yer

[Smear]

yer

[Smear]

bump u gays

[.Rai]

Clean up your effects, man. You usually capture some good atmosphere and depth, but you need to trim away all the excess. A lot of the bubble C4Ds obscuring the render should go, especially when they're all screened over each other. Maybe another big solid metallic sphere C4D. Would fill up some of the empty bottom-right.

The grid pattern in the background is a nice touch, but once again, clean up the stuff in front.

[Night]

Clean up your effects, man. You usually capture some good atmosphere and depth, but you need to trim away all the excess. A lot of the bubble C4Ds obscuring the render should go, especially when they're all screened over each other. Maybe another big solid metallic sphere C4D. Would fill up some of the empty bottom-right.

The grid pattern in the background is a nice touch, but once again, clean up the stuff in front.

 

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Also, stop relying on the bubbles so much, it's alright to use them as fx every once in a while but slapping them on in the bg of every tag gets old fairly quick. 

 

And learn to use better fucking renders or at least be smart when going about application. That folder or w.e the fuck he's holding adds nothing to the piece and just looks like shit. Incorporate every aspect of a render/stock, remove what doesn't make sense in the piece. Simple shit.

[Smear]

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Also, stop relying on the bubbles so much, it's alright to use them as fx every once in a while but slapping them on in the bg of every tag gets old fairly quick. 

 

And learn to use better f***ing renders or at least be smart when going about application. That folder or w.e the f*** he's holding adds nothing to the piece and just looks like s***. Incorporate every aspect of a render/stock, remove what doesn't make sense in the piece. Simple s***.

 

 

It was just a tag for my signature, so I didn't really care about repetitiveness and how much sense it made. I didn't rely on bubble for my sotw babe ;)

I know I need to clean up my pieces more, and I'll try on my next one haha. This one was just a quick one for my sig so yeah.

I kinda liked the effect that the c4d gave on the render so I kept it haha.