help on new set

[avariademon]

heres my problem i have an idea for solitary monsters but i need to make sure they are right if you could help me one ballence them out just a bit and help me ocg that would be great:

 

6(stars), 2600(atk) 1000(def)

if there is another monster on your side of the Field, this Card cannot declare an attack. during the End Phase of each players turn that player may Tribute a monster, if He/She dosent that player takes 500 points of damage x the number of monsters He/She controls.

 

4(stars) 1600(atk) 800(def)

if this Card is the only monster on your side of the feild it can Attack Twice during the same battle phase.

 

2(stars) 500(atk) 700(def)

if this Card is the only monster on your side of the field, your opponent skips His/Her Battle Phase. once per turn you may Tribute one Monster on your side of the Field to draw one card from your deck.

 

12(stars) 3500(atk) 2200(def)

this Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, This Card cannot be Special Summoned unless you remove 5 Sea Surpent-Type monsters from your grave while you have no monsters on your side of the feild. you cannot Normal Summon, Speical Summon or Set while this Card is Face Up on the feild. this Card is unaffected by Spell or Trap cards. Once per turn durring your Main-Phase Discard one Sea Surpent-type monster from your hand to the grave to destroy one monster on the feild, this Card cannot Attack during the turn this effect was activated.

 

4(stars) 2400(atk) 0(def)

If you control a monster, this Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This Card cannot attack the turn it is Normal Summond, Flip Summond, or Speical summond. if you control another monster on the field this card is destroyed.

 

4(star) 1700(atk) 1200(def)

if this is Card is the only monster on your side of the feild, you may tribute this Card to look at the top 6 cards of your deck and put them back in any order. once per turn you may Tribute one monster to look at the top card of your deck you may put that card at the bottom.

 

in addition im looking into trying to make a monster/spell card that can make monsters on my side of the field act like they are the only monsters on my side of the feild. im not sure how to do that though.

[Dark_Pride]

Here's my suggestion. And yeah, don't forget the attributes and the types.

 

[name]

LV 6/ATK 2600/DEF 1000

If there is another monster on your side of the Field, this card cannot declare an attack. During each of you or your opponent's End Phase, the turn player must tribute a monster on his side of the field. If he dosen't, that player takes 500 points of damage x the number of monsters He/She controls.

 

[name]

LV 4/ATK 1600/DEF 800

If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase.

 

[name]

LV 2/ATK 500/DEF 700

if this Card is the only monster on your side of the field, your opponent must skip his Battle Phase. Once per turn you may Tribute one Monster on your side of the Field to draw one card from your deck.

 

[name]

12(stars) ATK 3500/DEF 2200

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This Card cannot be Special Summoned except by remove 5 Sea Surpent-Type monsters from your Graveyard while you have no monsters on your side of the feild. You cannot Summon any monsters while this card is face up on the field. This card is unaffected by Spell or Trap cards. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can discard one Sea Surpent-type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy one monster on the field. This Card cannot attack during the turn this effect was activated.

 

[name]

LV 4 ATK 2400/DEF 0

If you control a monster, this card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot attack the turn it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Speical summoned. If you control another monster while this card is face-up on the field, this card is destroyed.

 

[name]

LV 4 ATK 1700/DEF 1200

If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, you can tribute this card to look at the top 6 cards of your deck and return them to your Deck in any order desired. Once per turn, you may Tribute one monster on your field to look at the top card of your Deck and you may return that card at the bottom of your Deck.

 

P.S. don't capitalize card.

[avariademon]

alright well they all are water atribute, and sea surpent type, though im sure sea surpent was obvious when you saw the nami monster <,< i think i will wait to post thier names till i post then on the realistic cards forum, if you wish to see the end result here i will post it. thank you for your help.

[avariademon]

RIM SHOT! dose any one know how i could go about making a monster that makes monsters think they are alone on the feild?

[Wyhe]

as for their names,they can be called 'Loner-?'.

[Dark_Pride]

Well, I've found a way to make each monsters on the field to be treated as alone. Maybe, you can check this out. Maybe, if there are some errors, you can be able to fix it.

 

Solitary Darkness

[Field Spell Card]

-As long as this card remains face-up on the field, every monster on the field is treated as the only monster on their owner's respective sides of the field. Also, increase the ATK and DEF of all Fiend-Type monsters by 300.

 

(Yeah, it's anti-samurai also)

[avariademon]

WOOT FOR ANTI SAMURAI, i might just barrow that and place it on a feild spell, you wouldent mind would you?

[Dark_Pride]

Yah, its okay.

[Lucas Maximus]

6/10

Good effort, they are a little broken though.

[avariademon]

well they are supposed to be "pushing the envelope" i want cards that are a bit more powerful then normal because you will most likely only be able to have one on the feild at a time. unless i make the feild spell the way im thinking which im still thinking about it.

[avariademon]

ok i need some help on wordings for these new cards for the Sea Serpent Set im done with monsters and am moving on to spells and traps my first two cards are traps:

 

Neptunes wrath

normal trap

Activate only if your opponent Normal Summons or Flip Summons a monster. you and your opponent tribute monsters on their side of the feild till the have one monster.

 

Benthic Cave

Normal Trap

Activate only when your opponent attacks and when the only monster on your side of the feild is a Sea Serpent Type monster. when a monster battles with target Sea Serpent Type monster its ATK is reduced by half of its original ATK during the damage step only.

[Dark_Pride]

Neptunes wrath

normal trap

Activate only if your opponent Normal Summons or Flip Summons a monster. you and your opponent tribute monsters on their side of the feild till the have one monster.

 

Suggestion:

-Activate only if your opponent Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned a monster. Both players must send monsters from their sides of the field to the Graveyard until both players have one monster on their field.

 

 

Benthic Cave

Normal Trap

Activate only when your opponent attacks and when the only monster on your side of the feild is a Sea Serpent Type monster. when a monster battles with target Sea Serpent Type monster its ATK is reduced by half of its original ATK during the damage step only.

 

Suggestion:

-Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack and the only monsters on your side of the field are Sea Serpent-Type monsters. The ATK of the attacking monster is halved during the Damage Step.

[avariademon]

the first one looks fine but the second one looks like a trap shrink with down effects what i wanted was if you control only one sea surpent then when your opponent attacks with a monster the monsters ATK is halved but it should be for one turn only sort of like a more destructive wobaku or whatever

[avariademon]

ok more wording dilemmas here are some cards that i need to have worded right, if you could help me that would be great.

 

Flood of knowledge

Normal spell

Tribute one Sea Serpent type monster on your side of the field, Draw cards equal to that monsters ATK for every 1000 points

 

Sea’s calling

Continuous spell

During your standby phase if you control no monsters you may send this face up card to the graveyard to special summon one level 4 or lower Sea Serpent type monster from your deck to your side of the field. Your deck is then shuffled.

[Umbra]

Flood of Knowledge

Spell Card

Tribute 1 Sea Serpent-type monster on your side of the field. Draw 1 card for every 1000 ATK that the tributed monster had.

(Not sure on this one)

 

Sea's Calling

Continuous Spell Card

During your Standby Phase, if you control no monsters, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Sea Serpent-type monster from your deck to your side of the field. Your deck is then shuffled.

(Pretty much everything was the same here, just needed some capitalization)

[avariademon]

ok thanks