it, and if you do, lose LP equal to that target's Rank or Level multiplied by 500, then, if that target was an Xyz Monster, you can move any number of Xyz Materials from this card to that card.

 

Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can activate one of the following effects:

 

Detach one Xyz Material; target an opponent's monster, it's ATK and DEF become 0 until the end of your opponent's next turn, it's effects are negated, and it cannot change battle positions until the end of your opponent's next turn.

 

Detach two Xyz Materials; this card can attack all of your opponent's monsters at once, and if this card attacks a defense position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. Your opponent's cards and effects cannot be activated until the end of the Battle Phase.

 

Detach all Xyz Materials: Banish every card on the field, except this one, and in each player's hand and graveyard, then inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total of the Levels and Ranks of any monsters banished by this effect multiplied by 500. This card cannot attack the turn this effect is activated, and if this effect resolves, your LP becomes 1.

 

If this card would leave the field, it does not, and then you can Special Summon 1 "Number C108: Abyss Magnetar Dragon" from your Extra Deck, and attach this card to it as an Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to this monster are also attached to the summoned monster as Xyz Materials.) This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon.

 

 

 

Name: Number C108: Abyss Magnetar Dragon

[Dragon/Xyz/Effect] - DARK

 

Rank: 13

 

ATK/DEF: 0/0

 

Lore:

 

This card cannot be destroyed except by the effects of "Number" cards with an equal or higher Rank, and is unaffected by other card effects. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Number 108: Dark Pulsar Dragon", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Summoned, if your LP is below 8000, your LP becomes 8000.

 

You take no battle damage from battles involving this card, and your opponent takes any battle damage that you would have, and you can gain an equal amount of LP and have this card gain that much ATK and DEF.

 

Once per turn, during either player's turn: you can detach one Xyz Material; all of your opponent's monsters are switched to face-up attack position and your opponent must attack this card with every monster they control. Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the damage step. After the damage step, inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's ATK or DEF, whichever one is higher. At the end of the Battle Phase: attach all monsters that battled with this card to this card as Xyz Materials.

 

Once per turn, during either player's turn: you can attach one card from any location as an Xyz Material.

 

Once per turn, during either player's turn: inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each Xyz Material attached to this card.

 

If this card leaves the field, both players' LP becomes 1. If this card has no Xyz Materials, you lose the Duel.

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