Night Posted December 13, 2014 Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 Population: just juan ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) cnc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted December 13, 2014 Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 Lighting's cool. The motion blur looks a little bit overkill, some of it could easily be erased to add some clarity to the tag. Apart from a bit of blending near the back of the render, I really like the tag. Text is totalllllllyyyyy unnecessary though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 13, 2014 Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 heh cause dope cases death Agree with the motion blur. Sparkles are a bit far out from focal on the left too imo. I like the text, but maybe different positioning instead of far right? Colors and blending are pretty cool though, pulls off the duotone pretty well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted December 13, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 Lighting's cool. The motion blur looks a little bit overkill, some of it could easily be erased to add some clarity to the tag. Apart from a bit of blending near the back of the render, I really like the tag. Text is totalllllllyyyyy unnecessary though. heh cause dope cases death Agree with the motion blur. Sparkles are a bit far out from focal on the left too imo. I like the text, but maybe different positioning instead of far right? Colors and blending are pretty cool though, pulls off the duotone pretty well. This is one of those pieces that I worked on a while back and then left unfinished for a couple of months, don't recall ever motion blurring to be honest. Might add a textless v2 but I feel like it's too barren without it. Thanks for the cnc, always appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted December 13, 2014 Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 That logo looks a little sharp for my tastes-think it draws attention away from the rest of the image-I also think it feels a bit bare but apart from that pretty cool as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted December 13, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 Cheers m8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted December 13, 2014 Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 yo shit's dope get a bit more contrast and re do the logo, it's fine just too gritty n1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted December 15, 2014 Report Share Posted December 15, 2014 Text could be better incorporated; I agree. Don't know why people dislike the motion blur, it actually gives a bit of movement to the tag; atm it looks too static as if these things are just hanging in the air, could be your placement--most likely your compositional layout. If you have the time, search on youtube for the beginning of Metal Gear 4 where you can flip through a few channels to look at these braindamaging videos (it seriously feels like someone was on drugs will making them). You'll get a few ideas that will help you with this style. You're basing it too much on a 1 point perspective layout. Try something else, give it a bit of a different environment. You should be aiming to alter a few things each time you make a tag, this looks just too similar to the one you posted a while ago. Not bad though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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