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It's 9 AM and I haven't slept and this tripped me the funk out, take that as you will.

 

But I have to say I do like it but...

http://gyazo.com/e39c9966fef36d6144648daac43ebf50

This space just really bothers me, I feel like...something should've been done here, and it feels incomplete. Though wouldn't be so bad if it didn't seem like it...just abruptly is cut off.

 

Sorry if I'm not making sense.

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Seems like a low-level Amir piece if I'm honest, just seemed like an excuse to show off your fractal. Personally don't like the stock you used either.

 

I feel it's just an "ok" piece which is what I think you shouldn't be performing at.

 

edit: look at night use his bot-net to hack the system 

 

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It's 9 AM and I haven't slept and this tripped me the funk out, take that as you will.

 

But I have to say I do like it but...

http://gyazo.com/e39c9966fef36d6144648daac43ebf50

This space just really bothers me, I feel like...something should've been done here, and it feels incomplete. Though wouldn't be so bad if it didn't seem like it...just abruptly is cut off.

 

Sorry if I'm not making sense.

 

I'd actually argue that it isn't abrupt seeing as though the stone tiles on the render protrude onto the white and the white bleeds onto the focal through the text. 

 

Doesn't make you wrong though, I can see how it could be off-putting. Thanks for the cnc.

 

Contrarily, I find the use of empty space to be gorgeous. It breaks of the edge and makes it feel a lot less structured.

 

Pretty much what I was going for, thanks for the cnc bud

 

Personally don't like the stock you used 

 

The stock and the render are two separate images, thanks for the cnc

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I'm not a big fan of this, I know you can do better ! :3

The BG is LQ, your fractal's over-sharpened, and I don't like the colours (that flower [a rose ?] don't fit with the fractal, imo :S).

However, the composition looks nice to my eye, even if my not sure for the strips (and I dunno if it was intentionnal but we can see that the background ends before the fractal at the right of the piece ;) )

So I kinda agree with/on (tell me what I should've used pls xD) Tormy's feelings about your piece...

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