Cool Girl Posted December 12, 2014 Report Share Posted December 12, 2014 So this is my very first archetype. It's called Dragon Spirit and is based off powerful dragons. Thanks to JasinKay for the incredible pictures (credits go to him). So Enjoy! I'll keep adding more cards if I have more ideas, so tune in! [spoiler="Monster Cards"]You can Special Summon this card from your hand if a "Dragon Spirit" monster is sent from the field to the Graveyard during the Damage Step.During each of your Standby Phase, gain 500 Life Points for each "Dragon Spirit" monster in your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed in battle or by card effects, you can Special Summon 1 "Ancient Fairy Dragon" from your Extra Deck.If there are no other "Dragon Spirit" monsters on the field, destroy this card. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Red Dragon Archfiend" from your Extra Deck.When this card is destroyed in battle or by card effects, you can Special Summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your Extra Deck, and special summon it. You can only use the effect of "Dragon Spirit, Black Rose" once per turn.When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Brionac, Dragon Of The Ice Barrier", and special summon it. Its effect is negated. ">http://This card gains 400 ATK for each "Dragon Spirit" monster in your Graveyard. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Chimeratech Fortress Dragon" in your Extra Deck, and special summon it.You cannot summon this card on the field. When this card is ramdomly discarded from your hand by an opponent's card effect, you lose 500 Life Points and you can select 1 "Five-Headed Dragon" in your Extra Deck, and special summon it.During each of your Standby Phase, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Gungnir, Dragon Of The Ice Barrier, and special summon it.Once per turn, you can add 1 Equip Spell Card from your deck to your hand. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Power Tool Dragon", and special summon it.When a "Dragon Spirit" monster is banished, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, this card cannot be destroyed in battle. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon, and special summon it. ">http://A shooting dragon of hope for all humanity. It gets stronger with hope.You can only Special Summon this card with the effect of "Majestic Evolution". Once per turn, you can negate the activation of a card and destroy it. During the End Phase: Target 1 "Dragon Spirit, Stardust" from your Graveyard and Special Summon it. Its effects are negated.When this card is destroyed in battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Stardust Dragon" from your Extra Deck. If this card were to be destroyed, you can destroy 1 "Dragon Spirit" monster instead.When this card is summoned, you can discard 3 cards to destroy 3 cards on your opponent's side of the field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Trishula, Dragon of the Ice Barrier" in your Extra Deck, and special summon it. You can only Special Summon this card with the effect of "Majestic Evolution". This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 "Dragon Spirit" or "Majestic" monster to have this card gain ATK points equal to that monster's ATK. During the End Phase, Special Summon 1 "Dragon Spirit, Archfiend" from your Graveyard to the field. Its effect are negated. ">http://The Ultimate Demon Dragon Warrior. He was born half dragon half demon.[/spoiler] You can only Special Summon this card by removing from play "Dragon Spirit, Ancient Fairy", "Dragon Spirit, Archfiend","Dragon Spirit, Blackrose", "Dragon Spirit, Power Tool", and "Dragon Spirit, Stardust". This card gains 500 ATK for every "Majestic" monster in your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle or by card effects, Special Summon "Shooting Quasar Dragon" from your Extra Deck. ">http:// When this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard, inflict 300 Points of damage to your opponent and Special Summon "Hamon, Lord of Strking Thunder" from your Deck. You can only use the effect of "Dragon Spirit, Hamon" once per turn. ">http:// When this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon "Uria, Lord of Searing Flames" from your Deck and destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field. You can only use the effect of "Dragon Spirit, Uria" once per turn. [spoiler="Spell Cards"] Equip only to a dragon-type monster. Send that monster to the Graveyard. During your opponent's turn: You can Special Summon that monster.If this card is sent to the Graveyard: Shuffle it into the Deck. Send 1 "Dragon Spirit, Stardust Dragon" or 1 "Dragon Spirit, Red Archfiend" from your hand to the Graveyard. Special Summon 1 "Majestic Star Dragon" or 1 "Majestic Red Dragon" from your Extra Deck. You can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Dragon Spirit, Star" or 1 "Dragon Spirit, Red" from your deck or your hand. Send 1 "Ultimate Dragon, Nova" from your hand to the Graveyard. Special Summon "Red Nova Dragon" from your Extra Deck. Send 1 "Dragon Spirit, Shooting Star" from your hand to the Graveyard. Special Summon "Shooting Star Dragon" from your Extra Deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Trap Cards"] Your opponent loses 500 Life Points for each "Dragon Spirit" monster in your field, hand, and Graveyard.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evil cucumber Posted December 12, 2014 Report Share Posted December 12, 2014 Well, i cant say i didn't like your cards...the problem is that i find them really overpowered. First, you need to write the Cards' effects under them so we can read in a easier way. Float effects (like when they hit the grave) can be really abusable, and these ones ARE abusable. They dont have the "You can only use this effect of "..." once per turn" clause, which i highly recomend you to add in their effects. They simply Special Summon a powerful Synchro from Extra Deck when theyre sent to grave. For me, its ok that they Summon a Synchro. But the easy way that they can get is ridiculous. There are so many ways of being sent from field to grave. Examples are being tributed, used as synchro material monsters, sent to grave while equipped to a monster(in this case, see Inzektor Exa-Beetle), destroyed by battle or effects... I suggest you to restrict this effect to when they are destroyed. Also add an Once per turn clause, i think they really need this. As for the wordings, i can see a lot of OCG issues. The first one is that you cant select a monster in a player's Extra Deck. You can only reveal them. Cut the "select" part, just keep them like this "You can Special Summon 1 "..." from your Extra Deck". Also "Special Summon" letters are capitalized. Ancient Fairy- Effects that Summon something when a monster is sent from field to grave generally cant be Summoned during damage step (when the monster is destroyed by battle).The Life points gain is cool, but you have to tone down it a bit, otherwise it can be really annoying. 1000 Lp for each card is very much. Just edit to 500 or less. Black Rose- Ok, also the best picture :) Brionac and Trishula- Since their targets are banned, i dont see why you made this card. This section is for cards that could make something in the actual game. Power Tool- I can say this is the most OP from those cards. Its effect is even better than the Synchro. It doesnt have the Random thing when add a Equip Spell. Also it is just a Level 4. It needs more balance wise I am doubling at the need of the Card's texts for people to give a proper review on your cards. Someone could even Fix their OCG text. Overall, thats just my opinion... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rydersilver Posted December 13, 2014 Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 Im thinking of.. hm an equip card that generates advantage in some sense so you can abuse power tool dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted December 13, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 @Silenth! Could I get some suggestions on how to balance more Dragon Spirit, Power Tool. I'm pretty new to cardmaking and I just need a lot of help when it comes to cardmaking and learning how to balance the cards. Thanks! @rydersilver: What kind of idea do you have in mind for an equip card for power tool? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rydersilver Posted December 13, 2014 Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 Perhaps: Equip only to a dragon-type monster. Send that monster to the Graveyard. During your opponent's turn: You can Special Summon that monster (even if you no longer control this face-up card. This is a Quick Effect). If this card is sent to the Graveyard: Shuffle it into the Deck. That would be very strong/ on the verge of being broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted December 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2014 Here's a new pack that Sakura made for this archetype (credits go to Sakura) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted January 1, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2015 New cards have been added! Tune in to check them out! Would absolutely love to hear your opinions and ideas y'all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted January 6, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2015 New card! Check it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted February 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2015 Here's a new deck box made! I'll be using this deck in YGOPro! Thanks for your support, guys! Once my friend is done scripting the cards and I can finally play them, I might be planning to work on a new archetype. I'm fully rested (working on a archetype is a lot of work)! But, still, thanks for your support, guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted April 13, 2015 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 Added two new cards and edited them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lecc_XD Posted April 13, 2015 Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 First of all, Brionac is prohibited Second, Trishula is only playeable in OCG Third, they loose the timming when fusioned or synchro Summoning their Synchro card from the extradeck is toó much I think your should work more on them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evil cucumber Posted April 13, 2015 Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 There is a BEWD rule for Normal Monsters which basically says there cant be normal monsters with more than 3k atk. You should change that to avoid further warnings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted April 13, 2015 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 Could you elaborate more on that, please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted April 13, 2015 Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 Could you elaborate more on that, please? Basically, there's an unwritten rule that Normal Monsters cannot pass Level 8, nor equal/surpass Blue-Eyes in attack power. Defense Power is okay. First of all, Brionac is prohibited Second, Trishula is only playeable in OCG Third, they loose the timming when fusioned or synchro Summoning their Synchro card from the extradeck is toó much I think your should work more on them What do you suggest the TC work on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lecc_XD Posted April 14, 2015 Report Share Posted April 14, 2015 gives them a proper game style, i just see a bunch of dragons that just work togater, but none of them summon, swarm or help thems~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted April 14, 2015 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2015 Edits have been made! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted August 13, 2016 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2016 Hey guys, So, after a lot of time off, I'm ready to work on this archetype again as people have told me it has a lot of potential. However, I will make a new post about it and lots of tweaks to it. I might also replace the name/title of this archetype. Thank you guys for your support and I hope you'll tune in to more cards I make in the future! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted August 14, 2016 Report Share Posted August 14, 2016 Just keep in mind that it has been more than a year since you posted in this thread, so you need to make a new thread. LOCKED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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