Aix Posted May 31, 2014 Report Share Posted May 31, 2014 Art for my RP Fiore. Only the line art thus far, done by hand with a Wacom Bamboo tablet because Pen Tool is for scrubs. I'm really new to this, so my lines are unstable and wobbly, not sure if I'm going to clean it up, probably will for the worst parts, but this is enough to provide a basic outline for when I colour it in... I think. Why is it blue? Because why not. I can change the colour later if I want.[spoiler=People post songs in Decks, so why not in Showcase, idk.]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=buDPPwfs3kk[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted May 31, 2014 Report Share Posted May 31, 2014 Who's the character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted May 31, 2014 Report Share Posted May 31, 2014 I LOVE SUPERCELL WITH UNENDING PASSION! The hair is well done, I think you could touch up and down the face a bit to liven it. Mostly the eyes and posture, I think. Your eyebrows and facial features are very nice until you get to shading and color. Your proportions and body are very anime-esque considering how she looks like she's moving but the cloths are good, not perfect but I can see you're not done. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted May 31, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2014 Who's the character? One of my two OCs I'll be playing. A Mystical Waif named Claire. I LOVE SUPERCELL WITH UNENDING PASSION! The hair is well done, I think you could touch up and down the face a bit to liven it. Mostly the eyes and posture, I think. Your eyebrows and facial features are very nice until you get to shading and color. Your proportions and body are very anime-esque considering how she looks like she's moving but the cloths are good, not perfect but I can see you're not done. I like it. Yeah, cloth is something I'm not very used to drawing. Alright, I'll try to touch up the expression and shift the posture a bit. Thanks for the critique ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted June 1, 2014 Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 Her body seems a bit thin, and is the thing on her right a sleeve? Because it seems a bit thin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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