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Yu-Gi-Oh Servent Of Darkness (Chapter 4 Posted!)

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Hey everyone, i've decided to make a fan fic, i've worked hard on it so please read and comment.

 

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Heres chapter 1, enjoy!

 

Chapter 1- A Twist Of Fate

 

His name was Steven King.

 

He was one of the top duellists in the world. He had just walked out of the building as the new champion of yet another tournament. He noticed a strange looking man waiting for him outside.

Man: You must be Steven King.

Steven: Yeah, and who are you?

Man: No-one knows my real name, but you may call me Raven. I manage some of the best duellists in the world.

Steven: And you want to manage me?

Raven: Yes, I could use someone with you talents.

Steven: Hmmm…I don’t know?

Raven: How about we settle the matter with a duel?

Steven: You’re on!

They both switched on there duel disks, shuffled there decks and drew five cards. Raven’s duel disk was quite unusual. The duel disk was gold and round; in the middle was the millennium symbol.

Steven- 8000LP- 5 cards

Raven- 8000LP- 5 cards

Steven: I’ll start!

Steven drew a card. He had never lost a duel before, but he had no idea what he was in for.

Steven: I’ll summon Mirage dragon (ATK 1600/DEF 600) in attack mode. Then I end my turn.

Raven: My move!

Raven drew a card and smiled. He already knew the outcome of this duel.

Raven: I activate Cost Down, by discarding a card; I can downgrade the levels of the monsters in my hand by two. Then I’ll summon, Millennium Scorpion (ATK 2000/DEF 1800), but wait, there’s more, I’ll activate Double Summon, this let’s me summon once more, so say hello to another Millennium Scorpion (ATK 2000/DEF 1800. Now, Millennium Scorpion attack his Mirage Dragon!

Millennium Scorpion charged at Mirage Dragon and sliced it in half with its deadly claws.

Steven: NO!

Steven- 7600LP- 5 cards

Raven- 8000LP- 2 cards

Raven: Oh, and my Millennium Scorpion ability activates, each time it destroys a monster, it gets stronger by 300 points (New attack: 2300). Millennium Scorpion 2, attack his life points!

The monsters attack caused Steven to drop to his knees.

Steven- 5600LP- 5 cards

Raven- 8000LP- 2 cards

Steven: My turn!

Steven drew a card.

Steven: I activate Monster Reborn, which lets me revive my Mirage Dragon. Then I’ll tribute it to summon, Luster Dragon #2 (ATK 2400/DEF 1400) in attack mode. Then I activate my Lightning Vortex spell card. By discarding a card, I can destroy all your monsters.

Raven: No!

Steven: Luster Dragon #2 attack his life points!

The monster hit Raven with a powerful blast of fire. End my turn.

Steven- 5600LP- 2 cards

Raven- 5600LP- 2 cards

Raven drew a card. Even though he was defenceless he still smiled.

Raven: I use Brain Control, by paying 800 life points; I can take control of your monster for 1 turn.

Steven: Oh NO!

Raven: Then I equip Luster Dragon #2 with Mega Morph.

Steven: What the hell does that do?

Raven: If my life points are lower than yours, my monsters attack doubles.

Steven: NO!

(New attack: 4800)

Raven: Attack!

Luster Dragon #2 hit Steven with a powerful blast of fire.

Steven- 800LP- 2 cards

Raven- 4800LP- 2 cards

Raven: I place a card face down and end my move.

Steven: Yes! My Dragons back to me and you have no monsters on the field.

Raven: Oh I forgot to tell you; since I have more life points then you now, your dragon’s attack points half, thanks to Mega Morph.

Steven: WHAT!

(New attack: 1200)

Steven: I DON’T CARE!!! Luster Dragon #2 attack his life point directly.

Raven: Fool. I use my face down card, Magic Cylinder! You lose life points equal to your monster attack!

Steven: Nooo!!! That means I lose!

Steven- 0LP- 3cards

Raven- 4800LP- 1cards

This was Steven first lose.

Raven: I summon Exodia Necrose!

Steven: The duels over you idiot!

Raven: I’m not playing a child’s game, fool. Exodia Necrose, wipe his memory! Make him think he works for me and my organisation! Leave his knowledge of duelling!

Steven: Wa…

Steven’s memory was disappearing bit by bit, until….it was all gone.

 

Made Up Cards In The Story (so far):

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Thanks you two.

 

Chapter 2 is done.

 

Chapter 2- A Duel To The End

 

In an island surrounded by darkness stood Raven’s hideout, known as ‘The Tower of Darkness’.

Raven sat in his office having a word with his top two agents.

Raven: Daniel, Hunter, we have a new recruit, Steven King.

Hunter: Why him?

Steven entered the office. He was not the same person he previously was.

Steven: Why did you wish to see me, master?

Raven: I have a task for you. Duel Jesse Anderson.

Daniel: He’s the punk with the Crystal Beasts.

Raven: Once you win, hand over his Crystal Beasts to me. I need the cards won from a duel, is that clear?

Steven: As you wish, sir.

Raven: You two, go with him.

Hunter: Yes, master.

Raven had already tracked down Jesse. It wasn’t long before the three of them found him.

Steven: Jesse! Duel me and when I win you hand over your Crystal Beast cards.

Jesse: You think I’d agree to that?

Anger grew within Steven. He punched Jesse five times in the stomach which got him to the ground and took Jesse’s Topaz Tiger.

Steven: Unless you want me to tear this card, DUEL ME!

Jesse: No! Not Topaz Tiger! Fine then, I’ll duel you.

Don’t worry Topaz Tiger, I’ll save you.

Steven: Oh, really?

Jesse: You don’t get it do you? I have a special bond with my monsters. There family to me.

Steven: Family my ass.

Steven- 8000LP- 5 cards

Jesse- 8000LP- 5cards

Jesse: I’ll start!

Jesse drew a card. He was very determined to win back his tiger.

Jesse: I summon, Crystal Beast Sapphire Pegasus! Thanks to it ability I can put Crystal Beast Ruby Carbuncle in my spell and trap card zone. I end my turn.

Steven: What a waste! I draw! I summon Dragon Fiend (ATK1000/DEF500) in attack mode!

Jesse: Do you think that can beat my Pegasus?

Steven: Yes! You see my monster’s ability increases its power by 1000 when it battles with a creature with 1500 or more.

Dragon Fiend tackled Sapphire Pegasus with its extreme speed.

Steven- 8000LP- 5 cards

Jesse- 7800LP- 4cards

Jesse: My move. I use Monster Reborn to get back my Sapphire Pegasus. Then I’ll summon Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth. Next I’ll equip my Pegasus with Mystic Moon, which strengthens his power by 300. (New Attack: 2100) Now Sapphire Pegasus attack his Dragon!

Dragon Fiend was destroyed, costing Steven 100 points.

Steven- 7900LP- 5 cards

Jesse- 7800LP- 2cards

Now, summon Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth, get his life points!

Amber Mammoth stomped 1700 of Steven’s life points.

Steven- 6200LP- 5 cards

Jesse- 7800LP- 2cards

Steven: My turn. I use Pot of Greed; it lets me draw twice more. Steven drawed twice. He laughed.

Steven: Hahahah!! I win! First I’ll use Dark Hole.

Jesse: No! That destroys all my monsters!

Steven: Then I use Double Summon, which let’s me summon twice this turn. So I summon Mirage Dragon (ATK1600/DEF600). But I tribute it to summon Luster Dragon #2 (ATK2400/DEF1400) in attack mode.

Jesse: Sorry, you need a lot more then that to bring my life points to 0.

Steven: I’m not done! I use Mega Morph! It double the attack of the equipped monster if my life points are less then yours. (New Attack: 4800). Wait, there’s more, I use another Mega Morph! (New Attack: 9600)

Jesse: NO!!!

Steven: Yes! Luster Dragon #2 attack!

Luster Dragon #2 scratched Jesse with its powerful claws.

Steven- 6200LP- 1card

Jesse- 0P- 2cards

Steven took Jesse’s Crystal Beasts and walked off.

Jesse: Wait, please don’t! There my friends, I can’t live with out them! PLEASE!

Steven: Shut the hell up!

The three of them made their way back to Raven.

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Heres Chapter 3!

 

Chapter 3- Light vs Dark

 

Steven: Here are the Crystal Beasts.

Raven: Excellent! But while you were gone a portal to a dimension where real duel monsters hide appeared in Rome. I’m not sure how it appeared. Maybe because so much duel energy has been realesed lately. I need you three to go there and get me the three legendary dragons, The eye of Timaios, The Caws of Hermous and the Fangs of Critius. Use these!

Raven gave Hunter three plain cards.

Raven: By simply defeating the dragons in battle there sprits will be trapped within these cards.

Daniel: We won’t fail, master.

They all set out for Rome. They took a plane. Steven looked at Hunter; he noticed a scar on his face.

Steven: How did that happen?

Hunter: When I was a little boy, about 5 years old, I was attacked by a vicious wolf-like beast. It was about to finish me off, until a huge creature came and saved me. After saving my life, it turned into a card. It was Sengenjin, a monster with 2750 attack points.

Plane Driver: We have arrived to Rome!

They got off the plane and easily found the portal. They were about to go in, until……

???? We can’t let you go in there!

They all turned round to see Yugi Moto and Joey Wheeler.

Daniel: Your Yugi and Joey!

Suddenly the millennium puzzle flashed.

Yugi (Atem): If Raven gets his hands on the three dragons; he’ll be one step closer to bringing darkness to the world.

Hunter: How do you know about Master Raven?

Yugi (Atem): Let’s duel and if we win, you go no where near this portal.

Hunter: Fine! I’ll crush you!

Steven: No, let’s make it a tag duel.

Joey: Fine!

Atem&Joey&Hunter&Steven: Let’s duel!

Steven- 8000LP- 5 cards

Hunter- 8000LP- 5 cards

Yugi- 8000LP- 5 cards

Joey- 8000LP- 5 cards

Hunter: I’ll start! I summon, Battle Ox (ATK1700/DEF1000), in attack mode. I’ll place a face down card and end my move.

Yugi (Atem): My move. I play Gamma, The Magnet Warrior (ATK1500/DEF1800) in defence mode! Then I’ll end my turn.

Steven: My turn. I use the Cheerful Coffin, magic card; it allows me to discard 3 cards.

Joey: So.?

Yugi (Atem): He must be planning something Joey!

Steven: Then I’ll summon Decoy Dragon (ATK300/DEF200) in attack mode and end my turn.

Joey: I’ll wipe the floor with ya slime balls! I summon Swordsman of Landstar (ATK500/DEF1200) in attack mode. Now attack his Decoy Dragon!

Yugi (Atem): Joey! NO!

Steven: You’ve activated my dragon’s ability! When it is selected as a target, I can choose a level 7 or above, dragon monster in my grave and special summon. I choose Hyozanryu (AK2100/DEF2800). Oh and now you’re forced to attack my new dragon.

Joey: NO!

Swordsman of Landstar attacked Hyozanryu but was easily destroyed.

Steven- 8000LP- 2cards

Hunter- 8000LP- 4cards

Yugi- 8000LP- 5 cards

Joey- 6400LP- 5 cards

Joey: I’m sorry Yugi.

Yugi (Atem): We can still win Joey.

Hunter: My turn. I use the card Change Of Heart on Joey’s monster.

Joey: No! Now you can take control of my monster!

Hunter: Then I’ll sacrifice my monsters to summon, my ultimate beast! Sengenjin! (ATK2750/DEF2500).

Yugi (Atem): Oh, NO!

Hunter: You have no monsters Joey! And my monster is ready to attack! So it’s only a matter of time before we crush you! HAHAH!!

 

To Be Continued.

 

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It's random.

 

"While you were gone, a portal to another dimension appeared."

 

Like that happens every now and then. He didn't really seem to care. Also, you have many grammar problems. You might not be one of those people that care about grammar, but I am.

 

Rating: 5 / 10.

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