Evil HERO - Dark King Haou

[Thomas★Zero]

[spoiler=Effect]3 "Evil HERO" Monsters

Must be summoned by "Dark Fusion" and cannot be summoned by other ways. While you control another "Evil HERO" monster: This card cannot be targeted by your opponents card effects. If this card has attacked this turn, during your Battle-Phase: you can tribute 1 "HERO" monster you control; This card can make a additional attack this turn.

 

 

After posting Evil HERO Phantom Mist in and seeing the comment about it for Evil HERO Fusions it did make me think about it and I came up with this.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

3 "Evil HERO" Monsters
Must be Special Summoned by "Dark Fusion" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. While you control another "Evil HERO" monster, this card cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. After damage calculation, if this card attacks: You can tribute 1 "HERO" monster you control; this card can make a second attack during this Battle Phase.

 

Well, it's a generic Evil HERO Fusion (given that most of them bar Dark Gaia share the same requirements as the Elemental HEROs they stem from), so there's that.

Being immune to Castel and other targeting removal is nice though, if you have another Evil HERO out.

 

Although with the double attack effect, I think it would be better if you had it trigger at the start of the Battle Phase.

 

Right now, it's worded kind of similar to that of Ruin, Queen of Oblivion (except it requires you to Tribute another "HERO" of choice). In the fixes, I've changed the wording so it more/less reflects that. Granted though, I am rather wary of this being able to OTK (given that you can activate this if you get a direct attack, then go for another one). Wording is a bit iffy here, but you should get it.

 

I'll ignore the fact that pic is a screen capture of The Supreme King / Dark Jaden, although it is rather fitting.