First attempt making Black Rose Wallpaper. Feedback is highly appreciated!

[afunworm]

This is my first time making it, and I found it to be very enjoyable!

Please throw in anything you'd like to say. Any feedback is highly welcomed!
 

[Astolfo]

To put it bluntly, it seems pretty bad to me.

No blending at all, and it seems too oversaturated, and the thing with the double or even triple focal doesn't work out well imo.

[afunworm]

To put it bluntly, it seems pretty bad to me.
No blending at all, and it seems too oversaturated, and the thing with the double or even triple focal doesn't work out well imo.

Thanks a lot for the feedback! So what do you suggest?

[Catman25]

gonna have to disagree, for a first attempt I think this is pretty dang good. w/the blurred bg in tandem with the glow of BRD you got some interesting differentiation going on. Since I've never seen a stock/render of Akiza throwing a card, I'm gonna assume you threw that together which is a neat concept. Aura's a bit strong around her, but that could be toned down. She and the card could do with some glow as well, but idk might or might not work. Whole color scheme goes along with Crossroads of Chaos, which is nice.

[RickiMinaj]

gonna have to disagree, for a first attempt I think this is pretty dang good. w/the blurred bg in tandem with the glow of BRD you got some interesting differentiation going on. Since I've never seen a stock/render of Akiza throwing a card, I'm gonna assume you threw that together which is a neat concept. Aura's a bit strong around her, but that could be toned down. She and the card could do with some glow as well, but idk might or might not work. Whole color scheme goes along with Crossroads of Chaos, which is nice.

 

ayyeee, Catman knows what he's saying. In addition to what the meowster above me is saying, try reducing the glow around BRD as well. That's a bit poppy. Not by much though. Moreover, I know you were going for the whole depth thing by blurring the background, but it seems to be all blurred at the same rate. If you want a really good effect, try to apply the blur appropriately based on how far the objects are behind BRD. It takes some time and planning, but it's totally worth it. 

[afunworm]

gonna have to disagree, for a first attempt I think this is pretty dang good. w/the blurred bg in tandem with the glow of BRD you got some interesting differentiation going on. Since I've never seen a stock/render of Akiza throwing a card, I'm gonna assume you threw that together which is a neat concept. Aura's a bit strong around her, but that could be toned down. She and the card could do with some glow as well, but idk might or might not work. Whole color scheme goes along with Crossroads of Chaos, which is nice.

 
Thank you so much for such motivated comments. I cropped Akiza out of one big picture and tried to make the glow to cover the imperfect render cut. I'll definitely try to glow the card as well and see how it turns out. THANKS A LOT!
 

ayyeee, Catman knows what he's saying. In addition to what the meowster above me is saying, try reducing the glow around BRD as well. That's a bit poppy. Not by much though. Moreover, I know you were going for the whole depth thing by blurring the background, but it seems to be all blurred at the same rate. If you want a really good effect, try to apply the blur appropriately based on how far the objects are behind BRD. It takes some time and planning, but it's totally worth it. 

Likewise, thank you so much for the suggestion! Because when I render Black Rose, there are a few imperfect outline cut, so I try to hide it by using Glow effect. Let me try to reduce it. And the blur by distance thingy, why didn't I think of it? Wow! Thanks so much!