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[Simping For Hina]

my start

 

thar's edit

 

my 2nd edit

 

finished product

[Tormented]

neat concept, execution is a bit off. 

 

The lighting seems very fake, I feel like having less colours might have given this a neat vibe to it, can I see a b&w just for the funk of it?  anyhow right side seems a bit bare and the depth is questionable, definitely not an awful piece.

[Thar]

can I see a b&w just for the funk of it?

 

 

I could've done more, but we used photoshop, and I'm more comfortable with GIMP. Not that it'd turn out better, but yeah.

[Night]

 

Potentially dope, needs a bit more cleaning and the lighting is a bit too harsh.

In addition, the contrast as a whole is kinda odd, could do with some curve adjustments and potentially some desaturation.

 

Overall it's a good direction for both of you, keep it up.

[chairman ali]

forced lighting.

 

if you're going to add your own lighting make sure it goes with everything else. If the light is at the top left, the left side of the face will be lit while the right side be in shadow.

 

atm, not sure what to make of the foreground, midground and background. Everything seems to be in the foreground. There seems to be no utilisation of the different grounds.

 

Also, try to have a ratio of full to empty. Atm, the left side has too much going on while the right side has nothing. Try to utilise the space. Maybe a 3:1 ratio.

[Smear]

Broooo if you made your colours better this could be dope