[SMRTM] Tormey gave me a psd

[Smear]

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cnc faggoz

[Night]

Biggest issue with it is the horrendous lighting.

 

 

Please explain to me why there's no light source to the right of the girl's arm even though the render clearly implies there should be one.

 

Lighting in general isn't applied well at all, some areas of the focal are far too dark while others are far too bright, there's very little middle ground. 

Flow/depth is the only thing that's "decent" in the piece and even that doesn't do enough to salvage the rest of it.

 

After 4 years you'd think you wouldn't keep making the same very basic mistakes.

[Smear]

Biggest issue with it is the horrendous lighting.
 

 
Please explain to me why there's no light source to the right of the girl's arm even though the render clearly implies there should be one.
 
Lighting in general isn't applied well at all, some areas of the focal are far too dark while others are far too bright, there's very little middle ground. 
Flow/depth is the only thing that's "decent" in the piece and even that doesn't do enough to salvage the rest of it.
 
After 4 years you'd think you wouldn't keep making the same very basic mistakes.

main reason is bc im lazy :)
Nah I know all this I just can't be assed to. Promise next time I make a tag it'll be tip top and I'll actually focus on cleaning and proper lighting and shit.

[Madsen]

i think the lighting is relatively explainable but the blur is a crime against humanity

[Catman25]

Swirl fractals seems a bit unnecessary. I like what you did with the flow though. Colors are interesting, but a bit too intense on that dark bluish/purple.