Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2014 Yeah, that can be arranged. Fifth place might get an award as well, if enough people enter. (Probably have enough entries to merit it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Major's Shadow Posted October 17, 2014 Report Share Posted October 17, 2014 Alrighty! Here's my entry to the contest! Hope you all like it! Intergalactic Dark Pegasus: 2 lvl. 7 Beast-Type Monsters You can Xyz Summon this Card by using any Rank 5 or 6 Beast, Beast-Warrior, or Warrior-Type Xyz Monster you Control as Xyz Materials. When this Card is Xyz Summoned: Banish 2 Beast, Beast-Warrior, or Warrior-Type Monsters from your Graveyard, then Return 1 Set Card on the Field to the Bottom of the Deck. This Card can Attack Directly while it has an Xyz Material. Once per Turn, During Either Player's Turn, Except the Turn this Card was Summoned by its own Effect, You can Detatch 1 Xyz Material: This Turn, During the Battle Phase, all Beast, Beast-Warrior, and Warrior-Type Monsters you Control are Unaffected by your Opponent's Card Effects and cannot be Destroyed by Battle. You may only Control 1 "Intergalactic Darkness Pegasus". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 I'll add you to the entry list. At this time, only Awesum13 has yet to submit an entry. Remember, Written is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted October 18, 2014 Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 Count me in! Sure, I may be new to card making, but I want to give it my best shot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 This will be a good experience for you; test out your card making skills against others. I'll add your name to the list. Just make sure you get entry in by Monday night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted October 18, 2014 Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 I'll enter! Heres the card I made! Let me introduce you the ultimate warrioress! ">http:// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 I'll add your entry to the submission post. Just as a note, you didn't need to create a status to announce this; I check this periodically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Girl Posted October 18, 2014 Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BertyCollosal Posted October 18, 2014 Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 I'll enter I guess. Might be a chance to redeem myself after the Pop Culture Contest. I Hope I've improved since then. Edited with my entry: Once per turn, you can banish this monster to target one monster on your opponent's side of the field; until that monster is destroyed, or this monster is removed from the banishment zone, your opponent loses 100 Life Points during each of their Standby Phases. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 OK, I'll add you to list. @yugiohcreator: You already posted your card once already; no need for you to make 2-3 more of them. Also, you need to post the card lore underneath (i.e. your effect); it makes grading easier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rooster Posted October 18, 2014 Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 This is kinda over powered but I tried to balance it out. When a Warrior-Type monster you control is targeted by a card effect, you may equip this face up card to that monster. That monster loses 500 ATK, cannot have its effects negated, nor can it be targeted by your opponents card effect(s). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 Alright, you're in. Just remember to post lore underneath card; it makes it easier to show your OCG mistakes if any AND makes it easier for me to grade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 20, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2014 Daily bump. One more day until entries stop. If you all want to join, you have less than 27 hours to do it. This includes you, monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razzy Posted October 21, 2014 Report Share Posted October 21, 2014 When this card in your possession is destroyed by your opponent's card (either by battle or by card effect) and sent to your Graveyard: Shuffle this card into the Deck. During your Main Phase 2, if you control no cards: you card discard this card; add 1 "Madolche" card from your Deck to the your hand. You can only use this effect of "Madolche Neighpolitan" once per turn. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Madolche" card: You may increase Level by 1 and it's ATK/DEF by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2014 You got it in before the deadline, so accepted. Awesum13 still needs to submit his card; but depending on timezone, he's probably asleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted October 23, 2014 Report Share Posted October 23, 2014 So how is that judging thing coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2014 Still grading them. I apologize for taking so long with the judging [normally I'd be done with them by now], but midterms are coming up again and electric physics is being a complete bitch for me to deal with. (Don't have the results on me right now, but hopefully I get through with them tonight when I get home) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 Sorry for making you wait, guys. Anyway, here are your grades. In terms of your Balance/Design grade; playability was factored in to some extent. OCG is basically 10 points for comprehension; other half is the part I can nitpick about your capitalization, where to put commas/semicolons, your spelling, etc. Anyway, I wrote this stuff on Excel so it's easier to calculate your marks and determine the placing members. (If I felt it necessary to make a brief comment, I did) As usual, ask for clarification if you want to know why I graded you a certain way. (For those of you that did Archetype support, I graded them on my understanding of what they have to look forward to [already existing stuff].) [spoiler=Big Image] EDIT: Noober's B/D grade raised by 4 points [B/D: 28; new score: 71] EDIT 2: BailasGale's B/D grade raised by 4 points [B/D: 32; new score: 74] Also note that Chaos Sonic's actual B/D score is 36; Progenitor's scores should read 36 | 27 | 19.5 | 10 = 92.5 [/spoiler] I'm doing 5 places again, so the standings are as follows. 1st - Gadjiltron - 98 2nd - Aqua/Qliphoth Tool - 96 3rd - Nobility - 95 4th - Chaos Sonic - 94 5th - The Progenitor - 92.5 I'll leave this thread open for questions for a day or so, then I'll get on with the award things. Most of you guys did pretty well; some of you were in between and the rest, well they were iffy. (The bad ones have some remark about them) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rooster Posted October 26, 2014 Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 Next time I will make something less dull and pointless. A huge warning that was! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 Yeah, you got stripped some points because of the blanket immunity to things, along with blocking any attempts to negate whatever monster this card's attached to. That being said, the power drop does make whatever monster you choose more manageable to kill in battle (though that's probably not much of a drawback). I think a 16-point drop because of the above is a bit steep, looking at it again, so I'll award back 4 points there (although it is a powerful effect, not as bad as I had originally made it out to be). [I'll just note the score changes as edits; because it will be a pain in the ass to recalibrate the spreadsheet and post it again on Imgur] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GOATSNAKE Posted October 26, 2014 Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 Sakura, can you explain why I got the score I got? I want to see what I did wrong so I can improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MujinTengu Posted October 26, 2014 Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 can you please clarify your score about my own card. thanks in advance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 Like I mentioned in the remarks, yours got hit in the playability section for essentially being restricted to EBIs (if they're still playable in this age). Also the skipping Battle Phase thing for summoning a Token is a bit much (the Tokens serve as protection, but I personally don't think it's worth sacrificing your Battle Phase for it). Can probably understand that you don't want the Tokens to spam EBIs and stuff (considering what most of them are capable of) Sakura, can you explain why I got the score I got? I want to see what I did wrong so I can improve. In general, I thought your card was fine. The banishing effect for it attaching to a Warrior might've had some repercussions in HEROs or whatever Warrior-Types like banishing stuff; but I don't think that would make much on an impact here (especially with consistency issues). I graded a few of your entries on Tuesday/Wednesday-ish; then the rest of them yesterday/a while ago, so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousHeartless Posted October 26, 2014 Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 So close. But even if I missed it, at least I got good scores and didn't lose more than 3 points in any area so I'm good. Also, I think you mixed something up either on the spreadsheet or in the Top 5 Listings. Chaos Sonic has a 93 on the spreadsheet but a 94 on the listing and The Progenitor has a 94.5 on the spreadsheet but a 92.5 on the listings. That means they should be switched around on the rankings. Doesn't affect me, but I'd hate for someone to be out on 100 points they earned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted October 26, 2014 Report Share Posted October 26, 2014 I assume the feedback on me was generally negative...but Mathematician does what my card does...but better because its engine. Also their aren't any zombie monsters that can really do a disastrous direct attack. And it seems like the flavor was missed as well. I guess I should post my logic next time around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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