Card Grammar Help?

[Nazryl]

Hi guys,

 

I'm currently working on a set and would really appreciate some help with the OCG of the cards. I'm a old school player and with being away from the game for almost three years, the new grammar layout is taking some time to get used to. Here is what I have for the card so far: 

 

When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your Hand by a 'Wolf' monster; Decrease the Attack of your opponents Monsters by 500. If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. 

 

Is this correct? I've tried lol

 

Thanks,

 

Nazryl

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

PSCT is a pain in the neck to write sometimes, especially when Konami isn't consistent with how they do it at times. It's confusing, we know

[* yells at Konami for not staying consistent *]

 

For the most part, it appears you've gotten it; just with some small details (I'll try to fix it up, though it may not be perfect).

 

When this card is Summoned: Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your hand by the effect of  a "Wolf" monster: Monsters your opponent controls lose 500 ATK. If you control another 'Wolf' monster, this card can attack your opponent directly.

 

If you need any future help, you can just use the page on the Wikia to guide you: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Problem-Solving_Card_Text