Aqw chaos lord

[SteveGuy234]

Here is a chaos lord card I made from playing aqw. Please tell me if it needs fixing.

Here's a third.

Alright thanks and I made another one

Here's drakath.

[Saturiel]

I think this would be the correct OCG:

Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 3 Spell Cards from your hand, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. During either player's turn, when a Spell Card is activated: You can negate the activation, and if you do, banish it. During your End Phase, discard 1 card or destroy this card.

(Source: Destiny HERO - Plasma, Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV8)

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I think this would be the correct OCG:

Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 3 Spell Cards from your hand, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. During either player's turn, when a Spell Card is activated: You can negate the activation, and if you do, banish it. During your End Phase, discard 1 card or destroy this card.

(Source: Destiny HERO - Plasma, Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV8)

Keep in mind that you need to provide comments on the card itself, NOT just fix the OCG. 

While we allow you to fix it, you must provide it in conjunction with a regular review. It's plainly stated in the rule thread.

 

@TC: In the future, post updates in the main post; it's easier to see them. Thanks

[caezx]

i liked your cards. Kitsune is great,but if attack is halved instead of battle dmg(like Drill Warrior),he should be lv6. Put an once per turn, during either players turn clause on Ledgermayne,otherwise he is very OPd. and khasaanda is ok as it is. no one plays Ancient Telescope anyway....Please,make Drakath.Hes very cool.