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[Frlf]

Ritual Card Contest.

 

Must be with effect..

 

Very simple: Create a ritual card it will be graded for:

 

Ocg: 30%

Originality: 20%

Personal Rating: 20%

Picture: 10%

Effect: 10%

Name: 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): 5%

 

Rewards:

1 place: 3 reps and 10 points.

2 place: 2 reps and 5 points.

3 place: 1 rep and 2 points.

 

Entrys:

1.Mas

2.lliencardsfromabove

3.Alexman

4.Alordsinix

5.Knoth

6.Mikaeo

7.Loren

8.Flying Moose

9.Empress Gong Li

10.Hunterb

 

Finish Date: When al contenstants enter and we done with all rounds.

[Mas]

i enter, becauso you are good. i did these cards in much but much time ago i now that the ritual cards are magic but for error i did it tramp

[Frlf]

Scores:

-Mas-

Ocg: Very lame.. but i hate Ocg so im nice on it 20%

Originality: Not so original but its cool 15%

Personal Rating: 17% (i need rituals, but with that Ocg i wouldnt use it -_-)

Picture: nice pic 9%

Effect: nice effect, havent saw many cards like that so 8%

Name: (The monster name its because of serie, but ritual card name is very cool) 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): Not Op and its fair, 5%

 

Total: 79% :D

 

-Lliencardsfromavobe-

 

Ocg: Didint find any error but a confusion of how you wrote the sentences 27%

Originality: Original.. but isnt what i espect for being full 20%.. ill put 16%

Personal Rating (if its useful for me): isnt so useful for me scince i dont have much pyro monsters, but i got lot of fairies.. 17%

Picture: INDEED 10%!!!

Effect: Nice effect.. 7% (its kinda simple)

Name: Not so original name but its cool ( but the ritual card name its niceeee) 8%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): Kinda OP because you just summon from Graveyard so ill give it a 2%. (if it was from field ill give it a 4%..).

 

Total = 87% (nice! :D)

 

-Alexman-

 

Ocg: I just found like 2 errors, not ocg but grammar.. but ill give a 27%

Originality: i just found original Divine-Fiend but isnt crapy 17%

Personal Rating: 15% because i dont have any ''Cabal'' monster

Picture: nice pics but arent perfect 8%

Effect: nice effect, but a lot of cards use it with diferent names.. 7%

Name: love it 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): Not op 5%

 

Total= 84%

 

-Alordzinyx-

 

Ocg: at monster card couldnt find errors but at ritual card found some grammar errors. 26%

Originality: Original.. quite.. 18%

Personal Rating: I just have like 6 winged beasts, but that ATK and DEF is very nice for me so 17%

Picture: Nice pics 9%

Effect: Nice effect havent saw any monster with Tributing to inflict damage in here. 8%

Name: Nice Name 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): 4% because you can negate an attack every turn so its kinda OP.

 

Total = 87% nice

 

- Knoth -

 

Ocg: First card almost perfect Ocg, 2nd card ruined all of it 25%

Originality: Not so original 18%

Personal Rating: I like it! 19%

Picture: Ritual card pic badass.. second ruined it 8%

Effect: Nice effect.. but ive seen it a lot 8%

Name: Not seen a name like it but its kind simple 4%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): Tribute from graveyard.. cmon to easy to summon 3%

 

Total: 85% :D

 

-Loren-

 

Ocg: Omg.. omg.. first card was perfect.. second card in the end.. TOTALY RUINED IT! 26%

Originality: Not so much but its nice 17%

Personal Rating: Nice! 19%

Picture: indeed 10%

Effect: Nice 9%

Name: Best name ive saw so far... 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): Not OP 5%

 

Total = 91%

 

-Flying Moose-

 

Ocg: AHHH CALL THE OCG COPS!! .. cmon.. you can do better than that i mean you really CAN do it 20%

Originality: 18%

Personal Rating: 19% (i would use it but with that ocg Oh NOES!)

Picture: 9%

Effect: 5% (op)

Name: 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): Very op.. sryy 0%

 

Total: 76% (you can do better.. yes u can!)

 

-Gong Li-

 

Ocg: Words arent wrong.. scentences needed to be diferent from how you wrote it.. 25%

Originality: not so original 17%

Personal Rating: Its a FUSION monster.. sacrifice Specific cards (with their name) to get 1 monster is a fusion.. its a fusion with blue color.. 7%

Picture: Nice pics 8%

Effect: Fair effect... 8%

Name: 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): 4%

 

Total: 74%

 

-Mikaeo-

 

Ocg: Couldnt find real ocg errors 29%

Originality: never ever saw a 4 star ritual card 19%

Personal Rating: Nice card i like it a lot 19%

Picture: nice pics indeed 10%

Effect: nice effect 9%

Name: 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): Bit op with that DEF points.. ive saw higer DEF points for a 4 star monster so no big deal :D so it'll be a 4%

 

Total: 95% (good card indeed) :D :D

 

-Hunterb-

 

you dont need rating... but i will xD

 

 

Ocg: 28% some problems

Originality: very original 19%

Personal Rating: 20% very nice

Picture: 9% nice pic

Effect: 10% indeed

Name: 4%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): kinda op 3%

 

total: 93% :D

[lliencardsfromabove]

Save a spot for me. I need to start joining contests.

[lliencardsfromabove]

Okay. I got them.

 

 

Wow. Took me 13 minutes.

[Alexman]

I'll join your contest.

[Alordzynix]

[Abstract [Atrocity]]

[align=center]I might as well enter. Here it is.

 

Declaration of Downfall

Picture Credit: Kadesh

 

Chaos Command Knight

Picture Credit: Shonensan

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[Mikaeo]

kay this is the one im keeping

[loren]

i'll enter hope you like um

[flyingmoose]

Here are my cards

[Красивая Ведьма]

The link to the sacrificed cards is in my sinature below.

[Красивая Ведьма]

Frlf, why don't you just PM our scores it would be faster than posting them?

[Frlf]

1 spot left.. first one to post the card gets in .. Then we go to second round.. lowest 3 guys get eliminated... Instructions for 2nd round coming soon..

[Mikaeo]

kay i chose which one i want in it is posted above

[Huntar!]

entry reserved.

[Huntar!]

Here.

 

You stated that we needed a Ritual Card. Not a spell card for it. Here is my card.

[Frlf]

Who entered:

1.Mas

2.lliencardsfromabove

3.Alexman

4.Alordsinix

5.Knoth

6.Mikaeo

7.Loren

8.Flying Moose

9.Empress Gong Li

10.Hunterb

 

Disqualified:

1.Gong li

2. Flying Moose

3. Mas

 

2nd round: need to make 2 cards: A fusion card (The ritual card you make + a card you are gonna make now) and a card to fusion the ritual monster. gonna be rated on:

 

 

Ocg: 30%

Personal Rating: 10

Picture: 10%

Effect: 10%

Name: 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): 5%

 

so its a 60% in 2nd round.. good luck

[Mikaeo]

i am very confused about this are you saying we make a card to fuse with our ritual monster and make the fusion card itself?

[Huntar!]

How did you not see any problems with Mikaeo's OCG and grammar? There are TONS.

 

anyway, thanks for the second place.

[Frlf]

Yeah create the fusion and the extra card to fusion with your ritual monster.

 

Hunterb, im very nice with Ocg.. scince i dont notice it a lot and i know its hard..

[lliencardsfromabove]

I have my cards.

 

 

And, because the text is pretty hard to read, I will post it below.

 

"The Last Phoenix - Felgras"

 

"When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, place 3 "Phoenix Tokens" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) on your side of the field. These tokens cannot be destroyed as a result of battle, and, as long as there is a "Phoenix Token" on your side of the field, this card cannot attack, or be declared as the target of an attack. During each of your Standby Phases, move 1 "Phoenix Token" to this card. ("Phoenix Token" is now treated as "Phoenix Counter".) For each "Phoenix Counter" on this card, increase the ATK of this monster by 1000 points."

 

"Angelphoenix - Felgras"

 

""The Last Phoenix - Felgras" + "Angel of Fire"

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. A Fusion Summon of this card can only be performed with the above Fusion Material monsters. By discarding one card from your hand, you may Special Summon 1 "Phoenix Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). By removing from play 2 cards from the top of your Deck, you may move 1 "Phoenix Token" to this card. ("Phoenix Token" is now treated as "Phoenix Counter".) For every "Phoenix Counter" on this card, increase this card's ATK by 400 points."

 

Thanks for reading all of that.

[Frlf]

I have my cards.

 

 

And' date=' because the text is pretty hard to read, I will post it below.

 

"The Last Phoenix - Felgras"

 

"When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, place 3 "Phoenix Tokens" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) on your side of the field. These tokens cannot be destroyed as a result of battle, and, as long as there is a "Phoenix Token" on your side of the field, this card cannot attack, or be declared as the target of an attack. During each of your Standby Phases, move 1 "Phoenix Token" to this card. ("Phoenix Token" is now treated as "Phoenix Counter".) For each "Phoenix Counter" on this card, increase the ATK of this monster by 1000 points."

 

"Angelphoenix - Felgras"

 

""The Last Phoenix - Felgras" + "Angel of Fire"

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. A Fusion Summon of this card can only be performed with the above Fusion Material monsters. By discarding one card from your hand, you may Special Summon 1 "Phoenix Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). By removing from play 2 cards from the top of your Deck, you may move 1 "Phoenix Token" to this card. ("Phoenix Token" is now treated as "Phoenix Counter".) For every "Phoenix Counter" on this card, increase this card's ATK by 400 points."

 

Thanks for reading all of that.

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Ocg: ''(F)ield'' with caps plz.. and it should be like ''This card can only be Special Summoned by..bla bla bla'' 27%.

Personal Rating: nice but a bit OP 7%

Picture: nice pics indeed 10%

Effect: nice effect again a but Op 8%

Name: 5%

Power (The more OP the more negative points): Again.. a but Op 4%

 

total = 56%/70%

[Mikaeo]

 

Aranea

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card may only be Special Summoned by sending 1 WATER monster you control from the field to the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned successfully increase your Life Points by 600. Every turn you may increase your Life Points by 500. If you do this you cannot attack with this card in the same turn.

[Frlf]

 

Aranea

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card may only be Special Summoned by sending 1 WATER monster you control from the field to the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned successfully increase your Life Points by 600. Every turn you may increase your Life Points by 500. If you do this you cannot attack with this card in the same turn.

 

 

 

Ocg: nice Ocg.. really hunterb i cant see errors just: ''You gain 300 life points per turn'' it should be ''While this card is face up on the Field you gain 300 Life Points each of your main phases''. 28%

Personal Rating: 9%

Picture: i like pics in this contest! 10%

Effect: 8% bit Op

Name: 5% indeed

Power (The more OP the more negative points): 4% kinda Op.

 

total: 64%/70%