Chose a Card Please(Trap card)

[DSS]

Ok i need to verrify that the OCG is corect before i make this card so here it is

tell me what you think :?

 

Card Name: Choose a Card Please

 

Card Type: Trap

 

Trap Type: Continous

 

Card Lore : This card can only be activated when you have 5 or more cards in your hand. Your opponent has to chose a card then that card is removed from play ,after 3 turns you may Special Summon or activate that card. After the end of your turn send the chosen card to the Graveyard then inflict 500 damage to opponents Life Points. If the number of cards in your hand drops bellow 4 this card is destroyed.

[Dejhad]

dunno i'm not that goos on OCG, but you do have one problem

 

Choose = Present (you choose a book)

 

Chose = Past (he chose that book)

 

trust me if my english isn't perfect I get my head ripped off (exageration of course)

[DSS]

ok thanks for that obsevation ,i guess my grammar still isn't good

anyway can someone please tell me that if the OCG is good

[Umbra]

Card Name: Choose a Card Please

 

Card Type: Trap

 

Trap Type: Continous

 

Card Lore: This card can only be activated when you have 5 or more cards in your hand. Your opponent has to chose a card then that card is removed from play ' date='after 3 turns you may Special Summon or activate that card. After the end of your turn send the chosen card to the Graveyard then inflict 500 damage to opponents Life Points. If the number of cards in your hand drops bellow 4 this card is destroyed.

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Umbra Style:

 

Death's Mark

Continuous Trap Card

You can only activate this card when you have 5 or more cards in your hand. Your opponent selects 1 card in your hand. Remove the selected card from play during the End Phase. During your 3rd Standby Phase after you activate this card, if the removed card was a Monster Card, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. If it was a Spell or Trap Card, you can activate it. At the end of the turn, send the card to the Graveyard and inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. If you have 4 or less cards in your hand while this card is face-up on the field, destroy this card.

[DSS]

Card Name: Choose a Card Please

 

Card Type: Trap

 

Trap Type: Continous

 

Card Lore: This card can only be activated when you have 5 or more cards in your hand. Your opponent has to chose a card then that card is removed from play ' date='after 3 turns you may Special Summon or activate that card. After the end of your turn send the chosen card to the Graveyard then inflict 500 damage to opponents Life Points. If the number of cards in your hand drops bellow 4 this card is destroyed.

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Umbra Style:

 

Death's Mark

Continuous Trap Card

You can only activate this card when you have 5 or more cards in your hand. Your opponent selects 1 card in your hand. Remove the selected card from play during the End Phase. During your 3rd Standby Phase after you activate this card, if the removed card was a Monster Card, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. If it was a Spell or Trap Card, you can activate it. At the end of the turn, send the card to the Graveyard and inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. If you have 4 or less cards in your hand while this card is face-up on the field, destroy this card.

 

thanks man for the OCG help

[Grayall]

Good card. 8/10