Tormented Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 cnc pls <3 pm 4 psd I was bored needed some practice, hadn't tagged in a while. personallé thoughtés: lighting is a little borked I dunno I like the effects personalllllyy v2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 Blood and cum splatter effects are p dope, they add depth but the atmo isn't really there to support it. Lighting's atrocious, the fracs aren't helping you out here at all. With proper lighting and shadows, some added atmo, and color-strengthening with g-maps you'd have a solid tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted September 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 no fracs kid, just soft brushes. but thanks qt, some of my burns literally ruined this tag honestly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 Oh damn the borders! I literally haven't seen a tag with the black borders in ages haha, little outdated. Loving the splatter stuff though, just looks unfinished overall. Colours are nice, like Night said it needs a little strengthening overall. Keep at it brudda, gunna PM for the PSD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 no fracs kid, just soft brushes. so that's why they look so ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 The smudging (?) or the white and red stuff is lacking texture and depth. It's especially messing me up where it cuts across in front of the focal. Otherwise, I kinda like what I see. Just the white/red effect doesn't have enough detail compared to the focal so it looks really off, particularly when it appears to be right next to the person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted September 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2014 I dunno if better or worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted September 10, 2014 Report Share Posted September 10, 2014 Overlay some textures on the smudge effects/brush effects and maybe also on the background. The solid color/gradient makes it look really flat and unfinished. I personally liked the colors you had in the first version better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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