fiery or flame sprite archetype

[kitgag]

So, i am new to this site... this is my first attempt at an archetype, constructive critisism is welcome.

 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Keep in mind that we do have a Multiples section for 2+ cards.

That, and there is no need to put Effect twice in the Type box. If you select that in the drop-down menu, it will automatically render the card as an effect monster for you.

 

Anyway, Mad Flame Sprite can SS itself if you manage to damage something, plus has Raging Flame's direct attack + ATK increase. Although, it also has some degree of destruction protection and floats when it dies, so that helps it to survive a bit.

 

Flame Demon is a 2K Level 8. Although given the wording of his effect, it works if you manage to burn the opponent via a Spell/Trap Card (and there are certainly burn cards that correlate with FIRE). Also a simple stat boost when it does (given the amount of counters) AND his effects cannot be negated.

 

(Well, just so you're aware of things, Skill Drain does override that if it exists first. Still, I'd remove that negation effect though. Given the nature of this Archetype, it has the potential to generate multiple counters)

 

Fiery Domain is your searcher + theoretically the enabler for a lot of your combos.

Remember that Mad Flame and Demon will be at a minimum 3500 after activation, and you're allowing former to make direct attacks. Not a good idea.

 

Either you reduce it to 1 counter, or nerf Mad Flame's ATK gaining to 500 each.

 

Tiger Flame is your Honest for this Archetype (plus extra), assuming you have Flame Counters handy (which you probably will).

 

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Also, please make an attempt to use proper capitalization in the card names.

Yes, the name font uses capital letters, but it will not auto-capitalize; that falls on you.

[kitgag]

thanks for the advice, and i didn't know about the multiple cards section, so thaks for letting me know about that. i nerfed mad flame sprite to 500, and fixed  the capitalization errors.