punchlamb Posted May 10, 2015 Report Share Posted May 10, 2015 Hello! This is a post where anyone can post duels with custom made cards. I will do mine here. Feel free to comment! Duel! Mass destruction Deck Vs. Earthy grave Deck Earthy Grave player's name is : Joe (sorry cant think of good names) Joe: I start! Draw! I special summon three hidden soldiers, and set a card face down. End of turn. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mass destruction player's name is: Jon Jon: My move. Draw! Jon: I will discard my World destroyer to activate MASS DESTRUCTION!! Jon:Mass destruction destroys all cards on the field. So say goodbye to your Hidden Soldiers! Joe:Not quite. I chain HOLE OF DESTRUCTION Joe:It destroys all cards on the field, sure but it negated your mass destruction and destroys it. Plus, i can special summon a monster from either players graveyard ignoring the summoning conditions. So i summon WORLD DESTROYER! Jon: OH NO! i end my turn . . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Joe:My move!! I draw! Joe: WORLD DESTROYER! ATTACK JON DIRECTLY! Jon LP 8000 - 8000 = 0 JOE IS THE WINNER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarlandChaos Posted May 10, 2015 Report Share Posted May 10, 2015 This should be moved to the Games subforum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted May 10, 2015 Report Share Posted May 10, 2015 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/255950-ycm-creative-writing-forum-rules/ (I'll let Nai or Axi deal with the rule stuff, since this falls under their jurisdiction; not mine) Anyway, the story thus far is bland and violates the section rules. First, you're using script format and second, I certainly don't think this qualifies as two pages; not even one page. (Your card pics don't count) Here, Joe just happens to have a broken as heck card (Hole of Destruction) timed to negate said Field Spell, and conveniently able to revive said 8000 ATK monster from opponent's Graveyard. I'd go even farther and say that said World Destroyer violates any/all card making principles that you should've been following. (Yeah, it's just a broken card that Jon just happened to have, and then it backfired hard on him). Yeah, there's really not much I can say, aside from it lacking in details and more/less a plot device situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted May 10, 2015 Report Share Posted May 10, 2015 This isn't what the Creative Writing forum is for. Moved to Games. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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