-DG- Posted July 24, 2014 Report Share Posted July 24, 2014 I suck. Stock tag, or at least an attempt at one. http://www.hdwallpapers.in/walls/jennifer_lawrence_2013-wide.jpg V2 V3 (A few more bubbles) V4 (Same as 3 but slightly cooler colors) Let the burning at the stake commence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 24, 2014 Report Share Posted July 24, 2014 I've been out of the 'tag' game for a long time now. I hate to only point out negatives too but points that strike me are the top left, blur on the arm, looks odd. Overall I find the whole image to be fairly 'unfinished' but don't ask me how or why, it doesn't seem to pop out or have that 'explosive' or 'light effects' of other tags. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 25, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2014 I agree. This was a fairly quick work, I'm more of a site designer than a tag maker. This isn't exactly my forte haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted July 25, 2014 Report Share Posted July 25, 2014 That one segment going across the arm disrupts flow a bit. The arm itself actually looks a bit odd, but that's mostly from the original stock. Right side looks pretty good blending wise because of your c4d usage. When you use primarily one c4d across the tag I can see where Liam comes from with the lack of wow factor, but regardless, it's not too shabby. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 25, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2014 V2 tis uploaded, removed the segment on the left and replaced it. Hopefully this looks a bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 25, 2014 Report Share Posted July 25, 2014 v4 definitely has some solid atmo to it. Not much else going for it, but it's appealing. And you're just rusty bro, you should stick around for a while longer though as I'm going to be reviving the Sotw pretty soon. That should help you shake off the rust. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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