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The longer the better, one says. If you have a go at joining my original RP, then not only will you have to do a longer Appearance, Personality and Biography fields in applications, but you also need to create two characters. yes, TWO.

But that is beside the point. I don't expect a 10,000 word post from anyone. That's just ridiculous.

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Um If you are still accepting Apps, I would like to try, with my Character, Please Judge
[spoiler=Chase Kumon]
Name: Chase Kumon

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Occupation: Duelist

Appearance: A Normal built 17 Year old teenager boy which has Black Spiky Hair with Purple streaks in them with his Normal Blue Eyes. He wears a Long White/Green Trench coat, Brown Pants, Black sneakers and Green fingerless gloves, He also wears a Black Undershirt with a Blue Symbol on it similar to that of the Mark of the Crimson Dragon. He wears a White Scarf which reaches down to half of his back. Chase Has a Pendant around his Neck with a Ruby Stone which he always wear. He wears a Black Shoulder Bag which contains his Duel Disk and his Books for School. He has a Black Belt which he has his Deck Box is on the Right Side of his Belt. He has a Ring on his Left Middle Finger with an Emerald Stone in it which was given to him by his Father. Chase stands about 6' 2" and weighs about 120 Pounds. He is a very slim build but a strong build. His hair is shoulder length at most and is only grown out to the point the tips cover a bit of his eyes. On his Left shoulder he has a Scar which was caused during the Attempted Break-in to Steal the Prototype Naturia Cards he was given. When the Burst of Power Awoke in him creating his Three new Synchro Monsters, a Blue Mark was Burned into his right arm in the shape of the Crimson Dragon's Head but it is not seen when People try to look, Only those with Special Abilities like himself are theorized to see the marking. He has a constant look of emotionless rage on his face and the only time that changes is when he becomes Aggressive.

Personality: He is a Kind Person to his Friends but for the Most Part Tends to be a Loner in his School. He most Keeps to himself unless it comes to his Friends which he trusts them with his deepest Secrets. He, when dueling though is a Highly Aggressive When Pushe too Far in Dueling. He sometime gets a Violent Nature when Summoning his Synchro Monster when pushed beyond his Limits. After his Duels he becomes a Emotionless Man with nothing to say in responce. Chase is a Noble man with a Very Destructive Temper which causes him to Mostly be a Loner who stands up for the Outcasts in School. He keeps his Emotions to himself for he fears that others would target people for knowing him. His Personality makes it difficult for People to get through to Chase and see what he is truly feeling. Once He learns of What is this Aggressive and strange gift of power he was given and understands it, Chase wants to Overcome it and learn to Be "Normal" again, Until he learns about his Abilities, Chase keeps himself Emotionless and a Loner for Fear if he makes a Friend he will just Hurt anyone he comes in contact. For this choice of Being distant to mostly everyone, Everyone he meets chose to just never go near him, making him an Outcast.

Duel Disk: MichellesDuelDisk.jpg
 

Biography: Chase Kumon is a Duelist who specializes using the Naturia Deck given to him by his parents at his fifth Birthday. He kept battling and Dueling with this Deck for years that by Age thirteen he was given twelve Prototype Naturia Monsters which were to give the test Run. He was pushed to being a Loner since his Parents Died by some theives who Tried to steal the One of a Kind Prototype Naturia Cards. Armed with His Duel Disk and his D-Wheeler, He Goes to the Duel Academy in Kyoto so he could learn how to control his Cards better. As he studied, He discovered deep Down he has a gift which during a Duel to win back a Student's Deck stolen, He unleashed a Tremendous Burst of Energy and creating Three Synchro Monsters, Two of them Blank. When he first summoned the only one which had writting and a picture, Winter Tundra Synchro Dragon, He begun to Inflict Real Damage and Began to become more Violent. When News he begun to grow the City of the Real Damage and Power He has, Chase went wandering throughout the City and Riding with his D-Wheeler hoping to find someone who could Understand his power. He heard of the Duel Academy Oversea Battles and Went ahead to Ireland to see if he can prove his skills to another set of Duelists to see if he can find someone who has a similar gift. He kept hearing a Strange voice in his head which he can't tell who it is and wonders who or what is speaking to him but all he gets as an Answer for who this voice is, His Soul. He sets his sights out to find those who could help him for he fears of being a Dangerous Loner and wants to become a Friend to someone. He is now on the Route to the Ireland Duel Academy to find some worthy people to withstand him and his Trenmendous Power.
[spoiler=Signature Deck Type:]
Naturia Deck/with my Custom Naturia and Synchro Dragon
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/333234-naturia-supportmy-synchro-dimension-dragon/ <-My Custom Synchro Dragon/Naturias
MONSTERS
Naturia Marron x 1
Naturia Sunflower x 1
Naturia Spiderfang x 1
Naturia Beans x 1
Naturia Ladybug x 1
Naturia Guardian x 2
Naturia Eggplant x 1
Naturia Rock x 1
Naturia Ragweed x 1
Naturia Antjaw x 1
Naturia Dragonfly x 1
Naturia Stag Beetle x 1
Naturia Horneedle x 1
Naturia White Oak x 1
Naturia Vein x 1
Naturia Stinkbug x 1
Naturia Tulip x 2
Naturia Strawberry x 2
Naturia Cosmobeet x 2
Naturia Fruitfly x 1
Naturia Mosquito x 1
Naturia Pumpkin x 1
Dandylion x 1
Naturia Hyrangea x 1
Naturia Rosewhip x 2
Naturia Butterfly x 1
Naturia Mantis x 1
Naturia Beetle x 1
SPELL
Mystical Space Typhoon x 1
Rush Recklessly x 1
Axe of Despair x 2
Barkion's Bark x 1
Blustering Winds x 1
Miracle Synchro Fusion x 2
Sorcerous Spell Wall x 1
Mage Power x 1
Gaia Power x 1
Naturia Forest x 1
Leodrake's Mane x 1
Gravity Axe - Grarl x 1
Monster Reincarnation x 1
Lucky Iron Axe x 1
Swords of Revealing Light x 1
Landoise's Luminous Moss x 1
Double Summon x 1
TRAPS
Threatening Roar x 1
Draining Shield x 1
Widespread Ruin x 1
Spiritual Earth Art - Kurogane x 1
Sakuretsu Armor x 3
Call of the Haunted x 2
Dust Tornado x 1
Exterio's Fang x 1
Kunai With Chain x 1
EXTRA DECK MONSTERS
Naturia Exterio x 1
Naturia Gaiastrio x 1
Naturia Beast x 2
Naturia Barkion x 2
Black Rose Dragon x 1
Naturia Landoise x 1
Naturia Leodrake x 1
Leo, Keeper of the Sacred Tree x 1
Snow Tundra Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Winter Tundra Synchro Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Blizzard Tundra Accel Synchro Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Strawberry Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Autumn Forest Dragon Helianthus x 1/Own Creation
SIDE DECK
Naturia Lemon Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Blueberry Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Melon Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Grape Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Red Rose Dragon Barbados x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Green Lily Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Purple Orchid Dragon x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Beetle Gigarock x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Hornet Pusleneedle x 1/Own Creation
Naturia Butterfly Swallowtail x 1/Own Creation
[/spoiler]
Desired Country/Region: England/Great Britain

[/spoiler]

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Looks good so far. I'll make my decision in a couple of hours. This looks like there's potential but don't pull your hopes up too high.

 

EDIT: Took a look at it again.

 

Only your Appearance and Personality fields are below par at the moment, which is a great start already, considering you're new to the forum.

 

A few questions to help for both fields:

 

Appearance

  • How tall does Chase measure himself in?
  • How heavy is he?
  • What kind of build does he have? Slim, obese? Strong, frail?

If you can explain the above in about a line or so each, then you're good to go.

 

Personality

  • How has his personality currently affected his wellbeing?
  • Does he plan on changing his personality sooner or later?
  • Why was he emotionless, why was he a loner? How is he being treated as an outcast?

Again, very few questions for both fields, but I can pick up on Personality a typo. It's 'response', yeah? Again, a line or so for Personality. Once you edited your app, I'll look at it again.

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Hmm... A bit vague on the appearance part. You made the adjustments I asked for, but it would definitely help if you broadened your character a bit but that comes later. You've passed the preliminary test and may therefore start posting.

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Yeah, not bad actually. The current characters are on their way to the dueling arena next to Japan and they'll be working in teams.

 

Since you're new here, I don't wanna throw you down the deep end yet. Wait for a few more posts before sending yourself back down.

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yea I understand he just left Kyoto and needs to see how other students duel then get the letter to return which knowing anyone in the world is like a big middle finger, you fly someplace to work on something just to return to point A, its a bit hectic to do work like that but some people in the world do so who am I to judge

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