.Rai Posted July 12, 2015 Report Share Posted July 12, 2015 Cheers for the votes, guys. Now that it was pointed out, the blur's probably entirely unnecessary. I'll try to V2 that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted July 12, 2015 Report Share Posted July 12, 2015 This may be my favorite piece of yours. If anyone was paying attention, gold flakes might've been a hint, but they were on point and everything seemed to go well with your focal. The couple gold strands on the right I think I pointed out, which honestly is nbd, and the blur as you mentioned, but overall I dig the sorta chaotic "randomness" you got going on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted July 12, 2015 Report Share Posted July 12, 2015 So I'm not exactly a signature person, but one thing that immediately stood out which irks me is that some of the elements are lower-res than the others (the rightmost third in particular). I don't know if that's the aforementioned blur talking, but if it is, you should probably chuck it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted July 13, 2015 Report Share Posted July 13, 2015 I enjoy your concept and colors in this piece. The textures are interesting and nice. However, I feel certain elements of the piece could have been blended together better; for example, the fact that you erased part of the tan paper-ish effect over the focal is very obvious. I also think the focal has been covered too much, and the piece seems to have a slight case of floating head syndrome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted July 14, 2015 Report Share Posted July 14, 2015 cool concept, messy tho imoi like the specific type of flair u have in design tho, kiu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 14, 2015 Report Share Posted July 14, 2015 Could use some more geometrical sheet to break up the tag and guide the eyes a bit more. As is it's just a clusterfuck of repeating textures. I like it though, just work on adding some coherency to the style and I think you'll have a good one. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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