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Plot:It has been Five years since the devastating Grand Championship that left Zigfried with nothing and hanging out on a limb.He vowed revenge in his heart, he may have told everyone he changed but his heart had not. Now, he has a new plan that could endanger the Lives of the ones who stopped him before.The only hope are the Children of the original cast, and an unlikely ally, Zigfried's Younger Sister, who had been adopted in by the Kaibas at a young age. She could't make a move to intervene last time, but this time she will fight too. But will the combined power of the Children, Anastasia and their parents be enough to stop Zigfried's dastardly plan?? Also, what happened to Leon? Anastasia wields his deck, and A frightening Water Deck. But is it enough to stop siegfried? only time will tell..

 

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[spoiler=Available Canons?]Protagonists[edit] Yugi Mutou[edit]

Main article: Yugi Mutou

Yugi Mutou (武藤 遊戯 Mutō Yūgi?Yugi Muto and pronounced "Moto" in the English anime) is the main protagonist of the story. He wears the Millennium Puzzle (千年パズルSennen Pazuru?), one of the seven Millennium Items and an ancient Egyptian artifact holding the spirit of an ancient Egyptian pharaoh. When Yugi is playing a game or under stress, he becomes possessed by the 3,000-year-old (5,000 in the English anime) spirit inside the Millennium Puzzle, known as Yami (Dark) Yugi, changing his personality to a cold and confident person. Initially, Yugi could be described as soft-spoken, timid, meek, and shy, but as the series progresses, his character develops to the point where he has a much bigger presence and becomes more outspoken. He fears the other personality inside him at first, however, as the narrative progresses, he grows a strong bond with his other self and considers his other soul a close and valuable friend. One defining character moment for him was when he defeated an antagonist without Dark Yugi's help, Ryuji Otogi, in a game of Dungeon Dice Monsters (DDD in the manga) under bleak circumstances, proving that he is truly worthy of being the Millennium Puzzle's wielder.

In the first series anime, Yugi is voiced by Megumi Ogata. In the Duel Monsters anime, he is voiced by Shunsuke Kazama. In the English dub, he is voiced by Dan Green.

Dark Yugi[edit]

Dark Yugi (闇遊戯 Yami Yūgi?, initially Yami Yugi or The Spirit of the Millennium Puzzle in the English anime, later referred to as just The Pharaoh or Nameless Pharaoh in the Japanese anime) is the second personality inhabiting Yugi's body, a 3,000-year-old gambling spirit of an ancient Pharaoh who resides in the Millennium Puzzle. Like his host, he shares a fondness for games and gaming culture, often referred to in the manga as Game King (遊戯王 Yūgiō?King of Games in most English translations).[1][2] He appears whenever Yugi's in trouble, challenging bullies and criminals to occult judgment games called Shadow Games (闇のゲーム Yami no Gēmu?) and enforces Penalty Games (罰ゲーム Batsu Gēmu?) to enact ironic justice (the default powers of a Millennium Item wielder). A defining character moment for him is when he decides to stop using them after his battle with Pegasus, who tells him that the Millennium Items contain an evil intelligence.[3] In the second series anime, Dark Yugi comes off as a lot more merciful as a character because this subplot is written out. As the story progresses to the point where he's more than just a split personality, he becomes more and more independent of Yugi and develops a desire to find out who he is and where he came from.

Even compared to Yugi, he seems to have the most knowledge on gaming and gambling culture within the whole cast, noticeably when he explains Ryuji Otogi's bar bet games to the normal Yugi, who noticed that his games didn't feel like they were fair. In addition, the original manga's version of Dark Yugi seems to have a somewhat dark sense of humor in his dialogue, even after his decision to stop inflicting Penalty Games. This personality trait is an aspect that is retained in his first series anime version. However, in the second series anime, Dark Yugi is somewhat more serious and loses much of the dark sense of humor he originally had in the manga.

Yugi and his friends eventually find out that he is the spirit of an ancient Pharaoh who has long forgotten his name. At the end of the manga, it's revealed that his name as Pharaoh was Atem (アテム Atemu?), who sealed his soul into the Puzzle along with the Great God of Evil, Zorc Necrophades.

In the first series anime, Dark Yugi is voiced by Megumi Ogata. In the Duel Monsters anime, he is voiced by Shunsuke Kazama. In the English dub, he is voiced by Dan Green.

Katsuya Jonouchi[edit]

Katsuya Jōnouchi (城之内 克也 Jōnouchi Katsuya?Joey Wheeler in the English anime) is Yugi's best friend. Initially nothing more than a street thug and former bully; throwing Yugi's Millennium Puzzle piece into the swimming pool and disgusted at how unmanly he was. When Ushio decides to be Yugi's self-imposed bodyguard in order to extort money from him, he beats up Jonouchi and Honda, Yugi stands up for them, and it's then that Jonouchi realizes that he was jealous of Yugi's "treasure" all along, and later on that night, he retrieves the Millennium Puzzle piece and brings it back to Yugi's house, where Yugi completes it and challenges Ushio to the first Shadow Game of the series. Jonouchi is touched by Yugi's behavior towards him and they become loyal friends, forming his own "treasure."

Jonouchi is good at fist fighting and is usually able to take on people bigger than him, such as Bandit Keith (in the anime, this quality is underplayed and he gets beaten up by Bandit Keith instead). Though not exactly the best gamer in Domino, he develops a better liking to them thanks to Yugi, and he's managed to use his strong points to help Yugi come through in earlier story lines. Later on, he develops an interest in the Duel Monsters game, the latest fad at the time. Though unskilled at first, with Yugi's help, he trains for the Duelist Kingdom tournament in order to free Sugoroku's soul from the portable TV and save his sister's eyesight; progressively getting better throughout the series to the point where he could be called a match for Dark Yugi. Jonouchi is shown to have a very kind heart, selfless and caring, considerate, and eager willingness to help and save those he deeply cares for and loves, but he also demonstrates a near lack of modesty and can be rather rash at times, making him a source of comic relief. Jonouchi notes that, before he met Yugi, he was never really motivated for anything. As the story progressed, he learned to channel his anger into games instead of his fists. In the first series anime, Joey is voiced by Toshiyuki Morikawa. In the Duel Monsters anime, he is voiced by Hiroki Takahashi. In the English dub, he is voiced by Wayne Grayson portraying the character with a New York style accent to reflect how the Japanese character often left out honorifics.

Anzu Mazaki[edit]

Anzu Mazaki (真崎 杏子 Mazaki Anzu?Téa Gardner in the English anime dub) is Yugi's childhood friend, an extremely supportive girl with a lot of spirit for her friends, who Yugi has a crush on. Anzu is not an avid game-player and her ability is well below that of Yugi, though she exhibits some knowledge of video game RPGs during the Monster World arc. Her dueling ability is decent and she used to defeat Jonouchi in school before he became a seasoned duelist. She is athletic, has a strong school spirit, and secretly worked at a fast food restaurant called Burger World to save money; her secret dream is to attend a dancing school abroad in New York. When Yugi and Jonouchi find out about these secrets when they followed her (thinking she's taking part in Enjo Kosai), she gains a new respect for Jonouchi and her childhood friend, who are more than willing to support their dream and keep her secret. Anzu is voiced by Yumi Kakazu in the original anime series. In the Duel Monsters anime, she is voiced by Maki Saitō. Téa is voiced by Amy Birnbaum in the English dub.

Hiroto Honda[edit]

Hiroto Honda (本田 ヒロト Honda Hiroto?Tristan Taylor in the English anime) who is in class 1-B at Domino High School, is a boy who became a friend of Yugi Mutou,Katsuya Jonouchi, and Anzu Mazaki. Later on, he becomes a friend to Ryo Bakura as well. In the manga, Honda starts out as Jonouchi's street thug henchman and also (at first) has a crush on Miho Nosaka. Though he still dislikes Yugi at first, he asks for his help in writing a love letter to her in the form of a puzzle. When the vain teacher Ms. Chono threatened to confiscate the puzzle, threatening to punish Miho Nosaka if the secret admirer doesn't come clean, Yugi and Jonouchi stood up for him. Ms. Chrono decides to put together the puzzle to find out who the sender is anyway, and Dark Yugi secretly turns it into a Shadow Game, shattering Ms. Chono's pretty face as the Penalty Game. From then on, Honda warms up to Yugi and becomes one of his dearest friends.

Honda is voiced by Ryotaro Okiayu in the first series. In Duel Monsters he is first voiced by Takayuki Kondō, then by Hidehiro Kikuchi from Episode 53 onwards. In the English dub, Tristan is voiced by Sam Riegel for the first ten episodes and Greg Abbey from episode 11 onwards.

Ryo Bakura[edit]

Ryo Bakura (獏良 了 Bakura Ryō?, simply Bakura in the English anime) is a transfer student (British in the English anime version, voiced by Ted Lewis) who becomes friends with the main group of the story. Like Yugi, he is also interested in games, particularly tabletop role-playing games like Monster World (モンスター・ワールド Monsutā Wārudo?). Bakura, the holder of the Millennium Ring (千年輪 Sennen Ringu?), has a dark spirit dwelling inside himself, much like Dark Yugi. Before he is introduced to the story, he was constantly moving schools and isolating himself due to the fact that, every time he played a game with his friends, his friends would end up in a coma. This is revealed to be Dark Bakura inflicting Penalty Games on them, which trapped their souls into RPG miniature figures. Together with Yugi and his friends, they join forces to crush Dark Bakura in a Shadow Game of Monster World. From then on, the normal Bakura joins the main group in many of their conflicts. Despite the danger, Bakura continues to hold onto the Millennium ring,remaining deeply curious about it's history. This, along with his trusting and innocent nature,sometimes brings him into conflict with the others and also allows Dark Bakura to continually possess him without his knowledge. Prior to meeting Yugi and his friends, Bakura's sister, Amane, died in a car accident.(This detail is omitted from the second series.) Bakura misses her very much, and often writes letters to her in heaven. The first animated series also included the character Miho Nosaka, who had a crush on Bakura. In the Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Monsters anime, his role in the group is greatly reduced compared to the manga, as he is mostly being controlled by Dark Bakura and doesn't accompany Yugi and his friends as much as he did in the manga, and is excluded from filler arcs. In addition, he is introduced in the middle of the Duelist Kingdom story as someone they merely knew from school, as opposed to being a close friend, and his love for tabletop role-playing games has been greatly written out. Bakura is voiced byTsutomu Kashiwakura. In Duel Monsters he is first voiced by Yō Inoue, then by Rica Matsumoto from episode 50 onwards. In the English dub, Bakura is voiced by Ted Lewis.

Miho Nosaka (1998 anime)[edit]

See also: Other Characters

Miho Nosaka (野坂 ミホ Nosaka Miho?Melody in the English DDM video game) was a one-shot minor character in the manga, who was re-written as a main character for the 1998 Toei anime adaptation. Here, she is a very good friend of Yugi and the best friend of Anzu Mazaki. This version of Miho is a cheerful, kind, and caring girly girl who loves all things that are cute, her friends, and is one of the school's treasures (according to Honda). Miho tends to talk in third person and has gotten crushes on many of the male cast members throughout the show (particularly ones she deems cool) but isn't interested in Honda in any way other than as a friend (whereas he is madly in love with her). Miho has a stubborn side, and whenever her friends are threatened, she will not hesitate to get serious and do whatever she can to protect them like when Warashibe poisoned Anzu, Honda, and Jonouchi. While Miho is overall sweet and innocent, she is shown to be smarter than she lets on and has a manipulative side to her and isn't above letting her desires be known in front of Honda, who she knows has a huge crush for her. This includes him waiting in line to buy her a collectible watch, waiting in line for perfume, and making it sound like she was considering taking him on a trip with her if he won her a digital pets contest. While this would imply a lack of care for Honda, Miho is shown to love him dearly (just not in a romantic way) as when she thought he'd died she began sobbing uncontrollably and resolved to fight for his sake. When she finds out he's alive, she teams up with Jonouchi to fight against Ryuichi and Aileen who were keeping Honda and Yugi's grandfather captive.

Miho is voiced by Yukana in the first anime adaptation. She does not appear in the Duel Monsters version.

Antagonists[edit] Dark Bakura[edit]

Dark Bakura (闇獏良 Yami Bakura?Yami Bakura in the English anime) is a dark spirit dwelling inside of the Millennium Ring, much like Dark Yugi. This dark half of Ryo Bakura, Dark Bakura, intends to collect all of the Millennium items, and quite clearly does not care for anyone who might get in his way. His goal is to use them to open the Door of Darkness, which grants evil power to anyone that opens it. To do so, he takes control over Ryo Bakura's body against Ryo Bakura's will, since he doesn't have a body of his own. In the beginning of the story, he torments Ryo Bakura by taking over his body whenever he played a game with his friends and used Penalty Games to trap their souls into TRPG miniatures for the Monster World game, causing Ryo to constantly transfer schools. With the help of Yugi and Yugi's other self, Jonouchi, Anzu, and Honda (and Miho in the 1998 anime), they were able to temporarily purge Dark Bakura's influence on their friend by defeating the final boss of Monster World, Dark Master Zorc (闇の支配者(ダーク・マスター ゾーク) Dāku Masutā Zōku?). However, later on when the group is seemingly going to be trapped within the labyrinth below Duelist Kingdom, the spirit's voice within the Millennium Ring tricks Ryo Bakura into putting it on again, assuring Ryo that his other half will help save his friends and that the dark spirit has undergone a change of heart. With Ryo's friends unaware that he had once again put on the Millennium Ring, Dark Bakura helps Dark Yugi in his game that outs the Meikyū Brothers's trickery and they head to the surface.

For a while in the manga, it was unknown whether or not Dark Bakura was still a malevolent spirit. On one hand, he occasionally helped Yugi and his friends, trying to gain their uneasy trust and seemed to allow Ryo Bakura more free control of his body compared to his earlier treatment of his host (who was still unaware of what transpires whenever his other half took over). On the other hand, unbeknownst to the others, he is shown to be the one that killed Pegasus by tearing the Millennium Eye out of his eye socket and taking it for himself, licking the leftover blood. It's soon clear where his true standing was in the Dungeon Dice Monsters arc: after giving Yugi morale support during the game against Ryuji Otogi and helping him retrieve the pieces of the shattered Millennium Puzzle, Dark Bakura secretly plants a portion of his soul into one of the pieces to uncover the True Door from within, and intends to do anything he can to manipulate everything into place until the day comes where all of the Millnennium Items have gathered together, in preparation for the Shadow RPG (闇・R・P・G(ロール・プレイング・ゲーム) Yami Ā Pī Jī (Yami Rōru Pureingu Gēmu)?Shadow Role-Playing Game), with the ultimate goal of opening the Door of Darkness and unleashing the darkness sealed within the Puzzle. Unbeknownst to Ryo, throughout the later portion of the manga, his other self will occasionally take over his body whenever he sees the chance of furthering his own selfish goals. During the final arc, it is revealed he is an entity created by the merge of Thief King Bakura (盗賊王バクラ Tōzokuō Bakura?)'s soul and the soul of the dark god Zorc Necrophades. In the anime, it's said that the spirit is just Zorc Necrophades entirely.

Dark Bakura is voiced by Tsutomu Kashiwakura in the first series. In Duel Monsters he is first voiced by You Inoue, then by Rica Matsumoto from episode 50 onwards. In the English dub, Bakura is voiced by Ted Lewis.

Maximillion Pegasus[edit]

Maximillion J. Pegasus, known in Japanese versions as Pegasus J. Crawford (ペガサス・ジェイ・クロフォード Pegasasu Jei Kurofōdo?), is the eccentric American Chairman of Industrial Illusions (shortened to I²) and the creator of the game Duel Monsters (Magic & Wizards (M&W(マジックアンドウィザーズ) Majikku ando Wizāzu?) in the Japanese manga). He is the wielder of the Millennium Eye (千年眼, ミレニアムアイ Sennen Gan, Mireniamu Ai?). In the original manga, it's his story about meeting Shadi and the supposed "evil intelligence" of the Millennium Items that prompts Dark Yugi's search for the answer of who he is and where he came from. During his final Shadow Game with Yugi/Dark Yugi, he tells them of his discovery of an ancient Egyptian Shadow Game during his travels in the Valley of the Kings, which inspired his creation of Duel Monsters and the creation of card games in general, such as tarot cards. In the anime, as the creator of the card game Duel Monsters and the discoverer of their ancient Egyptian roots, Pegasus often plays a key role due to his extensive knowledge of the game and its mysterious origins. He has a habit of calling Yugi Mutou "Yugi-boy" and Seto Kaiba "Kaiba-boy" in the Japanese and edited English versions of the anime and manga. This trend continues in the Yu-Gi-Oh! GX anime, calling Judai Yuki "Jaden-boy." Interestingly, in Japanese versions of the manga and anime, Pegasus often uses English words interspliced with Japanese, including English words like "goodness gracious!" and "snap!" and using the English pronoun "you" instead of Japanese second-person words. His speech is also unique in terms of pronunciation. In both English and Japanese he tends to elongate vowel sounds, especially near the end of a sentence.

 

Pegasus quickly establishes himself as the manga's fourth main antagonist (and the second anime adaptation's first main antagonist), challenging Yugi Mutou to a Shadow Game in order to force him to come to his tournament Duelist Kingdom (決闘者の王国(デュエリストキングダム) Dyuerisuto Kingudamu?) and face him, taking the soul of his grandfather Sugoroku Mutou as a Penalty Game for losing the timed match to ensure this. In the manga, Pegasus locked Yugi's grandfather's soul into a video tape, rather than actually stealing it. Throughout the battles to get to Pegasus's castle, Yugi is seen talking to his grandfather through the use of a camcorder. In the anime, he traps Sugoroku in a Soul Prison Duel Monsters card. Pegasus also kidnaps Mokuba Kaiba to convince his brother Seto Kaiba to come as well. Through a series of flashbacks, Pegasus is revealed to have had a lover, Cyndia (シンディア Shindia?Cecelia in the English anime), who died just after their wedding (details regarding if they were actually married vary from medium to medium). In the manga, she died after her 17th birthday, before they even had a chance to get married. Pegasus is voiced by Jiro Takasugi in the original and by Darren Dunstan in the English adaptation.

 

Seto Kaiba[edit]

Seto Kaiba (海馬 瀬人 Kaiba Seto?). In the early manga, Seto discovers that the grandfather of his classmate, Yugi Mutou, owns the rare "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" card. Kaiba steals the card from Yugi by switching it with a fake copy. Yugi recognizes the card for a fake and duels Kaiba to get it back. Yugi, Honda Hiroto and Katsuya Jonouchi were beaten up by Kaiba's guards until the Darker Yugi from within the Millennium Puzzle confronts Kaiba and challenges to a Shadow Game with the card as a prize. Although Kaiba nearly wins, the magical nature of the game prevents the stolen Blue-Eyes from obeying him, and Kaiba is defeated, suffering a temporary Penalty Game—an illusion of being killed by monsters. In Toei's anime adaptation, he is voiced by Hikaru Midorikawa. In NAS/Gallop's Duel Monsters anime adaptation, he is voiced by Kenjirō Tsuda and Kiyomi Yazaki as a child. In the English dub of the latter, Kaiba is voiced by Eric StuartWatchMojo.com listed Seto Kaiba number ten in their Top 10 Anime Anti-Heroes.

Mokuba Kaiba[edit]

Mokuba Kaiba (海馬 モクバ Kaiba Mokuba?) is Seto Kaiba's younger brother. In the manga, Mokuba is characterized as a spoiled brat, always trying to trick Yugi Mutou to get back at him for defeating his older brother. In the pre-Death-T chapters of the manga, Mokuba tries to defeat Yugi before Kaiba has a chance to and challenges Katsuya Jonouchi and Yugi to a Russian Roulette Dinner (死の料理・ロシアンルーレット Shi no Ryōri Roshianrūretto?) and poisons Jonouchi. In the second series of the anime, Mokuba is eternally devoted to his brother Seto Kaiba and is constantly by his side. He is not as violent as his manga counterpart, and is not committed to avenge Seto's defeat. He befriends Yugi's group after they rescue him, thus making him the warmer, more sociable one of the two brothers. In the Toei anime series, he is voiced by Katsue Miwa. InDuel Monsters, Mokuba is voiced by Junko Takeuchi and by Tara Sands for season one to four then by Carrie Keranen from season five onwards in the English adaptation.

Sugoroku Mutou[edit]

Sugoroku Mutou (武藤 双六 Mutō Sugoroku?Solomon Muto in the English anime, Sugoroku Muto in the subtitled English anime and the Yu-Gi-Oh!: The Movie Animanga) is the grandfather of Yugi Mutou, who gave him his famous Millennium Puzzle as a present, which he had recovered from the tomb of Pharaoh Atem in his youth. He was once a gaming master who traveled all over the world to try all sorts of games and win them all, vowing that if he ever lost a game, he'd "open up a game shop, wear overalls, and collect years instead of chips". In the present, he's an overall-wearing old man who owns a game shop called Kame Game, where Yugi and his friends get several of the games they play. In the second series anime adaptation, he taught Katsuya Jonouchi how to play the Duel Monsters card game. Similar to his grandson, his fondness for games is evident even in his name: "Sugoroku" is a Japanese game similar to Backgammon. Sugoroku is the reincarnation of Ancient Egyptian vizier, Siamun Muran, right-hand man to the Pharaoh Atem.

Sugoroku is voiced by Takeshi Aono for the Toei anime series, Tadashi Miyazawa for the second series in Japanese, while Maddie Blaustein handled his voice for the English adaptation, with Marc Diraison voicing him for Episode 199. Following Blaustein's death in 2008, Wayne Grayson provided his voice for Yu-Gi-Oh! 3D: Bonds Beyond Time.

Ryuji Otogi[edit]

Ryuji Otogi (御伽 龍児 Otogi Ryūji?Duke Devlin in the English anime) is a talented game inventor and is also the creator of Dungeon Dice Monsters (Dragons, Dice, & Dungeons (D·D·D(ドラゴン・ダイス・&(アンド)ダンジョンズ) Doragon Daisu ando Danjonzu?) in the manga). According to his father, Mr. Clown, Ryuji was born in order to fulfill his father's revenge on Sugoroku Mutou. Sugoroku had defeated Mr. Otogi in a Shadow Game called the Devil's Board Game, causing him to age 50 years in one night as a Penalty Game. Ryuji was transferred to Domino High School, where Yugi Mutou (Sugoroku's grandson) goes to school. His father used this as an opportunity for Ryuji to defeat Yugi in a series of games and fulfill the family's revenge.[2]

In the Japanese versions, his personality change between the manga and anime is apparent in his use of boku (僕?, polite male pronounce for I) in the anime as oppose to ore(俺?, masculine and boastful pronoun of "I") in the manga.

In the anime, the influence of Ryuji's father is omitted entirely. Instead, it is explained that that Ryuji befriended Pegasus, who became fond of his DDD(DDM) game, and wanted to help him market the game. Following his defeat by Yugi Mutou, Ryuji's idol is no longer interested in their earlier deal. Angry and bitter, he blames Yugi and (falsely) believes he cheated in his match against Pegasus. After learning the truth, he befriends Yugi and the others and will often join them on their adventures. Despite his arrogance and being one of the more negative, sarcastic members of the group, he is fairly smart and level headed. His personality often causes conflict with Honda(Tristan), especially over Shizuka(Serenity), who they both have a crush on.

He is voiced by Ryo Naito in the original and by Marc Thompson for the English adaptation.

Shadi[edit]

Shadi (シャーディー Shādī?) is the first Millennium Item wielder to cause trouble for Yugi and his friends in the story, serving as the main antagonist & protagonist for the Trial of the Mind arc of the manga. He holds the Millennium Key (千年錠 Sennen Jō?, also known as the Millennium Ankh), which allowed him to peer into the inner souls of humans and gave him the ability to rearrange their personality as he pleased, and the Millennium Scales (千年秤 Sennen Bakari?), which had the power to weigh the evil in a person's heart in the same vein as Anubis's "Weighing of the Heart" trials in Egyptian mythology, using the feather of Ma'at. In the second series anime, his ownership of the Scales isn't revealed until the last arc. In the Toei anime, he is voiced by Kaneto Shiozawa. In the Duel Monsters anime, he is voiced by Nozomu Sasaki.

Ishizu Ishtar[edit]

Ishizu Ishtar, known in Japanese versions as Isis Ishtar (イシズ・イシュタール Ishizu Ishutāru?), is a character in the manga Yu-Gi-Oh! and the second series Yu-Gi-Oh! anime(known as Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Monsters in Asia). Marik's elder sister, Ishizu became a museum curator in order to lure Yugi Mutou and Seto Kaiba to her in order to keep Marik from fulfilling his goals. To aid her, she holds the Millennium Tauk (千年首飾り Sennen Tauku?, known as the Millennium Necklace in the English anime) that has the power to foresee events in the near future. She is voiced by Sumi Shimamoto in the Japanese version and in the flashbacks she is voiced by Sakura Nogawa. In the English adaptation she is voiced by Karen Neil.

Rishid Ishtar[edit]

Rishid Ishtar (リシド・イシュタール Rishido Ishutāru?Odion Ishtar in the English anime) is Marik's adoptive brother and the second-in-command of the Ghouls. Abandoned as a child, Rishid was taken in by Marik's mother prior to his birth. However, his father never accepted him as a suitable heir and treated him as a servant rather than a son. Despite this, Rishid had always desire to become a true part of the family and an heir to the tombkeeper clan. When Marik was born, his mother told him to take care of his younger brother and Rishid stood by Marik's side, even when he turned to a life of evil. Marik and Rishid were close siblings, but Rishid always harbored a resentment for him as the true heir to the tombkeeper's clan and legitimate son of his parents. When Marik was bitten by a cobra and became ill, their father beat Rishid, furious he allowed Marik to be harmed, and ordered that he not leave Marik's bedside until he recovered. Rishid takes a dagger to Marik's room with the intent to kill him in his sleep (this is edited out in the dub, along with Rishid's resentment for Marik). Marik awakens and murmurs "brother", causing Rishid to drop the weapon in shock: Marik sees Rishid as his brother, despite the fact they are not blood related. In the English adaptation he is voiced by Michael Alston Bailey. He is voiced by KONTA in the Japanese version.

Mai Kujaku[edit]

Mai Kujaku (孔雀 舞 Kujaku Mai?Mai Valentine in the English anime) is an attractive woman who spent most of her life alone. While working as a blackjack dealer on a cruise ship, she developed a cynical attitude towards people and showed no shame in manipulating men, who displayed foolish infatuation towards her and previously used her "Aroma Tactics" to easily beat them in card games. Although she made a lot of money doing this, it caused her to hate people more until she got sick of her job and quit. She became a powerful, successful duelist thanks to her Harpie-themed deck. However, Mai had no true friends, and dueled simply for pride and monetary gain, but also entered the Duelist Kingdom tournament to find the things she used to cherish. When Mai joined the Duelist Kingdom tournament to seek the prize money, she met Yugi Mutou and his friends and steadily forged a true friendship with them after they rescued her Star Chips from the Player Killer of Darkness to help her stay in the tournament. Mai subsequently faced Yugi in the semi-finals, but ultimately chose to surrender to him when she decided she could not win, telling him that some losses only serve to make people stronger. In the anime, she was raised in a wealthy household, but was barely acknowledged by her relatives.

In the 4Kids version, Mai's past as a blackjack dealer was omitted and both she and her Harpie Ladies' appearance were censored to remove sexual references. Mai is voiced byHaruhi Terada in the Japanese series and originally by Megan Hollingshead, then Bella Hudson (Season 4) for the English adaptation, and finally Caren Manuel for the 4Kids Uncut adaptation. Her English name is a reference to "my valentine".

Shizuka Kawai[edit]

Shizuka Kawai (川井 静香 Kawai Shizuka?Shizuka Jounouchi (城之内静香 Jōunouchi Shizuka in the 1st series anime,[5]?Serenity Wheeler in the English anime) is the little sister of Katsuya Jonouchi, separated from him when their parents divorced and her mother took custody of her. When Shizuka was diagnosed with the steady onset of blindness, Jounouchi entered the Duelist Kingdom tournament and successfully obtained the prize money to secure the operation that would save her eyesight. She was voiced by Lisa Ortiz in the English dub who portrayed the character with a South Jersey accent[6]

Rebecca Hopkins[edit]

Rebecca Hopkins (レベッカ・ホプキンス Rebekka Hopukinsu?Rebecca Hawkins in the dub) is a character created exclusively for the second series anime. She is the bratty 8-year-old granddaughter of a friend of Sugoroku Mutou, believing Sugoroku stole the Blue-Eyes White Dragon card from him. Dueling Sugoroku's grandson Yugi to get it back, Rebecca and Yugi play a game identical to the one Sugoroku played with Rebecca's grandfather years ago. After Yugi surrenders, Rebecca's grandfather explains he gave Solomon his card as a gift. Yugi, then hands Rebecca the "Ties of Friendship" card that he won at Duelist Kingdom as a token of his appreciation.

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  • Siegfried von Schroeder (ジークフリード・フォン・シュレイダー Jīkufurīdo fon Shureidā?), Zigfried von Schroeder in the English dub, is the CEO of Schroeder Corp, a long-time rival to the Kaiba family and Kaiba Corporation. When Siegfried and Seto Kaiba become heads of their respective family companies, both of them attempt to create holographic systems for Duel Monsters. Both succeed, with Siegfried's invention being the Holographic Duel Box Room System, but Kaiba markets and patents his first, leaving Siegfried to fall into ruin. In the anime, Siegfried joins the KC Grand Championship to discredit Kaiba and claim revenge. Although Siegfried uses a variety of computer viruses to attempt to destroy Kaiba Corporation's computer systems, Kaiba is able to halt them all and expels Siegfried from the tournament.-me[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Charecters Already in-]Name:Anastasia Von Schroeder/Lucky Kaiba[Adoptive name]

Age:17
Personality:Calm and collected, Always willing to make friends. however, she is now extrremly paranoid
Bio:Lucky was born as Anastasia Von Schroeder, but Mrs. Von Schroeder, not wanting a daughter to get mixed up in any affairs figured she'd be safer if she were adopted. For years she lived in an orphanage, before Seto Kaiba adopted her.

 

For a long while she loved her life, and even attended school with Yugi and his friends. She traveled with them on all their adventures, and her world crashed down at the grand championship..Leon was the one to Recognize her first, though she didn't know him. She didn't know either of her siblings. At the castle, when backgrounds came out hers did too. Seto said something about not caring who Anastasia was born as, she was a kaiba at heart always.

 

Upon hearing this, she left the top balcony and joined her friends on the bottom and began cheering Yugi On. She took her original name but became known as Anastasia "Lucky" Kaiba. Still however, she worried about her brother Leon returning home with Zigfried after all he had done.

 

She moved to europe a year later, moving into her family home to keep an eye on Leon.Soon, she heard the newest plan and she noticed leon had begun to act a lot like Zigfried. Scared for he rown Sanity, she fled back to japan, moving back in with Kaiba. Now, We reach the current day.
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Dueling equipment 
Deck (max. 3):Water Deck
Duel Disk/pad:A Rose encrusted dueldisk, battle city style
Duel Runner/board:Silver and Blue with Some roses on it
Duel Gazer:Silver with a rose on the eyepiece

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Uh, buddy.  You might wanna use what we call "spoilers" to break the post up into more manageable chunks.  A spoiler is a quick and simple way to separate a section of a post from the other, essentially creating a drop down text box that opens with the push of a button.  To create a spoiler, first you enter the following piece of code.  "spoiler=title" except replace the quotation marks with brackets.  An open bracket, [, in place of the open quote and a close bracket, ], in place of the close quote.  Title the spoiler what you were going to title that section of your post.  When you have that done, you'll want to put "/spoiler" in brackets at the end of the section you want to include in the spoiler.  Should help you reduce how cluttered that post looks.

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Please read the forum rules and apply edits to this OOC thread accordingly. The rules can be found here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/196225-roleplay-forum-rules-both-ic-and-ooc/

You have 48 hours to make the changes to meet the forum rules. Feel free to ask me for help on anything if you need it. ^^

i guess i fixed it.>I wasn't plagerizing- just giving people info so even those who haven't ever seen yu-gi-oh but know the card game can join

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It was only one.
Anyways, you need to decide what continuity you're going for. You've set this 5 years after the Grand Championship...which means GX hasn't even started yet, let alone 5D's, ZEXAL, or ARC-V. Yet you have Duel Runners and D-Gazers available, you are talking about children of the original cast, who probably are still in diapers by this point, and your OC's Extra Deck has Synchros and Numbers.

Also, I don't know where you got the idea of using Dueling Network for duels, but around here, we script them out. The people who want to duel get together via PM or IM and hash out who will win, what cards get played, and how the duel is to progress. It allows for custom cards to be used much more fairly, and for the duel to progress organically.

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Gonna lay a few things out here that will be of some use to you, since you're new and don't quite know how YCM's RP section tends to operate.

 

As Ketodama so kindly pointed out, spoilers are your friends, and generally speaking RP hosts here spoiler every distinct section of their OP (opening post, the first post in your OOC thread and generally where all the important information for the RP is put up) such as your Plot section, your Rules (which generally come first above anything else, btw), application skeleton (which you have) and other stuff. It makes the OP look much neater and more organized, which goes a long way toward having other members want to join your RP, since they can read the pertinent information more easily.  Here's an example of a more neat, presentable OP.

 

Speaking of rules, as our friendly evil overlord Aix already told you, make sure they're in line with YCM's rules and the RP section's rules. Generally I just put something to the effect of "All YCM and RP section rules apply to this rp" in my rules sections, since everyone's supposed to have read them already before posting in the section (hint, hint, if you haven't already done so, please go read them). After the standard YCM stuff is out of the way, you should then put in rules that pertain specifically to your RP.

 

As far as your actual RP content is concerned... well to be honest it needs a lot of work. Lets take it from the top and start with the plot section.

 

First and foremost, its too short. While I'm not going to generalize and say that length=quality, the more detail you put into your plot section, the more your potential RPers have to work with in terms of story and worldbuilding to base their own character concepts off of. Some more information that the plot section probably needs would be, for instance: What exactly is Siegfried's plan? How is he going to Implement it? Who is he targeting for his revenge (since now surely Yugi & friends are on his hitlist in addition to the Kaibas)? How do the protagonists know about it, and what are they going to attempt to do to thwart him? Adding in details like this gives potential RPers a clearer picture of what's going to happen, and how they can then fit their characters into it. Speaking of details, what you have posted in your plot section is a bit inconsistent. If only 5 years have passed since the end of the Grand Championship, how will the main cast's children, who can only be a maximum of 5 years old given the timeline you've shown us, have any effect on the plot? You mentioned Bonds Beyond Time's time traveling plot above, so does that mean the crimson dragon from 5d's (which was the source of the three Main characters' ability to time travel in bonds beyond time) is somehow involved? An explanation/rectification of the inconsistency would be helpful.

 

Now, a section you don't have in your OP, and one that I feel is very necessary in every RP i post, is a Setting section. Yes, I'm aware that this is directly related to a filler arc of the original Yugioh anime, but do remember that 5 years have passed since that story Arc's conclusion. How has the world, and more importantly the game of duel monsters, changed since then? Why are the various types of extra deck monsters present? The alternative Duel disks? Is this an alternate universe? Or rather does this RP take place during the (10 year?) gap between GX and the original show? Adding a setting section will be helpful because it allows potential RPers to gain insight as to how the RP's setting works, as well as possibly give them ideas for character backstories and motivations.

 

Now, I already touched upon the rules section before, so this will be brief. While using Dueling Network to script out duels may seem like fun, the fact of the matter is that using it is a lot more of a hassle than a help. RPs on YCM almost always script out he duels in advance and include them in the posts themselves. This not only allows the duels to more seamlessly blend into the narrative of the RP, but it also allows other characters who may not be dueling at that moment to watch the game and react to it or comment on it. Yes, its a hassle to plan out a card game and it may not be quite as fun, but it helps keep the RP more stable.

 

Personally, I'm not a fan of having canon characters present in the plot of an RP (Siegfried aside, as he's the main antagonist). They tend to overshadow the Original Characters that are ostensibly supposed to be the main focus of the story. If they're Siegfried's targets, I can understand including them, but then you have to consider why the OC's of the people you want to join the RP would be in the plot in the first place. Siegfried Von Schroeder isn't going after them, so why should they care what some ex-businessman wants to do to a bunch of high school kids and/or Kaiba Corporation. The best advice i can give you here is to make seigfriend a credible threat to everyone, as well as the people he holds a personal grudge against. How? Maybe have him utilize some ancient Egyptian magic or something similar that threatens the world. Other characters in Yugioh's canon have done similar things in their own desperation, and with the millennium items gone forever at this point in time (assuming millennium world is still canon in this RP) it'd be up to normal duelists to fight back. Bottom line, canon characters should be kept to a minimum, otherwise you might as well just go and write fanfiction about them instead.

 

Though you already have an application skeleton, its frankly lacking in stipulations and allows people to submit short, lackluster applications for your RP, which means that you'll have very few quality characters to work with as your cast. There's no real way for me to outline exactly how much quality control you should put in your skeleton, as each RP should cater to a certain number of participants and require a skill level suitable to the RP itself, but the best way to judge it is to figure out how much you yourself are willing to write for your own character's application, and stipulate that many lines of text as your minimum length. If you're confused as to what I'm talking about, check the "Application Templates" section here for what i thought was appropriate for my own RP. In addition, its usually a good idea to spoiler the lengthier sections of apps, and to ask that others do the same. Again, look to the link I provided for something similar. Lastly, though it may seem like a necessary thing, giving an extended decklist is usually a waste of time, as decks often change over the course of an RP's plot and even in the anime characters alter their decks regularly. usually just a playstyle and a few ace cards are enough, unless of course the application is using custom cards in which case you as the host will have to approve them for use in your own RP.

 

Speaking of applications your own is... lacking. It would be a good idea to flesh Anastasia's character out more, as her personality has literally one line of description, which tells a reader next to nothing about her. Try extrapolating on it. Why is she calm and collected? Does this mean that she's shy? Reserved? Or maybe just quiet? What else is there to her other than being calm and collected? How does she respond to stressful situations? What is she like when she's happy or enjoying herself? Does she ever open up more or is she always calm and composed? In addition to adding more detail, its generally frowned upon to insert an original character directly into established canon, as this makes them seem like a mary sue rather than a compelling character. If you aren't sure what a mary sue is, give this page a look and run Anastasia through the test. as a side note, I also recommend writing an app for Siegfried Von Schroeder as well.

 

I Know this is a lot of stuff to take in, but I hope the advice helps you improve your writing and elps you better adjust to YCM's ways of running RPs. If you have any questions feel free to ask me or Aix, the RP section's moderator.

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