.Rai Posted August 5, 2014 Report Share Posted August 5, 2014 Entry for SOTW #10. Good job, guys. Here's the .psd for anyone who wants to muck about with it: https://www.mediafire.com/?bmcww8ycx09nix3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted August 5, 2014 Report Share Posted August 5, 2014 So dope, holy shit. I was that close to voting for your tag, but the emptiness was too startling. Excellent use of the render, colors were really cool and that classic fucking .Rai smudge whichistillwanttolearnbutcant... really excited that SotW's bringing you back to tagging. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted August 6, 2014 Report Share Posted August 6, 2014 I knew it, I damn knew it was you. That's not the reason I voted it though, it's cause it looks sexy as shit. It's just the blackness was a bit too empty for my tastes, but hot damn smudges are sweet. teach me pls mastah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 6, 2014 Report Share Posted August 6, 2014 Pretty much agree with these guys. I like the smudge and lighting, just seems like more could be done. Perhaps something like more incorporation of the guy into the smudge somehow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted August 6, 2014 Report Share Posted August 6, 2014 In my own opinion (I'm not really good at GFX, so sorry if it sounds amateurish or otherwise bad), I think perhaps maybe some slight galaxy/star sort of stocks or the like could maybe have been added/brushed/etc in. Maybe a slight more smudge, more for just shading looks and to add to the smudging look, rather than for its own focus. Maybe a fractal or a stock added in, I'm not sure C4Ds would fit, maybe, IDEK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted August 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2014 Yeah, opinion generally seems to be that it's incredibly empty. Probably missing an element, although I never really put my finger on it. At the same time, it's probably something to do with the more minimalist art I've been trying out recently; I haven't experimented much with C4Ds and things. Cheers, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted August 7, 2014 Report Share Posted August 7, 2014 the general negative space wasn't even that bad, i love the execution of the emptiness but it was a bit surprising, honestly just needed some extra content to set up and bring out all elements of it. something to break it up a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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