The One To Win Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Chapter 1 (Joseph) Time to get me a dueling deck and dueling disk! Joseph unwraps his full deck of cards and looks at the title. (Joseph) Wow a Burn Deck!!!!! (???) Heh, A dumb Burn Deck like that and your exited. (Joseph) Who's there? (???) My name is Jall (Jall) Im working to be the greatest Duelist ever! (Joseph Laughing) Well you gonna have a long wait (Jall) Im a Second year so how about a practice duel to see what color your in! Battle Begin!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Jall and Joseph) Duel! (Joseph) What kind of Deck do you have (Jall) A Red Eyes Deck Jall took first turn and summoned a Red Eyes B. Chick. Jall Put Red Eyes B. Chick in the graveyard to summon Red Eyes B. Dragon! (Jall) I end my turn. (Joseph) I summon a Rapid Fire Magician and use Poison of the old man on to make you lose 800 life points! Joseph:4000 lp Jall:3200 lp (Joseph) I end my turn by using the spell card, Tremendous Fire!!!!!! Joseph: 3500 lp Jall: 2200 lp (Jall) I attack your Rapid Fire Magician! Joseph: 2700 lp Suddenly a glow happened on Red Eyes B. Dragon and it turned back into Red Eyes B. Chick! Tune in for chapter 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 No double posting. It was pretty short, and the players made pretty... bad moves to say the least >< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The One To Win Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Sorry about the double post and don't be mean I'm only 9 years old and also its only chapter 1 Jall has these cards:Monsters Red-Eyes B. Dragon Red-Eyes B. Chick Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon Red-Eyes Black Metal Dragon Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon Twin-Headed Behemoth Luster Dragon Masked Dragon Element Dragon Troop Dragon Lord of D. Divine Dragon Ragnarok Summoned Skull Meteor Dragon Fusions King Dragon B. Skull Dragon Meteor B. Dragon Five-Headed Dragon Spells Mountain Ancient Rules Inferno Fire Blast Dragon's Mirror Dragon's Gunfire A Wingbeat of Giant Dragon The Flute of Summoning Dragon Polymerization Future Fusion Stamping Destruction[edit] Traps Dragon's Rage The Dragon's Bead Metalmorph Negate Attack Draining Shield And Joseph has theseMonsters * Elemental Hero Bubbleman x3 * Morphing Jar * Rapid-Fire Magician * Giant Germ x 3 * Toon Cannon Soldier * Royal Magical Library * Volcanic Slicer * Fire Trooper * Spell Striker Spells * Card of Sanctity x3 * Reinforcement of the Army x2 * E - Emergency Call * Meteor of Destruction * Chain Strike * Tremendous Fire * Ookazi * Poison of the Old Man * Toon Table of Contents * Restructer Revolution * Magical Mallet * Dark Room of Nightmare Traps * Magic Cylinder * Just Desserts * Secret Barrel * Ojama Trio * Ceasefire * Nightmare Wheel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The One To Win Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Now for Chapter 2 Chapter 2 (Jall) Wth! (Joseph laughing) Oh my gosh heh heh (Joseph) I summon, Volcanic Slicer!!!!! Now attack Red Eyes B. Chick!!!! Joseph: 2700 lp Jall: 1200 lp Joseph ended his turn and Jall fell to the ground (Jall) This cant be happening! I summon, Divine Dragon Ragnarok! *Joseph Laughs* (Jall) I end my turn (Joseph) I summon, Morphing jar! Volcanic slicer attack! Jall: 900 lp (Joseph) Morphing jar attack directly! Jall: 200 lp (Jall) Nooooooooooooo! While that battle was going on there was also another battle happening. ???:7000 lp Zack:1200 lp (???) Giant orc attack directly!!!!!!! ???:7000 lp Zack: 0000 (???) Give me your card now! Zack gave ??? his Giant rat Back at the Joseph vs. Jall battle the lps were at Joseph: 3100 lp Jall: 200 lp (Joseph) Morphing jar finish this!!!!! Attack that Troop dragon! (Jall) Not so fast i play the trap Metalmorph Joseph: 2800 lp (Joseph) Ow... Well attack, Giant Germ!!!! Joseph: 2800 lp Jall: 0000 lp (Jall) Congrats! Your color will be found out in about 3 hours. (Joseph) Boo ya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The One To Win Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Here is the new CHAPTER 3 Chapter 3 (James Hare) Well this Joseph person must be pretty good to beat Jall with 2800 lp left! (James Hare) I think he should be in....Ra Yellow! (???) Bad Idea Bad Idea! (James) Oh hi Crowler (Crowler) Hi sir, Anyway he shouldnt be in Ra Yellow He should be a Dumb Slifer Slacker! (James) Well if you say so... Joseph walks into the room just in time to here "...Say So" (Joseph) Hi Crowler, Hi James, Whats my rank? (Crowler laughing) Your in Slifer Red!!!!! Crowler skips out of the room singing "Hes a Slifer Slacker, Hes a Slifer Slacker" (Joseph) I dont want to be in Slyfer red! (James) Im sorry but he says so, so you must... (???) I think he makes a good Slacker red Joseph looks over to the door and sees Jall (Jall) Rematch time! (Jall and Joseph) Duel! Joseph: 4000 lp Jall: 4000 lp (Jall) Ill go first Jall summons a Lord of D.! Jall puts down a face down and ends turn (Joseph) Heh Heh Heh! Joseph summons a Harpie lady 1! (Joseph) Attack! Not so fast I use my facedown Metalmorph!!! Joseph: 3800 Jall: 4000 Joseph ends his turn by setting a face down. Lord of D. Attack directly!!! (Joseph) Not so fast i use my face down, Hysteric Party and bring Harpie Lady 1 back! Joseph: 3800 Jall: 3900 (Jall) I end my turn. Joseph summons a Cyber Harpie lady! (Jall) Uh-Oh.... (Joseph) Both of you attack directly!!!! Jall: 1800 Jall:0500 Jall screamed Joseph ends his turn. (Jall) I summon, Element dragon! Element dragon runs and attacks Cyber harpie lady without command Jall:0000 (Joseph) I won!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 The duels are really short, and have a LOT of bad moves. But of far graver significance, you dishonour the glorious Red-Eyes Black Metal Dragon by placing him in the deck of this amateur. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 The duels are really short' date=' and have a LOT of bad moves. But of far graver significance, you dishonour the glorious Red-Eyes Black Metal Dragon by placing him in the deck of this amateur.[/quote']Agreed. And this person also needs to not double/triple post @.@ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The One To Win Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 XD the Red eyes black metal dragon thing is funny and i only double posted to put in the story I'm working on them like crazy and sorry about all the mad moves I'm only 9 years old Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The One To Win Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Chapter 4 (Crowler as he enterd the room) Impossible! (James) Not impossible if its jsut done, Joseph im moving you up to Ra Yellow! (Joseph) Thank you sir! (Jall) What! Crowler walks out of the room slowly as if hypnotised with his jaw open and Jall following the same way. ??? walks in. (???) Joseph battle now! (Joseph) Ok! Duel!!! (James)nooooooo- (???) I use the card Toon World!!! And end my turn!!! (Joseph) Heh heh thats it? Well i summon, Cyber Harpie Lady! Now attack! ???: 2200 (Joseph) I put down a face down and end my turn! ??? did not know that soon he would be taking a big blow from this face down card (???) i special summon, Toon Cannon Soldier! Now i summon Magician of Faith (Joseph) Why summon two cards that are lower then my card (???) i end my turn by sacraficing my cards to summon, Blue Eyes Toon Dragon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Joseph) Woah.... (Joseph) I activate my face down card!!!! Rising Air Current Cyber Harpie lady attack: 2300 Now i summon harpie lady 1!!! And use, Aqua Chorus!! Cyber Harpie Lady Attack: 2800 Harpie Lady 1 Attack: 1800 (Joseph) I use Icarus Attack and send, Harpie lady and Blue Eyes toon dragon to the graveyard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now Cyber Harpie Lady attack directly!!!! ???: 0000 (Joseph) Boo ya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 How did Joseph activate two traps when he only had one card Set, and that card was a Field Spell? How did "???" Special Summon Toon Cannon Soldier? What was the point of Aqua Chorus, since Harpie Lady 1 was tributed before Cyber Harpie Lady attacked, and therefore no longer gave Cyber Harpie Lady any ATK benefit? Does not compute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The One To Win Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 meh i dunno I'm just doing random things XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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