Sonkurra Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 Hello everyone, I just started and here is my first card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalkid Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 nice card! but its a bit overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxAmidamaruxX Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 just a bit overpowering but pretty good for a new person Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 I'm adding more cards, as usual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 Do you mean Heads and Tails? Good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalkid Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 nice new ones! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 Another... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalkid Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 I really dont need to say it this time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeGallo Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 good card but it is overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 You should photoshop or use paint to get rid of the artist who draws the pictures...it makes the card alot better. Cool though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 Ok, here are all of my cards so far rolled up into one. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalkid Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 Nice new cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeGallo Posted June 26, 2007 Report Share Posted June 26, 2007 my favorite is souless dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 Thanks for the good reviews everyone! I continue to improve. I have many cards now, so get prepared for a long post! Please tell me what your favorite cards are and maybe some ideas to help me move forward! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaloog91 Posted June 27, 2007 Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 Some of the levels are a little messed up but good pics and nice start. Just Work on the overpoweredness of those Dragons and you'll be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zhymet2 Posted June 27, 2007 Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 nice cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 I updated soul absorbtion, and added some others. Have a good time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalkid Posted June 27, 2007 Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 lol! the never ending car. Nice cards! keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted June 27, 2007 Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 Souless Dragon-Overpowerd. First, with 2900 ATK, it should be a level 8. As for the flip effect, how does a coin land face-up or face-down. Recommended change: “Once per turn, during your Main Phase, flip a coin. If the result is heads, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent and this card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards until the end of your opponent’s next turn. If the result is tails, you take 1000 points of damage and this card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards until the end of your opponent’s next turn.” Panther-ATK could be higher. The Lone Wolf-If it’s a lone wolf, shouldn’t the effect activate when you have no monsters on the field? Souless Knight-Nice card, but Orb of Souls should have to be on the field. This would actually be an improvement as it could be searched for via Mystic Tomato. Alternatively, summon the orb and tribute it for Souless Knight. Soul Steal-Should be a normal trap since it isn’t countering anything. Maybe add a 500 point life point cost as well. Soul Resurrection-As overpowered as monster reborn. Cosmic Destruction-Another overpowerd card. Recommended Change: “During the End Phase of his/her turn, your opponent can discard 1 card from his/her hand. If he/she does not, inflict 1000 points of damage to him/her. If he/she does, you take 2000 points of damage.” It should be harder on you than your opponent. Souless Rider-Overpowered. Able to bring out a 2900 ATK monster just by flipping. It should add Souless Dragon to your hand rather than the field. Soul Fusion-Since this card is just a supped up polymerization, you should include a requirement or draw back like; “You cannot use substitute Fusion Material Monsters”, or; “The Fusion Summoned monster is destroyed during the End Phase of the turn.” Half Souled Rider-Should be lv7 Half Souled Dragon-Should be lv5. Too overpowerd for a lv1. It would easily be abused by Human Wave Tactics. Half a Soul-You don’t specify where the half souled monsters are being summoned from. Wolf-Again, should be lv5 Never Ending Card-Nice Hope these suggestions help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 Thanks for the tips, if it does not turn out to be to hard I will try to change them. Half souled dragon was a messup, it was supposed to be level 5. I have a few more, so more tips would be accepted. You have no idea how hard it was to make the never ending card. :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalkid Posted June 27, 2007 Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 Nice new ones.! also its begining not beggining. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 Also, if any of you have ideas for cards i can try to make them! For card idea fill this out. Name:Level:Attack:Deffence:Effect: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalkid Posted June 27, 2007 Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 Heres one for you to make should be easy. Name:souless falconlevel:4attack:1500defense:1200effect:When this card is normal summoned or special summoned no traps can be activated this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonkurra Posted June 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2007 Ok, I updated the form to be more specific! Name:Element:Type:Level:ATK:DEF:Effect: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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