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This may be my favorite piece of yours. If anyone was paying attention, gold flakes might've been a hint, but they were on point and everything seemed to go well with your focal. The couple gold strands on the right I think I pointed out, which honestly is nbd, and the blur as you mentioned, but overall I dig the sorta chaotic "randomness" you got going on

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So I'm not exactly a signature person, but one thing that immediately stood out which irks me is that some of the elements are lower-res than the others (the rightmost third in particular). I don't know if that's the aforementioned blur talking, but if it is, you should probably chuck it.

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I enjoy your concept and colors in this piece. The textures are interesting and nice. However, I feel certain elements of the piece could have been blended together better; for example, the fact that you erased part of the tan paper-ish effect over the focal is very obvious. I also think the focal has been covered too much, and the piece seems to have a slight case of floating head syndrome.

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Could use some more geometrical sheet to break up the tag and guide the eyes a bit more. As is it's just a clusterfuck of repeating textures.

 

I like it though, just work on adding some coherency to the style and I think you'll have a good one. Keep it up.   

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