My first tag in ever - Into the Void

[L0SS]

For the first time in a long time, I fancied making a tag. I kept it pretty simple as to just relearn the basics and remove some of the rust. CnC is appreciated as I may get back into this fully.

 

 

[·Toot]

I like it. The thing that throws me off though is the smoke cloud. Why does it stop abruptly on the left like that? I feel like it could be blended a little more as well. Still cool though.

[L0SS]

I like it. The thing that throws me off though is the smoke cloud. Why does it stop abruptly on the left like that? I feel like it could be blended a little more as well. Still cool though.

That's a really good point and I've no idea... might have to fix that! Cheers.

[Catman25]

Absence of color on the right side looks almost like two separate tags. Extending the starry bg to the right may make it seem a bit simple, but there's some nice texture going on in it, and that smudgy smoke looks pretty sick. The way it converges with the bg is pretty interesting. They kinda textually look similar, so I think it works

[Smear]

right now, the smoke cloud kinda gives it a sense of depth, if you can work on that and make it even better then it'll look awesome.

and yeah, like cat said, looks kinda like 2 separate tags, try and put some of that space stock a bit to the right and idk work more with the smoke cloud, you've got something with the potential to be really cool here.