[Thar] hunting season

[Thar]

 

cnc

[Tormented]

It's very monotone and there isn't too much going on as I said before you need to work on gmapping stuff and just adding more colour to your pieces also the c4ds being the same colour as the background doesn't really work all to well. 

 

Get some decent C4Ds http://tonyapex.deviantart.com/art/Final-SciFi-Render-Pack-By-TonyApex-40-RENDERS-429261389/ http://tonyapex.deviantart.com/art/Sci-Fi-Renders-Revisited-Pack-490163678 those second ones actually look dope as fuck, you could also try and use a bit more easier to use renders that allow for more purposed flow: http://www.deviantart.com/art/Fire-Emblem-Awakening-Lucina-Render-377858291this might work

 

It may seem a bit over the top but if you put the c4ds I linked in conjuction with the render you'd have some cool tag If you'd like you can send me over the .PSD and I'll take a look after you've finished it and show you what you could've done to improve it (or if at all, you might suddenly become the Picasso of the modern gfx world)

[(GigaDrillBreaker)]

Lighting is odd on the deer.

[Night]

Lighting is odd on the deer.

 

Normally I wouldn't commend such a short response, try adding more to your cnc next time, good analysis nonetheless. But yeah he's right, your light source isn't correct here.

 

A light-source somewhere in the top right would've been more accurate.

 

A quick-tip if you're using a stock or a render that you've got the stock of (which you should have seeing as though you did render it), look at the stock, it'll basically tell you where the light source is that's hitting the render.