Tormented Posted June 30, 2014 Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 I haven't posted in a while and I'm like not entirely sure where I was going with this. Tell me what you like, tell me what you hate. edit 1: I feel I should've personally played with the c4ds a bit more, they feel a bit plastered on and not blended well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ire Posted June 30, 2014 Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 Rain falls like that / and like that | at the same time ?? :3 The lighting is quite bad, like the atmosphere. The colors are the worst thing (wth with this C4D ?). Improve your work, Tormey, this is an absolutely crappy creation from you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted June 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 d00d pls, if I'm entirely honest the point of this was to get back into posting. I needed to push something out and just work on something to improve. I think personally I chose a shitty render and thus got stuck doing something that could've gone well but I just rushed doing it. also im tired of you people saying "improve your work" "work on making things cleaner" you fuckers need to tell me how not what to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ire Posted June 30, 2014 Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 also im tired of you people saying "improve your work" "work on making things cleaner" you f***ers need to tell me how not what to do. There is no precise method ... if you want to improve yourself, you practice as much as possible, and you'll learn things. But it is not enough, and that's why you need to look at tutorials and .psd ... In fact, nothing new, just simple and known things to apply. So, Improve your work = more work to do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted June 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 My biggest issue is this past year and half I've like noticed no improvements from myself and it's starting to piss me off, I guess I'll take a step back to when I first started and go back and re-watch some vid tuts, need to re-define the basics. #ventingangerlikeimonaperiod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted June 30, 2014 Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 One rain layer out of the two needs to go. Suffers from 'floating render on a background' syndrome, but partially that's just the impracticality of the background being in the middle of the sea. Colour and lighting. Where's the red coming from? The lighthouse in the distance: use that. He should pretty much be almost entirely in shadow. With dramatic white lighting edging across his face and shield edges. You probably could experiment with the green C4D, but I'd just get rid of it. It's mostly a superficial detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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