Smear Posted July 16, 2014 Report Share Posted July 16, 2014 [spoiler=v1][/spoiler]edit:v2i think it's pretty dope wbu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 16, 2014 Report Share Posted July 16, 2014 Flow's cool, depth's there, lighting's boring, color's are wonky, could have been a lot better tbh. You still aren't cleaning your shit, that c4d to the left makes double focal and disturbs the flow. You're getting there though, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted July 16, 2014 Report Share Posted July 16, 2014 Don't put anything bright or contrasted in the edges, it'll drag the eyes to that place. Keep the brightness, saturation and contrast to your focal point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted July 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2014 Okay, I edited the tag to what you guys said, hopefully it's better.I think it's better imo. Still not great but maybe like good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted July 18, 2014 Report Share Posted July 18, 2014 V2 is dope, getting a lot of the basics nailed down and now I think you need to start experimenting with different styles, move slowly away from the c4d/fractal spam and start really using the rest of the software you use. Look up psds/tuts and see what people who're better do, learn from their execution, ie stuff like lightnings solutions and whatnot. There's always a lot to be learned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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