Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Yep you guessed it. If GX was in my control, here's what I'd do to it, starting from season 2 with a LOT of changes. Plus, Jaden has a new best friend who'll appear later in the fanfic. Sorry how short the opening is. Episode 1 Jaden: I've been waitng for you Alexis. Time to pay for betraying us.Alexis: Jaden?! What happend to you?Jaden: You'll find out if you duel me. Jaden LP 4000Alexis LP 4000 Jaden: I'll start. This spell card will change everything, activating Seal of OricalchosAlexis: Seal of what?!!Chazz: WHAT THE HECK IS THAT?!A green seal with strange symbols and lines in the center coverd the field.Alexis: W-what's going on?Jaden(in a darker voice) Now when the duel is over, only the winner will remain standing. The loser will be stripped of their soul(Evil laugh)Alexis: WHY?!Jaden: You need to pay for joining the Socitiy of Light and I'll make sure of it. I activate Dark Fusion, fusing Avian and Burstinatrix to summon Evil Hero Inferno Wing(ATK 2100/DEF 1200) and thanks to the seal, he gains 500 attack(ATK 2600). Then I activate Miracle Fusion fsing Avian and Burstinatrix again to summon Elemental Hero Flame Wingman(ATK 2100/DEF 1200) and he also gets a boost(ATK 2600). Turn end.Alexis: My turn. I summon Blade Skater in defense mode(ATK 1400 DEF 1500). I play a face down card and end my turnJaden: My turn. I summon Elemental Hero Stratos in attack mode(ATK 1800/DEF 300) and he gets 500 attack(ATK 2300) and when he's summoned, I can add Evil Hero Malicious Edge to my hand, not that I'll be needing him becasue this duel ends now. Frist I activate Mystical Space Typoon to destroy your face down. Inferno Wing attack...my monster inflicts percing damage.Blade skater was destroyedAlexis LP 3400Jaden: When Inferno Wing destroys a monster, you take damage depending on if the ATK or DEF is higher and since Blade Skater had a higher defense, you take 1500 points of damageAlexis LP 1900Jaden: Wingman end this with Infernal RageAlexis LP 0Bastion: In just 3 turns...Chazz: It appears that Jaden is with a group working against us because that's defenitly not the Jaden we know.Alexis: NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!She fallsJaden: Who's next?Chazz, Bastion and about 20 Socitiy members took off running. Jaden brought out Infero Wing, Lighting Golem, Flame Wingman, Malicious Edge and Malicious Fiend and they took all 20, leaving Bastion and Chazz.Meanwhile in Los AnglesYugi: CarlosCarlos: What is it bro?Yugi: Phone CallYugi gives him the phoneCarlos: Hello...No way...I'm heading to the academy right now.Sheppard: Kaiba is on his way to along with Pegasus. Them and Atticus wil help youCarlos: Ok End of episode 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 wow, nice fanfic, lulz, this reminds me of one of the RPs i go to, i'm a guy with a chaos deck, then my spirit (Doomsday Horror), when materialized while my guy's asleep, he carries an orichalos deck, and a nasty one too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Episode 2: The return of the ghouls(NOTE: Yubel is good when she appears. Jaden gave Yubel to Carlos when he turned 13. Carlos stills has Yubel and the 2 forms and the Ojamas belong to Carlos eve though he don't use them) Carlos: Somthing's wrong here.Yubel: I have a bad feeling...Kaiba: Seems I'm not the only one who was called hereCarlos: Kaiba...Zane: SO you finally made it SetoCarlos: ZANE?! What happend...Zane: I've revived the Ghouls. Carlos you can have your freind back. I only wanted him to test the OricalchosJaden: Carlos...B-Be carefulZane: Let's see if you can save the schoolHe leavesCarlos: The first thing we need to do is to get Alexis and the others back on our side. I'm the only one that can get her back. Jaden you take BastionJaden: SureCarlos: You sure you're okay to duel?Jaden: Of courseAtticus: So it's ture?Carlos: YeahBlair: JADEN I FOUND YOU!!!!Jaden: OH CRAP!!!! GOT TO GO!!!!!!Carlos, Atticus and Kaiba stare in disbeliefKaiba: Reminds me of Wheeler...Carlos: What the...Atticus: You don't want to knowMeanwhile in the Shadow RealmYami Marik: A portal leading to the real world? Time to cause destruction and mayhem again(evil laugh)Meanhwhile...Joey: Somthing interesting is going on...Meanwhile...Pegasus: W-WHat's happening?Meanwhile...Zane: Well since there's a tournment starting in a few days, I'm sure you guys know what you're supposed to do.Arkana: Of course Master ZaneZane: Good...Meanwhile, Alexis hears that Carlos is back. Carlos challenges her to a duelCarlos: I admit you have improved but it's ends now. Slifer attack White Night Dragon with Thunder Force!!!Alexis LP 0Yubel: With her now free from the Light of Destruction, we gained a allyAfter this, Carlos helps Jaden by hiding him from Blair. The next day...Sheppard: Jaden I have somthing to tell you.Jaden: What?Sheppard: I looked at your past duels and you don't derserve to be a Slifer. So I'm promoting you from Slifer Red to Obelisk BlueJaden: Sweet!!Sheppard: As for you Carlos, you'll be staying with Jaden since you two are childhood friends.Carlos: Thanks.Sheppard: No problem. It's an honor to have our top student backMeanwhileSocitity of Light member: Oh no...Kaiba: You really thought you could beat me. Think again. BLUE EYES ULTIMATE DRAGON, NEUTRON BLAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Kaiba wonMeanwhile...Carlos: Yellow, how did you end up stuck in the toiletOjama Yellow: I don't knowCarlos: ByeOjama Yellow: WAIT!!!Carlos: Jaden what's going onJaden: There's somthing out thereYubel: Stop hiding and come outYami Marik: Well... My first victem. After stuck in the Shadow Realm for 10 years...Carlos: Y-You're.... TO BE CONTINUED End of Episode 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 may i apply as the character from the RP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 Kinda confusing, but okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 No offense, but those duels were a bit.. dumbed down. Try and make them longer, less one-sided, and with more strategy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brodioh Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 i love em.i will help with ideas if i can think of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RocketWarrior Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 Wait i just made a fanfic just now with same title ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 The chapters are short but still good 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted April 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 Episode 3: Syrus: So Zane has turned evil...Jaden: Yeah but we don't know where he isCarlos: Hey wait. Where did Sheppard go?Meanwhle...Kaiba: Well...It's been a while since I dueledChazz: Time for you to see the light Kaiba LP 4000Chazz LP 4000 Chazz: I'll start. I summon Reborn Zombie in defense mode and play a face down card. Turn end.Kaiba: My turn. I activate Anicent Rules which allows me to summon a Level 5 or higher normal monster from my hand.Chazz: It can't be...Kaiba: It is. I summon my Blue Eyes White Dragon(ATK 3000/DEF 2500). I summon Kaiser Sea Horse in attack mode(ATK 1700/DEF 1650). Blue Eyes, attack with White Lighting!!!!Reborn Zombie was destroyedKaiba: Sea Horse, direct attack!!!Chazz LP 2300Kaiba: I play a face down and that's enough punishment for now.Chazz: My turn. I play Masked Dragon is defense mode(ATK 1400/DEF 1100) and play Slient Doom which allows me to bring back my Reborn Zombie in defense mode. Turn end.Kaiba: My turn. I activate Polymerzation which allows me to fust the Blue Eyes in my hand with the one on the field to summon Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon(ATK 4500/DEF 3800). Dragon, attack with Neutron Blast!!!!Reborn Zombie was destroyedKaiba: Turn end.Chazz: My turn. I activate Graceful Charity whcih allows me to draw 3 cards and discard 2. Since I have 3 DARK monsters in my graveyard, I can summon Dark Armed Dragon(ATK 2800/DEF 1000) and I'll use his effect to remove 1 DARK monster to destroy your dragonBEUD was destroyedChazz: ATTACK!!!Kaiba: I actiavte Negate Attack which negates your attack and ends your battle phase.Chazz: I play this face down and end my turn.Kaiba: My turn. I activate Pot of Greed which lets me draw 2 cards. I play this face down and summon Blade Knight in defense mode. Turn endChazz: My turn. I summon Armed Dragon LV 3 in attack mode(ATK 1200/DEF 900)Kaiba: Reveal trap, Torrential TributeAll monsters on the field was destroyedChazz: Turn end.Kaiba: My turn. This ends now. I activate Mystical Space Typoon to destroy your face down and then I activate Monster Reborn to revive my Blue Eyes White Dragon. WHITE LIGHTNING!!!!!!Chazz LP 0Meanwhile...Zane: Sheppard, hand over the Underworld deck or else!!Sheppard: Duel me for it End of Episode 3 (The first 4 are short because thei put in until I can think of what to put for episode 5 where the Genex tournament begins) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted April 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 The reason I did this was this: since the Oricalchos season was my favorite season, I always wanted to do a fanfic with GX and the oricalchos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 may i apply as the character from the RP? you did not answer my question, here it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted April 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 may i apply as the character from the RP? Yeah just PM me it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 The duels are too short. Also, why would SoL Chazz have DAD and Reborn Zombie in his deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted April 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Chazz has DAD and Reborn zombie in his deck because I needed to add more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Yeah, but no one in the SoL would have a Dark monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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