Dark Rebellion CXyz Dragon

[Gokai-Red]

Dark Rebellion CXyz Dragon
DARK
Rank 5/Dragon-Xyz-Effect
3 level DARK 5 monstes
You can Xyz Summon this card by using a "Dark Rebellion Xyz Dragon" with no Xyz Materials attached to it, you control as the Xyz Material. (1) Once per turn, during any player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; its ATK becomes 0 and its effect is negated while it is face-up on the field, and if it does, this card gains half that lost ATK.
ATK:2500
DEF:2000

[Darthakin]

Wonky ocg, maybe a bit low on the ATK considering you started with Rebellion eitherway, who's also at 2500. then again, Utopia and Veis, but well.
Seems okay to me, in general.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Wonky ocg, maybe a bit low on the ATK considering you started with Rebellion eitherway, who's also at 2500. then again, Utopia and Veis, but well.
Seems okay to me, in general.

You have any other suggestions for this member, aside from telling him to fix OCG?

For the most part, it's actually fine. Dark Rebellion's effect is worded similarly to it.

 

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Anyway, I'll help fix it, then give my two cents on this card.

 

3 Level 5 DARK monsters
You can Xyz Summon this card by using a "Dark Rebellion Xyz Dragon" with no Xyz Materials as the Xyz Material. (1) Once per turn, during any player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; its ATK becomes 0, also its effect is negated while it is face-up on the field, and if it does, this card gains half that lost ATK.

 

(Just the materials and the alt summoning condition needed some repair)

 

Anyway, this card's alternative summoning conditions would be rather simple to accomplish in real life, given the activation of the effect. In a way, it turns your opponent's monster into a 0 ATK vanilla, and steals its ATK power.

 

However, you only have 1 use of the effect, unless you can replenish them in some form (assuming you Rank-Up).

 

For other purposes, can't really see a option where you'd play the normal methods, except for maybe Garbage Lord x3 (see Season 1 climax of ZEXAL) or Dark World things.

 

Considering making 3 mat Level 5s isn't exactly the easiest thing for most Decks, you could probably get away with making it generic like DRXD already is; but indeed being able to neuter threats and steal their attack is something that needs a form of limitation so it doesn't abuse the game.

 

In most cases, Ranked-Up forms are stronger than their original counterparts. I might suggest raising its ATK to 2700-2800 or something; DEF, you can leave as is, or boost to 2400 or something.