God GAK Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 how is it? comments?fixes? suggestions? EDIT: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 font is sexy. render is HAWT but unfortunately BG is a bit weird. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Thanks CyDra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 your welcome. anyway the sign in the font, is it of a brush or part of the font like the wings in the weird font which was instead of the "()"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Oh, you mean those things next to "within" it is a font called devil within i think. it is full of symbols Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 It's pretty good, but the CD is right with the bg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Think it could be better if i deleted the diagonal lines? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Egnio Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 You could make the lines a bit more transparent (not 100% sure if it would make it look better though) I don't see anything wrong with the background. But I can't really read the text's little... text. Other than that, awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Test doesn't fit. Lighting is iffy, mainly that black area. Scan lines are too opaque. Too big. I'm iffy about the background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 font is sexy. render is HAWT but unfortunately BG is a bit weird. 8/10Font is major improvement, render is okay I suppose...but that BG simply BURNS...it's absolutely horrible and doesn't even fit with the rest of it. And Kizzi you don't like anything do you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Thanks sushi. i had that in my mind. i shall change the bg now. i will do some brushing etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Test doesn't fit. Lighting is iffy' date=' mainly that black area. Scan lines are too opaque. Too big. I'm iffy about the background.[/quote'] *Text. And you have too much contrast around the render. Also, no flow. Use my BG tut. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Here is a newer version of it: i think it is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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