'tyleR Posted September 29, 2014 Report Share Posted September 29, 2014 I haven't touched a graphics program except for photography touch-ups in over a year. Was fun to shake off the rust a bit. Criticism and shit my niggaz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted September 29, 2014 Report Share Posted September 29, 2014 Shit's fire. Reminds me of your old shit with the dope fx. Depth/flow/colors/fx make the piece, lighting's slightly odd due to how the render's composed seeing as the the edges of the focal are far brighter than anything in the BG. The pink/blue border's also something I'm iffy about, concept-wise I really dig it but I think you should have dupe it and then set the duped layer to motion blur or perhaps do something akin to a glitch-like effect. Some things to work on, but for the most part it seems like you still got it, plus you're actually producing shit again. You could literally take a pic of your ass, stick it on a canvas and I'd be content. Glad you're back bro, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted September 29, 2014 Report Share Posted September 29, 2014 Work on your lighting and your work will quickly improve. In this case, the bg is too dark for your focal or you could say the highlights on the focal are too bright for the bg. Try to keep the values between your focal and bg more consistent. Good to see people getting back into gfx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted September 30, 2014 Report Share Posted September 30, 2014 it be rainin' Digging your bg motion blurry effect, kinda inconsistent with the dude though (depth or blending or whatever); they're on like two separate planes that look good independently of each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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