Night Posted August 23, 2014 Report Share Posted August 23, 2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted August 23, 2014 Report Share Posted August 23, 2014 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted August 23, 2014 Report Share Posted August 23, 2014 The monotone definitely ruins this tag. I like the constrasting sides, and it would be cooler is more than just different shades of the same color were implement. Especially on the render. Most of the depth is constructed right under her arm on the right side of the tag, well mostly by the right side of her entirely. But the right side itself in conjunction with her doesn't have as much depth, which I think would be needed if this kind of contrast is going to work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted August 23, 2014 Report Share Posted August 23, 2014 The monotone definitely ruins this tag. I like the constrasting sides, and it would be cooler is more than just different shades of the same color were implement. Especially on the render. Most of the depth is constructed right under her arm on the right side of the tag, well mostly by the right side of her entirely. But the right side itself in conjunction with her doesn't have as much depth, which I think would be needed if this kind of contrast is going to work.I oddly disagree with this. The monotone's well done in my opinion. I'd only use monotone as a criticism when you just have washes of boring semi-saturated midtones, of which this is not.I'd rather take it from a illustrative perspective. Not much in the way of depth or particularly affecting composition, but it's striking in its execution anyway. Bold colours, text, and the flourishes over the top help.Did Smear do the right side? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted August 23, 2014 Report Share Posted August 23, 2014 I oddly disagree with this. The monotone's well done in my opinion. I'd only use monotone as a criticism when you just have washes of boring semi-saturated midtones, of which this is not. I'd rather take it from a illustrative perspective. Not much in the way of depth or particularly affecting composition, but it's striking in its execution anyway. Bold colours, text, and the flourishes over the top help. Did Smear do the right side? I made the base and then night pretty much made it a new tag haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted August 24, 2014 Report Share Posted August 24, 2014 I disagree with Rai. Monotone isn't executed well. Ratio of different levels is not equal or burstful. I also don't see any reason for the random lines. They make the tag look flat and ruin the composition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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