Yugioh - 24 (Episode 2 Has Been Posted)

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Hi everyone as most people should know the show 24, well last week i had reverlation why don't i do a fan fic doing a yugioh version of 24. So lately i have been working characters and and a story line so here it is!

Characters

Name: Jase Borwn

Age: 13

Bio: A hot headed boy, who allways act on his feet. His older brother Cameron is in the current champion in thier area and jase has allways lived in his brothers shadow for the most of his life. His best friend Alec Tamuse is his current tag partner and only friend. Jase's deck is a powerful deck using the tricky Neos-dragons (invented by me) his favourite card is his Neos Dragon

Deck: Neos Dragons.

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Name: The Ambassador

Age: Unkown

Bio: Not much is known about the ambassador, but he is the top duelist of the dark force known as the Royal ones. His deck is based around Dark angels which effects pack a big punch when you destroy them.

Deck: Dark Angels

 

Others will be added when they feature in the fan fic.

I will not let any people join this fan fic until after the third episode so please don't bother.

I will later on start to create duelist packs for each of these duelists

Any news about the fan fic i will post on the news page i will show that if you look down into the next post.

anything you need to know please contact me by PM.

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News

Prologue has been posted -------------04/04/08

Episode 1 has been posted --------------08/04/08

Episode 2 has been posted --------------13/04/08

Lets all say well done to our lucky contest winner alvarosv! he has won a contest to feature in the fan fic.

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Prologue

A man enters, dressed in black robes and sits on a throne. Most of his face is covered except his mouth, another man enters dressed similar to the first man but his face is not covered. Out of the shadows others circle around the two men chanting.The man on the throne speaks in a deep husky voice.

(???) Welcome to the royal ones, you have passed the test and now heres your reward.

He hands the Second man a black duel disk, a deck and a picture.

(???) You will be known as the Ambassador, you do not use your real name. This is the deck you will use from now on,

(Ambassador) No i already have a deck!

(???) Your deck is pathetic! Your deck is made up with fairies! While you are in this clan you do not use nice, nicey good monsters. You use dark monsters!

The ambassador looks through his new deck as the first man continues to talk.

(???) Your deck is infused with the dark powers of the Lost rehlm your new deck is the Dark Angels.(Ambassador) Thank you, master but i have one question. Who is this picture of ?

(???) That person is your first assignment, his name is Seto Kaiba. Duel him, defeat him and crush his soul so my master plan can take action!

(Ambassador) Yes master, it will be done.

Change Of Scene

We enter a new scene with two men dueling. Behind one of the men is a Three headed blue dragon, his life points are at 1600. Behind the other man, the ambassador has a fairy covered in dark armour, surrounded by spirits of his monsters. his life points are at 3900. The first man speaks.

(Kaiba) Well done, i have to give you that, getting your best monster out in one turn and destroying all of mine except one, but that one you didn't is the one that will destroy you! Now my Blue eyes ultimate dragon attack him with Utimate Whitw lightning!

(Ambassador) Not so fast i activate my trap, A new world! This trap lets me pick one field spell card from my deck and play it and choose Hells Heaven!

(Kaiba) So what my monster will still destroy yours

(Ambassador) Oh but the effect fo my field spell lets my halve the attack of all light monsters if i have a dark monster on the field, and hang on. I have a Dark and you have a Light so say bye to your blue eyes!

(Kaiba) Noooooo! By monster has 2250 ATK and yours has 4000 so that means....

(Ambassador) You lose

The duel finishes and the ambassador walks over to kaiba still injured from after the duel. He looks into his eyes and hypnotises him. A grey glaze goes over kaiba's eyes and the ambassador bends down and whispers in his ear and kaiba responds with

(Kaiba) I am in your command master.......

[elamental hero's]

me join the fan fic

[Spire]

The story seems like its heading in an intersting direction.

[elamental hero's]

yeh

[Atomix]

awesome dude, i'll like to join to this story

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thanks for all the positive comments guys the first epsiode will be up tomorrow, i don't now what time.

[Spire]

I don't think I can wait!

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Epsiode 1-Finding Your Spirit

We enter the episode in a class room and look at a boy searching for something,

(Jase) Were is it, were is it!

another boy leans over a whispers

(Alec) What are you looking for?

(Jase) My deck, it's gone!

(Alec) hang on, calm down. Now where have you been today,

(Jase) Well, i went on the playing field during lunch.... and i got my deck out to show some younger kids and i must have left it there!

(Alec) well after class, we will go and find it then and.....

A teacher walks in, he's old and looks very angry he slams his case on the desk and takes something out of his pocket and says.

(Teacher) Who's cards are these? You know that it is aganist school rules to take duel monsters cards into class, so who's are these?

every child in the class looks around at Jase, his face goes bright red.

(Teacher) i should have known it would be you Mr Brown, right see me after school in detention.

(Jase) But sir it's the last day of school before the summer holidays.

(Teacher) I don't care! You break the rules, you get punished!

(Jase) Ah man,

a girl bursts out laugthing and says

(Sarah) Ha.ha serves you right!

(Jase) Shut up Sarah

(Sarah) Shut up yourself, Jase!

New Scene

The bell rings and all the children leave except jase. He sits there for another hour writing lines he leaves and goes up to the teachers desk.

(Jase) Sir, can i have my cards back now,

(Teacher) yes you can but i never want to see these cards in my classroom again, understand.

(Jase) Yes sir.

Jase leaves and quickly scans through his deck until he pulls out one card and looks at it.

(Jase) there you are Neos dragon,

The card suddenly begins to glow and a loud roar seems to appear out of nothing and siloet of a dragon materiales out of the card and disappears as quick as it appeared, a voice also appears in his head echoing it's saying...

(Sarah) Jase, Jase JASE!

(Jase) what is it.

(Sarah) are you allright

(Jase) Yeah, fine why do you ask? do you still have feelings for me?

(Sarah) No, i don't have feelings for you! i asked because you where about to walk into a open road.

(Jase) No i wasn't!

(Sarah) yes you where, you just walked out of the school staring at that card and almost got yourself killed.

Jase nods his head and says sacasticly

(Jase) Right, and hang on, why are you here shouldn't you be arranging some flowers or something!

(Sarah) i'm er........ er.... waiting for a ...... friend.

(Jase) Which friend, whats thier name.

(Sarah) er....... her name is isabel

(Jase) right, when she coming

(Sarah) soon

a man appears from around a car as he does he fastens a black duel disk to his arm he approaches Jase and Sarah quickly he speaks with a mouth full of venom

(Ambassador) are you jase brown?

(Jase) Who's asking?

(Ambassador) i'm the ambassador, and are you the owner of the rare Neos Dragon?

(Jase) Yeah, i own it but if you think your going to get it you've got another thing coming!

(Ambassador) well then i you want to be like that i will duel you for it!

(Jase) O.k lets duel if you win you get my dragon if you lose you leave us alone.

(Sarah) Jase becareful!

(Jase) So you do still have feelings for me

(Sarah) No i don't i just don't want to see you in hospital imagine what i would have to tell your parents!

(Ambassador) Jase Brown prepare to see your legendary card in my deck!

To be continued

Find out if jase can defeat the evil ambassador and keep his neos dragon, all of this will be reveled in the next episode!

[Spire]

^ Great! I can tell this is leading to a good story.

[elamental hero's]

yeh

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currently working on the second epsiode and will proberly post it on friday since i have swimming training at night and going out in the day.

spoiler

see Jase an his neos dragon try and defeat the ambassador and his lost angel of the ancients! also we reveal the thing that has to do with 24......

[elamental hero's]

nice spoiler

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sorry about this just had enough time to write this but i can't get the next episode up today because i have been forced to go out so it will definatly out tomorrow i promise and sorry for any inconvinice.

[elamental hero's]

okay

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Episode 2- Heavens Roar

Last time we were introduced to Jase Brown and his two friends Sarah and Alec, he was challenged by the ambassador who is hoping to win Jase's greatest card Neos Dragon see in this episode if jase can beat him and keep his card!

(Jase) Right, i will duel you but i don't have a duel disk

(Ambassador) here use my one,

he pulls out a black duel disk with an extra dile on it.

(Ambassador) Put it on and make sure that it is tight,

(Jase) Right, i've got my deck, a duel disk and an opponent all i have to say is.....

(Jase/Ambassador) Duel!

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Ambassador 4000[/align]

(Ambassador) i start and i draw and summon my Gretania the summon fairy!

(Jase) Hang on, that monster has 0 atk points what can that do? wait i bet it has an effect.

(Ambassador) Your right and it lets me summon one fairy type monster from my hand with 4 stars or less, then i can equip it to my summon fairy and finally i can increase my cards ATK by the attack of the monster i equipt it with. So i choose my fighter fairy so this inceases my monsters atk by 2000!

(Jase) Whoa, that was one big combo but i can do better than that while i play my field spell Neos Space 2- The Dragon Zone. This card gives my dragons an extra 200 ATK points during each players battle phrase, and next i summon my E-Dragon Turbulance and attack your monster!

(Ambassador) Don't make me laugh, when i looked at your file it said your surposed to be good. Look at your monster it only has 900 attack points you think that can destroy my monster!

(Jase) Oh but my monster also has an effect, when it attacks it can destroy one spell or trap card on your side of the field so i choose your equip monster that means your monster has...

(Ambassador) zero attack points....

(Jase) Now go turbulance destroy his monster!

Jase 4000

Ambassador 2900

suddenly part of the ambassador's left arm disappears

(Jase) What the hell just happened to you?

(Ambassador) oh, i forgot to tell you one monor detail, when we loose life points we loose parts of our bodies, so when our life points hit zero, so do our lives.

(Sarah) Jase, what ever you do don't loose any life points!

(Jase) i get that,

(Ambassador) hello, can we get back to the duel now?

(Jase) oh, yes i put two cards face down and end my turn.

(Ambassador) now i activate my ultimate offering! i now lower my life points by 1500 to summon three extra monsters and now i summon my fourth monster now i have a total of 5100 Atk points and now i attack you!

(Jase) I activate my trap dragon claws! this lets me discard two e-dragon card from my hand to halve all of your mnster attack points and that only leaves 1650 damage

(Ambassador) so what you still have less life points than you, now go attack him and his monster!

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Ambassador 2900[/align]

Jase takes the damge then looks at his body none of his body has disappeared then he hears a screem,

(Sarah) Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Jase looks at her body most of it has disappeared. he turns to the ambassador

(Jase) whats going on why didn't my body disappear!

(ambassador) yes i forgot to tell you that as well you don't disappear your little girlfriend does!

(Jase) she's not my girlfriend!

suddenly Alec comes running round the corner and meets sarah

(Alec) whats happening?

sarah explains whats happening to him.

(Jase) right my turn next i activate dragon shadow! i can special summon two dragon tokens on my side of the field then i tribute them to suumon my ultimate creature my neos dragon!

a giant vortex appears above jase and a dragon appears roaring and hovers just next to him,

(Jase) due to my dragon shadow none of my monsters can attack so i play the spell misfire! by halving my life points you miss your next battle phrase.

(Ambassador) finally, the legendary neos dragon has been summon in front of my own eyes, and it will be my priverladge to destroy it next i activate my trap fairy of hell i now send all my monsters to the graveyard to summon my ultimate monster lost angel of the ancients this monster gains the halve the attack that all the monster in my graveyard have so that gives it 3250 ATK points but thanks to your spell can't attack this turn but next turn your finished.

(Jase) before my turn i need to ask you one queston, my monster isn't so rare my brother gave it to me when he got a new deck i bet millions of duelist have got one.

(Ambassador) you don't know do you, that monster is the only one in exestance so thats why i want it.

(Jase) what, wait, whoa that means i have got one of the rarest cards in existance, brilliant! right now i summon E-dragon furnace and now i fuse my neos dragon and my furnace with contact dragon fusion to form Inferno Neos dragon! this monsters effect is if i discard cards in my hand i can then increase my inferno neos's ATK by 400 so i discard 5 card to increase my monsters attack by 2000 so that gives it 4500 attack points now go destroy his monster!

neos dragon destroys the monster and leaves the ambassadors body allmost gone.

Jase 2350

Ambassador 1650

(Jase) i now activate a trap card rapid fire breath this lets me inflict 500 points of damge for each e-dragon in my grave so since there is 5 i now inflict 2500 points of damge and you loose!

(Ambassador) nooooooooooooooooooooo!

his body starts to completly disappear and then evapourates into dust.

Jase turns around to meet sarah and alec sarah's body is back to normal.

(Sarah) thanks jase

(Alec) whoa, that was one of the best duels i have ever seen!

(Jase) yeah i thought i might loose at one point but in the end i still won now all i have to do is get this duel disk off,

jase tries to get the duel disk of but it won't budge, so they all try but it still won't come off all of a sudden an ghost appears it was the ambassador.

(Ambassador) i see you you can't get my duel disk of shall i tell you why Jase Brown that duel disk is a bomb!

To be Continued......