Lord monster Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 this is my fan fic you can join if you want here is chapter 1 and i am yugi so you can not be yugi or kaiba chapter 1 start your duels Yawwwnnn as Yugi wakes up.Yugi:I better get to the tory stadium fast>So he got up and put his shoes and duel disk on and ran to the tournmount.Kaiba:Nice to see you Yuge Roland is telling us all about the competition and mme and Mokuba are in and it is not my competion i let Roland be the boss of the competion.Yugi:Wow its fullof duelists!Kaiba:Yeh shall we duel after this.Yugi:Yeh Deal.Kaiba:Deal.Roland: Duelists around the country you must duel people to get Roland points and you can trade Roland points for cards from card shops from around the country and this competion lasts for several days now split up and duel people.Yugi:Lets duel Kaiba you start.Kaiba:Ok lets duel.so they dueledKaiba 8000 lpYugi 8000 lpKaiba:Ok i draw and i put down a face down and i summon Flint missileand activate its effect so i can summon anothe Flint missile (ATK1500DEF1000) in attack mode and i end my go.Yugi:Ok i draw and i summon Luster dragon (ATK1900 DEF0)and i attack flint missile.Kaiba:NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!But i activate eyjiptain god card come so i get to summon eyjttian god card blue.Yugi:Noooooo!!!!!!!!Kaiba:so it forces it to attack.Yugi:Dam it i did such a crap move.Kaiba 7600 lpYugi 5900 lp i am Yugi and you can not be Kaiba becuase he is a stor character hope you enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elamental hero's Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 No offence but the card kaiba used sucked.You have kinda bad grammar but don't lose hope just use a spell checker or get writing lessons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elamental hero's Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 get lost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Tell me to get lost ?You shut the hell up I was trying to be nice.You think your nice you just LIE !!!!You say its good to get his hopes up and then everbody else is gonna says its bad and that can hurt somebody.Its not perfect, he spelt egyptian wrong and their is not ejiptian blue of whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 This story is worser then worse. elemental hero`s, you can't be serious about that 10/10. This story just completely sucks! -10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baritone_rob05 Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 I agree with you. This thing sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magma Soilder Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 *sigh*-2/10 Sorry too much bad grammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deucalion Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 My eyes are bleeding internally. 0/10 Also, elemental hero's, rate realistically, pl0x? It's getting really annoying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elamental hero's Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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