Thar Posted July 5, 2015 Report Share Posted July 5, 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted July 5, 2015 Report Share Posted July 5, 2015 cool concept, bad execution centre focal is bad, colours are alright you just gotta spread them around more interesting render, although c4ds don't really suit what you've made. the depth is okay but it looks awkward in general having them so far in the foreground and so strongly blurred. lighting is really eh and your flow is nonexistant. focus more on basics bruh also top left / bottom right look really weird bc of the whole tag being c4d and there being just empty idk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted July 6, 2015 Report Share Posted July 6, 2015 I have to go Problematica on this. This sucks, and the bad thing is you seem like you have enough experience to know better. It's a big funking blur of colors that could be c4d's with a random ass white figure in the middle. Anything good is ruined by a big ball of light and whatever kind of shitty blur you used. There is no atmosphere, there is no composition, there is nothing. It kinda baffles me honestly. I'm not gonna tell you to look up tutorials or stupid sheet, I'm gonna tell you to study/relearn all basics of tagging and art in general and not touch Photoshop or GIMP or whatever you use until you have grasped those concepts. I understand everyone starts somewhere, but this looks like someone who should have a decent grasp on tagging just decided to say funk it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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